IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 1

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Governments should spend money on public transportation rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been a concern that the state should utilize its finances on improving public means of transport and not the roads. This essay will disagree with it because better roads reduce maintenance cost and promotes safety for all passengers.

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In many countries nowadays,consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, various food from all over the world is presented on shelf in supermarket to appeal people. In my opinion, I believe this trend is a positive development for people’s life and countries’ economy.

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The quality of healthcare a person received should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of health level of health care for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Healthcare is a most fundamental basic need in the country. I thoroughly believe, people should not depend on individual payment way to access healthcare facilities. Specially for senior citizens and children in the society. I agree governement must provide the advanced healthcare system to all citizens with free access.

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Most scientific and inventions and discoveries are worthless and only waste time and money resources. To what extend do you agree or disagree?give your own opinion

In the modern era, people cannot refused the discoveries and inventions, which have done a few decades ago. Gadgets and machines are developed with the help of inventions. This eassy will give clarity with the necessary supporting details in the upcoming paragraph.

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The research shows that criminals have a low education level.Because of this, some people think that education in prisons could help them to get a job when they leave prisons. What extent you agree or disagree?

The research provided people with a data, which relieved the poor education level in the majority of offenders, resulting a debate whether prisoners should be educated during their time in prison to give another chance to them to live with ordinary life and get a job or not. I partly agree with teaching of inmates. While it can deviate them into a life of normal people, it can also expand their knowledge, which may lead to more complex plans of crimes. More detailed explanations will be in the following paragraphs.

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The use of artificial intelligence in daily life is increasing rapidly. Do the advantages of artificial intelligence outweigh the disadvantages?

It's no doubt that AI has became the hit nowadays. I hear people talking about this topic anywhere anytime and this teconology transfoms people's life deeply. So I think the advantages of artificial intelligence outweighs the drawback.

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Many people leave their home country and go to other countries to live and work. Why do you think it is happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays, multiple individuals are leaving their nations and moving to other countries instead to have better jobs and lives. In this essay, I will argue the causes behind this trend and illustrate if the benefits outwiegh the drawbacks.

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Topic: Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that women should focus more on parenting and raising children than men. While some experts on this matter argue that prior mission of women is childcare, others believe that it is much better for them to focus on working routine. This essay totally agrees with the former positon, since it comes with certain merits for both: mothers and children.

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Some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education plays an important role for the overall development of human beings. Some dissenting voices believe that Institutions should consider equal numbers of male and female students for every course. Nevertheless, I totally agree with this view point because it provides equal stands for education as well as foster the carrier opportunity for both of them. Therefore, this essay will shed light on my stands points with reason and example.

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Women Make Better Parents than Men and That Is Why They Have the Greater Role in Raising Children in Most Societies

Raising a child is the responsibility of both the father and the mother. Therefore, arguing about which gender is better at parenting is, in my opinion, inappropriate.

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With the rise of remote work, companies are increasingly adopting global hiring practices, employing individuals from diverse cultural backgrounds regardless of location. What are the advantages and disadvantages of globally distributed workforces, and to what extent do you believe this trend will reshape the traditional workplace?

The changes of tradition of companies' situations, the extent of remote work and hiring employees from different regions employing individuals from diverse cultural backgrounds regardless of area. In my opinion, I write about the advantages and disadvantages the statement due to several specific each of which is to be explained in detail in the following essay.

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Some people think the government should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyles of individuals. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.( Health)

There is an ongoing debate regarding people healthy lifestyles. Some individuals believe that the officails should manage the lifestyles health of members. However, others claim that it should be done by people. Therefore, ahead of my opinion, the bathe both the views will be discussed further.

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some contries have introduced laws to limit working hours for emplyoees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development

Several countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. For some countries, many worker choose to work hard to achieve their dream, however many worker did not realized that sometimes is not good for their psyhcis, mental, or their family it-self.

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In many countries, men and women are working full time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued in different culture of countries that both of sex of people have job, that starts at 9 a.m and finish at 6 p.m which that mean they do work all possible working times. However, it is natural for ladies and men divide the houseworks between themselves . As far as I am concerned, I am totally agree to this argument, and the reasons will be thoroughly explained as follows.

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Some people believe teachers should have the final say about children’s education, while others believe parents should make these decisions. Discuss both sides.

Many people think that teachers should have played the leading part in the kids' education, However, some people argue that parents should be responsible for children's education.This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting a balanced view.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and shouldbe outlawed.However,others believe that important scientific discoveriescan be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified?Are there any alternatives?

The disscussion for whether the expertimentation on animals is neccessary,ethical or not has been there for many decades.Contray to the opinion that the experimentation on animals can be justified,I tend to believe that it can not be,and there are not other alternatives.

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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign languge. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is a debate in which an important amount of people belive that a different language should only be learned when the purpuse is travel or work, some others believe that those reasons are not the only valid ones. This essay will discuss both opinions and will argued why there is more valid reasons to learn a new language.

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Some people think that technology makes life easier, while others believe it makes life more complicated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that technology has made life easier, while others think that technology has made life more difficult. This essay will discuss both views and present a personal viewpoint.

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Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language, because some students don't have a natural ability for languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people argue that schools should not have to make children learn second or third languages because of lacking ability to learn naturally. I reckon that children should always be under the influence, excessive freedom can make them lazy and unsuccessful. I partially disagree with that statement because and this essay will explore my views.

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Some people think that modern technology is making people more social, while others think that it is making them less social. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Modern technology is rising nowadays ans is the most important thing in people life. Some of the people thing that modern technology is making the people more social, but others think that that is affcting thier socail life. This essay will discuss the both opinion about the modern technology making people more or less social and then will show the essay side.

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