IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 1

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that starting school at an earlier age is very beneficial for children,while others believe that children must stay home and attend to school at the age of 7. In your opinion, what are the advantages of attending school before the age of 7

Quite a number of people have an belief that sending children to school in their small age is good for them where as others thinks that babies stay home untill 7 years. The question that arisses here is - advantages of attending schools before seven. I will discuss my opinion in the forthcoming paragraph with relevant illustraions.

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The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life city dwellers be maintain?

Encouraging people to live in cities to solve the traffic and transportation problem is better than living in suburbs or coutryside.There is a main effect of the rapid population growth in the city which is pollution, and the quality of the life city can be maintained by reducing the number of transportation.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in findingout about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In recent years, there has been a growing interested in finding about the history of their a ccommidations or building they live in . this essay will present the main causes behind this notion .I firmaly believe that interesting in houses,s history is a quite common in many countries and it is has more immedate and meaningful to impact on citisizen ,well-benig .

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers- based on technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Computers are making people dependent on them due to their technology. I think, in future computers will take place of teachers due to AI innovation. But it is not good for us to become more dependent on computer because it will take moral values of man.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large outdoor parks and squares. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is often of people says, that all tows or cities must have a large outdoor parks. However, some individuals says that is not important at all. Therefore writer will talk about what advantage and disadvantage from this topic.

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Nowadays a lot of teenagers are inspired by famous people, even though they set a bad example to young generation with bad actions. This is a positive or negative development ?

In the current century, there are a lot of youngsters who inspire with different famous tv stars, singers, and influencers, notwithstanding that they set not the best, or even a bad example. Although this trend may have some benefits, thus drawbacks its largely negative development due to its huge influence to teenagers with bad actions.

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An increasing number of children are overweight which could result in term of their health and healthcare. What do you think why so many children are overweight. What is to be done to solve this problem

A lot of children suffer from obesity which could result in term of their health and healthcare. I believe one of the reasons children are overweight is that they spend so many hours sitting down playing with electrical devices and one possible solution is to set limit time to use cellphones and they need to start doing any physical activity daily.

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Online education is better than traditional classroom learning.

Nowadays, the education plays a significant rolr in sociteys. Many people think the online education is make biger develpment than traditional education. This essay will argue that study by useing technology it is the most thing we should foucse currently.

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Many people believe that some zoos have no purpose in todays world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

Mostly folks think that nowadays there is no need of zoos and it should be banned and replace it with those things which help people mental and physical growth. Zoos are becoming more common at this time. This essay will examin the problem and the solution of this phenomenon.

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it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what soft of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is essential for the young generation to learn the variety between correct and mistake at an early age. Punishment is important to teach them to learn this distinction. Personally, I partially agree with this view, in further below some arguments will be provided.

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Many doctors recommend that old people exercise regularly, but patients do not follow an exercise routine. why do you think this happen ? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly ?

In the modern world, many doctors recommend that old people need to exercise regularly, but they struggle to follow an excersie routine. In this essay, an attempt will be made to examine the reasons about this phenomenon and I will suggest the way to encourage the elderly to excersie regulary.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people feel that cities should allow spaces for art and graffiti, while other say that it should be banned.

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ageing population create benefits to business, economy and society. Some others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, the number of population accounted to be increasing. Furthermore, it is dominated by aged 50 and above. Some might say that this huge number of elderly bring great benefits to the business, the economy, and community of a city. In my opinion, this phenomenon creates more advantages than drawbacks.

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In the past most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantage and disadvantage of living in a small community?

However now people living mostly in large urban cities, some time ago, small rural villages were very common in many countries. Both variation of areas have a drawbacks and a positive aspects, while I believe that a benefits of the small communities overweigh negetive part.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opini

Advertising has been a topic of debate in today's modern world. Some argue that advertisings are convinceing individuals to purchase things, while others believe that they are not influence people's attitudes. This essey will outiline the reasons for two views, and explain why advertisements have played a successful role to motivate communities to be consumerism.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is well known that in our overconsuming world obesity had become an ubiquitous problem. A group of people believe that limiting access to high-calorie fatty food by making its price bigger, can be solution for overweight groups in society. Even though idea is interesting, i think that big numbers on a scale caused by absolutely different things, and not the price.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps provide key information about the site of an airport in present and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays employees usually get little or no exercise either while working days or in their private times and this leads to health issues. I believe that, the strict working hours prevent workers of doing enought physical activities. In order to solve this problem, the office environment may be converted into a outdore location with huge spaces to workout.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The question of whether the internet dominates newspapers and it is making them obsolete remains controversial. While some believe that due to technological advancement of the internet, newspapers are not being used nowadays, others contend that it is not. This essay partially agrees with the perspective that the internet is being used to obtain the news of current affairs. Proponents emphasise that the internet access is across the globe and it is spotless to find a place without it, including remote areas. Unlike olden days, almost every household has the internet and tech gadgets such as smart phones, home computers and tablets. To substantiate this view, electronic newspapers are available at free of cost and people have access to diverse companies’ news articles. Furthermore, streamlining live news on the mobile phones are promptly available through mobile apps and various social media platforms instead the newspaper will have one day delayed news. On the other hand, it is cont...

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Not enough student around the world choose to study science subjects at the university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society? Give your reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Im recent years , students who enter cience subjucts at university are less than befor, there are lagoical reasons behined this trend .In this essay will discuss the most reasons can caueses to these choces and some exambles .

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