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Some children can learn efficiently by watching Tv. Therefore, they should be encouraged to watch Tv both at home and at school To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays some juveniles have an opportunity to learn effectively by watching TV. They should, therefore, be motivated to watch TV both at home and at school. I partially agree with this opinion as watching TV programs can be both positive and negative.
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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificial robots. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.

Techonlogy became very common nowadays. It helps people in many ways , so the life become more easier than the past. Certain people argue that machine can be replaced by human in many careers. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement partly. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion about the topic.
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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most of the people tend to be friends with someone who shares the same views as them because they can easily relate their ideas. Whereas some do the contradict in the sake of seeing the topics from the different perspectives. Both of them have its own benefits and drawbacks which we will discuss in this essay.
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some unvierstities now offer their courses on the internet so that people can study online . Is this a positive or negative development ?

In recent years, offer online course in universities has become increasingly relveant. It brings some positive development for university students, but also accompanied by numerous drawbacks. I believed that online course brings negative development siginficiantly. In this essay, I will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of online courses, and explain why I agree with it's negative development.
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some people believe that taxing is best way to reduce the industrial pollution.While some suggest there are several other ways to solve this trouble. Discuss both the views and give you opinion.

It is believed that the industrial pollution is being affect everyone in the world. As the citizen in the world, it is time for us to change the situation recently, otherwise, it may probably cause unbelieveable consequences. Therefore, some people may think that taxing is the best way to reduce the industrial pollution, while there are several ways to solve the trouble, like raising people environmnental awareness. I personally believed that the latter one is more effective, and it is solved the problem from the roots.
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Some people agree with spending lots money on a large wedding, while other think a small wedding is a better option. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that a wedding party is an amazing festival. While it is a commonly held belief that people spend a lot of money on a massive wedding,there is also an argument that it is better to replace it with a smaller one.This essay will analyse the topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Task2

In today’s world knowing more than two languages became very common. Before 20’s most of people weren’t able to speak a different language from their mother tongue. However, with a fast involve of technology and the social media that entered our lives changed the way of communication as well as the variety of languages that we use.
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Q. Air pollution is currently a big issue in most industrialized cities causing respiratory problems and changes in weather patterns. What do you think are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce air pollution?

Today, due to the global industrialization advancement in the technical field, the world is suffering from the consequences of pollution and its adverse impacts on health and weather. Air deterioration is one of the biggest threats of them all. In this paragraphs, I will state some of the reasons and the remedies to these.
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In many countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from poor sleep quality. What are the main problems caused by this trend, and what solutions can be suggested to improve it?

In certain parts of the world, there has been an increasing number of people who are suffering from having adequate sleep hours during the day.
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Having more international sporting events (such as the Olympic Games) may promote world peace. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that international sporting events, such as the Olympic Games, can help create world peace. I agree to a large extent, although their influence is limited.
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in some parts of the world, traditional festivals have disappeared or disappearing, what problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

In my opinion, traditional festivals , which could be the most important symbol of holidays in certain countries
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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people’s lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the important role play a fashion trends on how people choose their clothes. This essay will argue how fashion affects people's lives and it bring a positive or negative development.  The main reason why it is has a strong influence is social meadia and fashion influencers. Also, it is a best way to express yourself via clothes. There are several reasons which development it brings.
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Some people argue that the most effective way to improve public health is to increase the number of sports facilities. Others, however, believe that this has little effect and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an opinion some people argue that the most useful way to improve public health is to increase the number of sports facilities, others think that this has less effect and that other measures are required. Personally, I disagree with this opinion because of some reasons.
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Some people think that children should be taught at school how to become good parents. Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely acknowledged that the education for the children should start at home. Alghought, some parent that no received the education when they were younger. I strongly agree that children receive the education in tha school for that reason.
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Fast food is a part of life in many places and as a result, this leads to bad effects in lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree?

There is a perspective that fast food has become popular , and it causes a negative impact on our lives. I strongly agree with this opinion.
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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg Dinosours, dodos) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

This is widely acknowledged that preserving animal is useless because of the natural causes. I disagree with that statement and preventing animal which are rare is important for future life.
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Although modern life has brought with it improvements in people's standard of living, people are not generally happy with their lives. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, from my point of view, the high standard in life not necessarily reflect the real happiness in real life. We believed that as soon as we give a good position in the standard in our life , we can do anything, but in the end, this is not really true. For that reason I not agree.
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More and more people prefer to read e-book rather than paper books. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause for libraries?

Today, as the development of technology, people tend to read e-book instead of paper books, which is becoming a concerned topic. While reading e-book rather than paper books does have certain advantages, it would also bring up some following issues. This essay will focus on the reasons behind this phenomenonand specifically analize the problems that can be taken place on libraries.
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that the best way to improve the health of the population is to rise the number of places, where sports can be practiced. Others say that the expected effect of that would be minimal, and other strategies should be implemented. Although we’re not sure if sport facilities would be used, and thus, lower the effect of this strategy, I believe that the final impact of sport on obesity, and global healthcare would be far greater than any other measure.
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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

Some people would argue that undergraduate students may study the subject they like, while others say that students should be enabled to study only essential subjects related to technology or science. This essay believes that although learning computer science or medicine would help improve some aspect of our daily life, restricting students to learn only few subjects would be against their freedom.
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