IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 1

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate how Porth Harbour has changed since 2000 and show what new buildings have been built in the harbour.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Worldwide buyers in many countries can go to a glocery and purchase for their food produced at the present. This essay completely agree that this is a very beneficial development and my opinion will be provided.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is more important to some people. Why might be this case? Do you think it is a positive or negative situartion?

Individuals sometimes like to rent an apartment, because it cheap and they are a few. However, they didn't have money to buy one, and that make purchase not affordable for them. I think it totally depends on people's wealth. I don't think someone rich can rent a house and be under the owner mercy. In this essay, I will discuss this topic in detail, and I will give my own opinion.

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Taking risks in both professional and personal life is important. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

First of all, there are some views taking risks in professional fields and personal life is consider biovital. In this essay we will disscuss deeply about the benefits and the disadvantages.

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iIn many countries around the world, life expectancyis increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

Life expectancy has increased nowadays . I agree that the expectation of life has both advantages and disadvantages . Add to that countries have the same life expectancy as each other. Beyond that, it shows that health improvements are happening everywhere .

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Some people believe that a significant difference between a parent’s age and their child's age is a good thing. Do you think the advantages of a significant age gap outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern era, So many peoples believe that age gap between parents and their children is good for their life, while some of believe that it will complex the relationship. however, this essay will prove pros and cons of this.

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The news media have become more influential in people’s lives, some people think it’s a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that news media has a negative impact on people's lives.I completely disagree with this perspective. This essay will discuss why digital media plays a significant role in society.

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

In recent years, the issue of health problems from modern life has sparked considerable debate. While some people believe that we should use traditional medicine to fix these problems, I strongly agree with this view because natural medicine has no side effects and it helps us live a healthier life.

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Some people think that public health is a the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your

In today's globalized world, the issue of public health has become increasingly prevalent. It is a subject of heated debate, with some individuals emphasizing the role of the government, while others highlight personal responsibility. This essay will explore both perspectives before presenting my own viewpoint.

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Some people believe that children at secondary school should be streamed, i.e. taught in classes according to ability, rather than being taught in mixed-ability classes. Do you think the advantages of streaming children at secondary school outweigh the disadvantages?

While streaming children at secondary school have some drawbacks, I firmly believe that its benefits far outweigh the negatives.

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In some parts of the world people try to find out one's own family history. Why do people do this? Do you think it is a positive or negative? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The trend of discovering the family's history is in a great increase over the world. This essay will discuss that curiosity is the engine beyond this trend, and from my perspective this is a positive development because the amount of knowledge will be followed by these actions is incridible.

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Some people think that children should learn to design and make things in school. Others believe that there are better things to learn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different thoughts about teaching creative skills, enabling children to design and produce items, in schools as some are in the favour of this whilist others insist on utilising this time for other core subjects. In my opinion, designing and creating items should be part of the school curricular activities but in a balanced way.

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In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered as ‘role models’ and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development?

In many parts of the world, a number of celebrities are considered role models and they are having an increasing influence on young individuals. Having considered both views, i think there are both good and bad sides to celebrities becoming role models.

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Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society (such as scientists or teachers) are the most successful. 🔸Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals think that people with high salaries are more successful than others, while others believe that smart people are successful. From my point of view smart people are just not successful in life but also lucky because god give them abilitiy to understand different scientific things.

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many animal species are becoming endangered or extinct due to human activities. Some people believe that we should spend large amounts of money to protect these animals, while others think this money should be spent on solving problems facing humans. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, there is an ongoing debate regarding many animal species are becoming endangered or extinct as a result of human activities. A group of individuals believes that spending a large amount of money to ensure these animals is waiting money. However, others argue that funds should instead be used to address urgent human problems. Therefore, ahead of my opinion, both the views will be discussed further.

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Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientist in today’s world. Do you agree or disagree?

Its argued that entertainers are significantly important than experts in today's world. I firmly disagree with the statment and I will clear up my reasons in the essay.

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r ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true do you think this statement is? what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Nowadays individuals have used and buy cars. That what increases the traffic jam in the big cities. Actually riches people who causes this the most, because they have several cars and other vehicles. And government should instruct them by publish lost of adds and try to force them to use the metro. In this essay, I will discuss this topic in detail and I will give some solutions.

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With advancements in artificial intelligence, robots are increasingly capable of performing tasks previously done by humans. Some believe this will lead to mass unemployment and social unrest, while others argue it will create new opportunities and improve our quality of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

First of all, there is no doubt of importance of Artificial intelligence, ecpesially the last few years. We will discuss two views, first the modren technology will lead to unemployment state, on the other hand there are many aurguement that may create new opportunities and improbe the quality of the world.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vechiles will be passengers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the coming years, the majority of people will use vehicles without a driver, and the individuals inside them will be passengers. This essay will argue that despite the imminent threat behind these cars, buses, and trucks, there are many advantages, such as saving time and comfort.

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Some people believe that advertisements are amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they sthop. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, we can see many advertisements everywhere, such as in shops and on the internet. Some people think that advertisements are annoying, so they ignore them and are not influenced when they shop. I strongly agree with this opinion because too many advertisements have a negative effect on our lives.

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