IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 820

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that there is an concern of dangerous sports which is widespread and draw to public attentions, other people believe that these should be banned, although people must not be underestimate its consequence to individual and communities as a whole. I would argue that they should freedom to participate whatever sports that they engage in.

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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

Trend for schools providing accommodation within its campus is burgeoning in recent years. Some people consider it is advantageous to students in many ways. However, some people argue in contrast to this situation. The following essay provides the discussion on both sides of the debate. On one hand, many people vote to stay in boarding schools during their academic term, considering the variety of benefits such as, short distance of travel, immediate access to library and exposure to multicultural society. In addition, studies prove that students staying at school accommodation shows higher success rate in completing their courses than compared to pupils living with their families. Moreover, sharing accommodation with peers helps them to understand each other which in turn develops strong communication skills that are essential in their future job environment. In contrast to above benefits, some argue that students staying far away from families tend to suffer malnutrition...

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online.

It is certainly true that online shopping is becoming an increasingly popular.This type of development is very conveint for indiviuals and helps company to increase their revenue ,but there are some disadvantages of this trend also.

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

It seems that in recent years, teenagers tend to commit felony very often in many nations. The underlying factors for such situations may be numerous for which there are multiple solutions are provided. To begin with the causes for this unfortunate condition, they vary from family background to education system that played a major role during the children brought up. Depending on family economic situation, whether they are economically stable or not, children are prone to violate certain rules in order to meet their daily needs. When it comes to education system, based on how severe punishments they received in schools for their misconduct, students might have ignored the values of being kind and good to fellow humans. In addition to it, some teenagers have tendency to develop certain bad habits like drug abuse under bad influence. Such cases appear in the families where both parents are busy working individuals and there is no one to monitor them. Considering the possi...

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many people prefer to work in the same field for their whole life while some prefer to change the field of work. discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays some people choose to work in one company for years, while others feel better changing their working field briefly. In this essay I will discuss both positions, as each has its own reasons how different people could benefit.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To which extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is universal truth that language is an indispensable part of human being, being changed as the globe is changing every day. Eventually, some languages are dying which have several impacts on the society. Some people prefer using fewer languages while it has both advantages and drawbacks.

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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

These day, there is vast consuption of sugar drinks, is included in uor routine, although everyone know the bad effect of sugar but their neglect causes negative effect on their health and than of others. for example: mone people have few time to prepare meals and and they prefer sometime to go on McDonalds or bars just for take a quick sandwich and big drink. So, another reason beyond time is the addiction it causes. Various studies show the addiction of sugar depends on some companies, because thanks sugar , their companies make more money. This addiction have some health risk and some states like USA belive that putting taxes like alcohol and cigarettes could lower sugar addicts. People need to read the instruction behind drink and choose alternative healt drink primarily for kids.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

With the increased use of social media in the recent years, many people are becoming more concerned about the adverse effect the networking media have has on the indi vidual s and the society. While there are countless of benefits of using social media , like Facebook and Instagram, in my opinion, uncontrolled and excessive use of such media have has its toll on both the individuals and the society. Undoubtedly, the advantages of using social media are many. Firstly, social media have has brought friends and relative s together more than ever before. This is especially true for those who live far away. We can now instantly reach to the dear ones and ge t and share latest updates of each other , even if we are located in the different continent. Secondly, social media provides a positive platform to share knowledge with each other in the community or in an institution. For example, s S tudents can now easily share their notes and ideas w...

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Essay topics: In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures can be taken to prevent this?

The India is the most developed country and the most of the industries are constructed on the edges of the rivers and polluting both of the air and water. Let us discuss the actions which can be taken to prevent these issues.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view.

It is always wrong to put animals in prison. Sometimes, it is good to place them in the chase. I strongly agree with both of the views. Let us discuss the both views in briefs in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is realistically true that, money can't buy you time, peaceful, pleasant, and loving life, but time can bring you all of the things. Every second is the most precious and prime thing to be considered in all and every aspect of an individual's activity. Nowadays, people are mostly under some illusion that according to the job-wise, which is a happier life; a comfortable living free from all of the stress and worries, or having a fame, luxurious car, wealth, huge house and a prosperous career.

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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

A number of environmentalists and specialists are arguing on major environmental calamities. Some claim that extinction of animal species the major problem of this century, while others believe that there are more problems to be concerned of. I reckon that losing animals is considered a crisis that will lead us all to demise, however the world must pay heed to other environmental crises. Advocates of the first opinion believe that the unbalance in ecosystem resulting from death of a vast numbers of animals will have lamentable consequences. With the vanishing of a kind of species, the proportions of others will be changed. For instance, if a type of lions disappeared, its prey namely zebras will rise in number, resulting in overeating of grass. This will have drastic effects on the balance of nature, eventually affecting us negatively in different ways. On the other hand, some scientists think that there are more important problems like global warming. Global w...

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to the closing of all shops in town and cities. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, online chain becomes a most popular, entertainment and rapid method in every countries. In my opinion, I agreed because it has more opportunities to select items which do I need to buy in one place with lots of collection.

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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays,all over the world people share the same fashions,advertisting,brands,eating habits and TV channels.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this?

People from all around the world become closer and closer as they share their countries own fashions, advertisement, brands, habits and TV shows. It could be said that by doing this people are forgetting their origins and cultures. However, this will make people from different cultures able to understand each other more which is more beneficial to everyone from different communities. By following trends different from their countries, these actions can make people neglect their own cultures. The reason is that people often prefer things that are more popular or modern, and they might even criticize their own traditions for being under-developed. For example, because newer generations don’t know their own cultures, schools and teachers have to teach them their own country’s history and emphasize how students should not forget about their origins, cultures and traditions. Following this reason, there will be those who judge and criticize their own country’s way ...

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The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

The environmental problems are so important issue today. From the past, many countries had conferences to discuss it, but it’s been hard to contract an agreement for every country because they need to protect their domestic industry. Therefore, some measures should be taken in micro level and also macro level. In my opinion, government and large organizations must take the leadership to these problems.

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In some area of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Curfew is imposed in some areas of the US to maintain law-and-order and free movement of teenagers at night time is not allowed unless an adult is accompanying them. This essay will examine why younsters should not come out of their homes alone during curfew hours at night?

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An increasing number of people are using the internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think this has brought people closer together. Do you agree or disagree?

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others agree that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including food and research. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons and relevant examples.

The debate over animals should not be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans is all over the world.People are divided into two groups, the first party support that animals shouldn't be used to satisfy human needs and on the other hand others believe that animals should employed to achieve their needs.In my opinion, animals are very important source of food and valuable source for researchs.

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As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibilty towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While business help people to earn a handful of money other than any employment, it's responsibility towards the society is never coming down. I believe, more richer a person is, bigger the responsibility one has. And this essay shall discuss that in detail with relevant examples.

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Why individual differences is a necessity in this era

If individual differences did not exist, every human mannerism would have been built, designed and behaved in the same possible way. According to the study, every individual is has with different perceptions, mindset, sex, personality traits , with the passage of time, when an individual grows up with his / her traits, perceptions, and mindset, nourishes by his / her culture, society, and his / her social economic class. That is how an individual’s personality is being built and makes him/ her different from any other individual. For instance, a person who lives in an urban area will have a different cultural lens and way of perceiving things than a person who lives in rural areas. Moreover, from the phycoligical point of view, there are 4 kind of major differences among the individual that classifies their physical, mental, behavioral perspectives. The following are •Intelligence ( I.Q and E.Q) •Attitudes •Differences in achievement •Differences on account of sex Intelligen...

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