IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 819

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Many educators today feel pressure to teach to the test and emphasise academic subjects over more practical ones. In my opinion, this

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Over the past decades, environmental problems have never failed to draw public attention and provoke debates. Although the severity and urgency of addressing environmental problems properly are hardly arguable, the issue as to whether governments should deal with these issues with higher price of fuels or not remains controversial. From my own perspective, I consider this approach is ineffective. Firstly, it is important to recognize that although the occurrence of positive outcome towards environment is almost inevitable, the final result may not be as expected for long. Some may hold optimistic attitude that this particular approach would be the effect on limiting the number of cars and thereby reducing the amount of environment-damaging gas emission. This argument could be true to some extent. However, they should take into account the fact that since the cost of public transport would also be affected, resistance in people with the need of travel seems to be inevitabl...

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Over the past decades, environmental problems have never failed to draw public attention and provoke debates. Although the severity and urgency of addressing environmental problems properly are hardly arguable, the issue as to whether governments should deal with these issues with higher price of fuels or not remains controversial. From my own perspective, I consider this approach is ineffective. Firstly, it is important to recognize that although the occurrence of positive outcome towards environment is almost inevitable, the final result may not be as expected for long. Some may hold optimistic attitude that this particular approach would be the effect on limiting the number of cars and thereby reducing the amount of environment-damaging gas emission. This argument could be true to some extent. However, they should take into account the fact that since the cost of public transport would also be affected, resistance in people with the need of travel seems to be inevitabl...

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Over the past decades, environmental problems have never failed to draw public attention and provoke debates. Although the severity and urgency of addressing environmental problems properly are hardly arguable, the issue as to whether governments should deal with these issues with higher price of fuels or not remains controversial. From my own perspective, I consider this approach is ineffective. Firstly, it is important to recognize that although the occurrence of positive outcome towards environment is almost inevitable, the final result may not be as expected for long. Some may hold optimistic attitude that this particular approach would be the effect on limiting the number of cars and thereby reducing the amount of environment-damaging gas emission. This argument could be true to some extent. However, they should take into account the fact that since the cost of public transport would also be affected, resistance in people with the need of travel seems to be inevitabl...

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Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

That the idea of allowing capital punishment had better be generalized to the security of society ought to be taken into consideration with regard to this issue is a debate society without capital punishment wouid seem to be more reasonable. Both points of view, however, will be discussed as follow.

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Some say that young people are not suitable for decision-making positions in governments, others, however disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

We all know that higher the position, greater are the responsibilities and risk associated. Decision-making positions such as Prime Minister, Defence Minister, Defence Head, Chairman of Central Bank etc. are all associated with huge responsibilities and risks. A person in one of these positions should be mature and wise enough to make important decisions. There are few people who believe that young people should not be allowed to take responsibilities of these positions, while others feel contended that age cannot be a constraining factor for such positions. In this essay, we will discuss both of these two points of view and then present a well-critiqued opinion.

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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

There are some arguments about the necessity of travelling; some people agree that travelling abroad is important while others think that instead of travelling, we can stay at home and watch cultural channels to know more that country. In my opinion, these 2 opinions have both specific interesting things, and I cannot say which one is better

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In Recent Years Many Local Shops Have Closed Because Customers Travel To Large Shopping Malls

The positive side is that the customers prefers to buy their house hold items from shopping malls where they get the provision to shop for a wide variety of grocery items such as vegetables, fruits, baked items and so on. There is a expiry date that is provided on each of the goods that are purchased at these stores which help the buyer know that certain products can be used for a week or a certain period of time. The meat, fish and selected products are stored in refrigerators that keep the food fresh for longer. At the shopping centers people benefit from buying other products as well such as clothes,

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Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that possession of money does not guarantee of happiness.I completely agree with the given statement because there are several other factors such as good health and family relations which are responsible to keep a person happy.

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some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people find it convenient to go for friends who share same opinions as them because it is easier to communicate in same language rather than always having to explain the reason behind their thinking. They don’t want to have to go through the pressure of over-explaining themselves which they find irritating.

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In some countries celebrities complain about the way media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as a part of their fame.do you agree or disagree?

I disagree with the view that celebrities have to accept the manner in which their private lives are made public by the media. lt is undeniable that they are in the spotlight and want to be popular by choice. However, their rights to privacy need to be protected as well, as they too are humans. I shall put forth my arguments in this essay. To commence with, celebrities are already under a lot of pressure to perform well, as they are public figures and are always in the public eye. Be it a politician, a sportsperson, a singer or an actor, all these professions require them to be at their best at all times. This stress of someone constantly following them affects the way they perform, which ultimately leads to a loss for the masses. Secondly, these celebs are role models for the people. When any negative side of their private life is exposed, their followers think it glamorous to do the same, which is definitely detrimental for the society as a whole. For example, if people ...

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness.

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Plagiarism in academics has become a pressing problem in many countries today. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?

Ever since the technology came in limelight plagiarism has taken mammoth dimensions which has become a grave issue of concern all over the globe. This essay shall elucidate causative reasons behind this phenomenon along with its plausible measures in ensuing segments.

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Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV, video games and other entertainment for children's leisure. How does this affect the children? How do you think this problem can be tackled

In our present world today, there are various activities, children partake in which includes educational, physical sporting, virtual sporting activities such as gaming and many others that has been observed to contribute some certain degree of changes to their behavioural pattern. In the opinion of some guardians, it is believed that the level of violence portrayed in some gaming, media related devices and entertainment has increased which has risen their level of concerns. There are certain observable behavioural consequences peculiar to kids engaging these violent activities viewed on televisions and other form of media entertainment. Some of the few are stronger desire for violence and blood related activities, encouraging bullying among children who look a lot bigger and stronger among their peers and much more. Many schools and house of worship have in various forms waged war against violence through preaching, music and educating many about the significance o...

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with the problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays obesity or overweight is a major concern amongst most individuals. It is building a lot of pressure on the current health management systems. Some individuals think that the most ideal solution would be to impart lessons such as physical exercise in the curriculum. I completely agree with the idea as the right knowledge at the right age will help them to stay fit and healthy throughout.

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative form of medicine however at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous.to what extent do you agree with this statement.

Nowadays various medicines are being replaced by other medicines in the daily life of people.It is believed that they are not efficient and to some extent they are dangerous too.I partially agree with this statement.This essay will discuss about both views of the statement.

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Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (eg cost, environment). Discuss both view and give your own opinion

Some people argue that spending money on faster forms of public transportation is important as opposed to spending money on other vital aspects . This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion . On the one hand , providing people with faster means of public transportation would bring certain benefits . By adopting this method,those of us especiallly who are commuters , will reduce time for travelling from work and to work . This means that they will have more free time ,and thereby enhancing their productivity at workplace . Additionally , people are less packed in cramped and hot buses . They will not need to rush to arrive at work on time and get up early so as to wait for a bus station . or eventually getting a seat on a bus . On the other hand , a number of reasons lead to the improtance on further investment in other priorities . One of the compelling reasons is environmental problems . Due to an increasing number of personal vehicles , large quantit...

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Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (eg cost, environment). Discuss both view and give your own opinion ?

Some people argue that spending money on faster forms of public transportation is important as opposed to spending money on other vital aspects .This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion . On the one hand ,providing people with faster means of public transportation would bring certain benefits .By adopting this method,those of us especiallly who are commuters ,will reduce time for travelling from work and to work . This means that they will have more free time ,and thereby enhancing their productivity at workplace . Additionally ,people are less packed in cramped and hot buses .They will not need to rush to arrive at work on time and get up early so as to wait for a bus station .or eventually getting a seat on a bus. On the other hand , a number of reasons lead to the improtance on further investment in other priorities .One of the compelling reasons is environmental problems .Due to an increasing number of personal vehicles , large quantities of c...

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Nowadays children watch TV more than they did in the past.Give the reasons and solutions.

In this day and age, most of the children spend their time infront of television.There are plethora of causes behind this phenomenon. This essay will discuss that reasons and will provide the remedies to alleviate this increasing trend. The first and foremost reason, for this is that inthese days parents are become workaholics so they could not give plenty of time to their blooming buddies.Not only this,now families are also converted into single famile...

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Some believe that men and women are equal and so women are able to do any job they want. Others feel that men women are not equal and therefore there certain jobs that are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

Some people are of the notion that men and women are not equal and for that matter, they shouldn't be offered the same job opportunities. Others, however, oppose such view. In my opinion, women and men are not on the same wavelength and as such they shouldn't be granted the same work opportunities like men for various reasons which this essay will throw more light on.