IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 1

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

According to some individuals, music fosters unity among various age groups and traditions. Music is largely accepted as a universal language and it bridges the gap between ages and cultures. I strongly support this stance and will explain further with examples.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that issues of the environment currently is the destruction of some biological plants and animals. Others, however, argue that there are urgent problems of the environment. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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The importance of academic subjects as compared to exrracurricular activities is increasing every day.Some people suggest that sports calsses should be sacrificed in high school so students can cincentrate on academic demic subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a recent ongoing conversation about the academic subjects and extra curricular activities. People have different perception about this matter, while students in high schools, they should give their priority for the college modules than sports activities. I am totally agree with this statement and will discuss in bellow

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Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad.Despite knowing that millions of people engage in unhealthy activites. What is the cause of this? What can be done?

Numerous studies reveal that many people are willing to participate unhealthy activites. This essay will examine the causes of this trend and what remedies we can take.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicine and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

People who go down with illnesses are always encouraged to seek medical care. However, recently a great number of them have developed an interest in seeking healthcare through other means such as herbal remedies and acupuncture instead of visiting the hospital or clinic. This have serious health implications for people and also increases the sum of money they spend on these treatments.

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It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Work Life Balance is crucial in everyone’s life but if someone really wants to achieve something that is not common or never been done, then they should willing to sacrifice their other commitments to the world.

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In many countries, people are becoming increasingly dependent on private cars. What are the main causes of this problem, and what measures can be taken to reduce it?

In certain parts of the world, many people are becoming overreliance on private cars. This essay is going to discuss the primary reason of that phenomenon and suggest viable solution.

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Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they di their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals argue that it must be made compulsory for graduates to work in countries where they were trained whereas others are of the view that, that freedom should be granted for people to work where they prefer. These views will be discussed before an opinion is given.

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1. In some cultures old age is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary era, some people think that old age is more valuable than the youngest generation. Although the former is considered more wiser and follow the traditions, I think that new comers more active to use technologies and have ability to take over the world.

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Does the advantages of this for individuals outweight the disadvatages for the environment?

There is no denying the fact that the developing in cities and its infastructures, year after year, increasing the number of cars' owner. This essay will discuss some of the advantages of this statement for individuals; then shild light on the disadvantages for the environment.

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Some people think that the remain purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extend to do you agree or disagree

Many people think that the remain purpose of school is to turn childern into good citizens and workers , rather to benfit them as individuals. Schools is a safe place for childern, its a place where they feel safe and more like a home .

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many learnes tend to think having an individual time for studying a particular subject might be benefical, rather than, learning it with the groups of people. In my view , both of these approaches seems to be helpful depending on the case of learning.

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Some people think that hosting an international sporting event is beneficial for a country, while others disagree. Do the advantages of hosting a major sporting event outweigh its disadvantages?

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People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Today's people are experiencing more pleasant life span than humans in past

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research,business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a debate over that information ought be shared with others, with some saying that it needs to be saved as secret, and others arguing it should be public. While some information should be kept as not public. In my opinion, it should be free, as it is much better when it is used for educational reasons.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Competition is something that we could not hinder from our life. In every stage of life, people will face a competition, not only compete with one another, but also with ourselves. In my opinion, ambition was one of many aspects that keep motivates a person to grow and go further in life, which acquired during competing. However, when it comes to competitiveness, there were a healthy and a toxic one.

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Some people think it is more important to develop a successful career while ‎others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. ‎Discuss both sides and give your opinion.‎

Nowadays, some individuals believe that career development is important to gain a wealthy life, while others argued that family and relative are important to obtain a peaceful life. In this Essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and give my personal opinions.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Perhaps, electric payments will completely replace cash in a forseeable future. I agree with this will occur soon, but someone may not appreciate this change because collecting cash as their habits.

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Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages, therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that computers has develop in recent years in speed and accourate translate languages. While it is a commonly held belief that learning foreign language these days is time wasting with computers has a great translate languages, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider to disagree the view that see a learn languages is waste of time becosue that learning foreign languages has many benefits rather then computers translate.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

It is believed that in the future world many people might not be able to pay using cash, while the only way for payments things in shops will be made by cridt card of phone. From my prespective, I frimly believe that is not going to happen soon, and some people may be unhappy to deal with card instad of cash.

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