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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Teaching children what is wrong or right is not always easy, in fact there are many ways to do it and depends of the father or tutor which takes that responsibility. Some of them prefer teaching with punishment but others just feel that is not a good way to learn.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make their decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The concept of children nowadays taking their own decisions is a source of much debate. It is commonly believed by some people that permitting them to make decision of their choice will consequently contribute in building a society wherein children will be selfish,others however claim that it is a matter of much importance as they should be allowed to make their own choice in matters affecting them. This essay will discuss both sides and explain why it is important to allow them to do so.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When raising a kid, the child's education is considered by many parents to be one of the most essential aspect. However, there has been some debates recently regarding who is more competent at teaching children. Personally, I think that while parents certainly have the most influence on their children's life, they might not be the best at teaching their children essential skills such as reading and writing.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that the balance between the number of female and male students should be maintained in all degree courses in universities. However, I do not agree with this idea.

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At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people.

It is well known that developing countries have large population of young adults and developed countries do not, instead old people is greater on developed countries. This represents challenges to the governments and the economic system such as healthcare, welfare programs and long term objectives.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads

One of the most concerning issues to the governments today is to secure free mobility to the civilians while being cost effective, covering a great area of population, having the less impact on the environment and guarantee the use of infrastructure available to the private and public sectors without having to pay high toll fees.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement ?

In present times, technology is getting more and more advanced. Education system is also updating with feniminas gizmos, same the other side book reading is an boaring activity for children. In present time television is also a way of learning; however, other people think that television cannot take a place of book for learning, and that is a reason why childern have less - educated nowadays. I believe that the book is more essential way of learning rather then television, so I partially agree this statement; and reasons of my inclination are elaborated in trailed paragraphs.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortages of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some people think that being unhappy in job and having less money is great way to accept the bad situations. While others assert it is best way to learn and resolve that situations. In my opinion people never give up in those situations but i will discuss both views.

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the chats below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts illustrate the data about the ages of two countries, more specifically of Italy and Yemen in two different periods, in 2000 and 2050.

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The line graph displays information on the number of armed robberies, assaults, and murders committed in London from 2003 until 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph displays information on the number of armed robberies, assaults, and murders committed in London from 2003 until 2010.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

Artificial intelligent robots playing crucial roles in current globalisation, some people think that some occupation is done by robots.while some jobs are possible to done by robots, unlikely few occupations human interaction with the robot is essential.This essay will discuss why eventually only few jobs will be done by a bunch of people.

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An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are living their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with these problems?

Migrating to developed nations for economic reasons have become increasingly popular in recent times. There is a steady increase in the movement of education and health practitioners from third world nations to more economically advanced countries. This essay will discuss issues caused by this type of migration and also proffer ways to solve these anomalies.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,the money given to the workers in compensation of their labour constitutes the high wage/salary for a certain group.However,it is argued by some that it works in favour of country,while others are of the opinion that its boundaries should be in a direct concern of government representatives,which will have imposed some restrictions over the salary from the equilibrium point .this essay will delve into the both sides ,and my personal opinion about this issue

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Today more and more people are travelling than before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

In today's time, the tourism is escalate significantly. To understand varies traditional and cultural outside the border security which is more flexible nowadays. I will explain the merits of travelling around the world and discuss what are the reason for travelling.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.

The difference between the salaries of people in a country creates a gap in society. As the amount of difference increases this gap also increases which makes the country unstable. This is the main cause of crimes in the country.

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Government should provide free public Transportation facilities 24/7 to reduce traffic congestion. To what extent do you agree or Disagree

The topic of traffic congestion is a very important concern for society at the moment. The way that providing free public transportation contributes to reduce traffic congestion is one of alternatives.

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Some people think government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but the argue that it should be decided by individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many people believe that the government is responsible for implementing ways to improve healthy lifestyle of individual .while other think that leading healthy lifestyle is an individuals personal choice . I will discuss both views both views in following pargraphs along with my opinion To embark with,there are many ways the government can do to promote healthy lifestyle to individuals .Fristly,in the modern era,mo...

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Today's people are living in techno-savvy world. Things are getting change significantly with the help of technology. However, the technology could make easier and convenient life, but It couldn't replace traditional or cultural aspects in every corner of this world. The traditional techniques are more practical and realistic in present time.

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. •studying on your own •taking lessons with a private tutor •taking lessons as part of a class •taking lessons online •going to live in a country where the language is spoken

The world we live in is more connected than ever. Learning how to speak a foreign language has become an increasingly important skill for those who conducts business outside of their own country. While there are many ways to learn a new language, some are certainly more effective than others. The essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of some of the most common technics of learning a new language. Although accessible to many, self-studying or taking lessons online have many disadvantage for those who are seeking to learn a new language. There is very little feedback for those who are trying to learn a language. It is also almost impossible to practice essential oral skills such as pronunciation in an individual setting. Taking lessons as part of a class, however, is accessible for all who wishes to study a new language, and provides excellent feedback from the teachers and the peers. Although the teacher might not be able to provide enough individual atte...

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Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem. However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase.

Illiteracy has not been a problem for most western countries ever since the spread of the public education system. It has traditionally been viewed as a problem for countries with limited resources to create a competent education system. However, in recent years, illiteracy has been rising in developed countries such as the United States and Australia. The following essay will examine some plausible causes, such as lack of funding and rise of poverty, and discuss some of its possible consequences on society. One possible explanation for the rise of illiteracy is the lack of funding. Without proper funding, it is impossible to give every students a competent education. It is known that in some parts of the US, educational systems are underfunded. If schools do not have enough resources to properly educate every student, the quality of education students receive will be dramatically decreased. Another possible explanation if the rise of poverty in cities. Some pare...

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