IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 825

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros than cons?

Machines in today's world are complex in terms of structure or its working. The intrduction of automation of daily works through machine has both advantages and disadvantages.In my opinion it is more of a disadvantage because despite it has the power of getting complex work done easily using machines (i.e automation) it can also be noteworthy that it can bring down the need of man power that are required in getting those jobs done.

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children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However television cannot replace the book as learning tool, which is why are less well educated today. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays children are getting poor education due to the frequent habits of watching television. At any cost , television will not replace book.Eventhough television is incorporated with various knowledgable programs its not sufficient to gain knowledge compared to book .That is why I agree to the above mentioned reasons.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

One of the factors that affect people’s lifestyle and the size of the savings they accumulate over the years is abode. To maintain the stability of those, many people would rather rent their houses instead of purchasing them. This prevalent trend would create certain benefits but there are also some drawbacks.

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Research indicates that the characteristic we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Nowadays, human psychology and mental development are considered to be utterly affected by genetic science. Due to massive progressions made in science departments, scientists are able to understand the importance of inherited genes more than before. However, I strongly believe that a person is more changed but their life experience rather than by characteristic traits.

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Do you think teachers should be evaluated by students.

Teachers are nation builder due to this they evaluate to the pupils so that they can become better citizens for the country. However, it is a reverse trend that students should be an opportunity to provide feedback about their tutors. I disagree with the argument and this essay will discuss my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The world of work is rapidly changing and the employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Why is the case? Can you suggest some ways to prepare people to work in the future?

The worldwide occupation is changing at a rapid speech and employees are not reliable on the similar work or the constant working conditions for the whole life. The reasons behind this case will be outlined in the following essay and giving some suggestions for people to be ready for their careers in the long run.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

It is true, that the number of games and toys available in stores are endless. Some parents let their offsprings to own a great number of it, which can have both positive and negative effects.

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State with you consider to be the most effective: -Comics -Books -Radio -Television -Film -Theatre

Every day, there are many ways to communicate a menssage, this can get to us for all our senses. For example, if we watch TV, we use the eyes, for Radio, we use ear, and for books we use our eyes, smells, and imagination. For this reason I think that the menssage that book want to express, it stay with us for more time, because is more deep.

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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

The advances in technology have made the vast impact on every kind of field and of course agriculture also no longer remains out of the circle.Scientists have invented very productive and quality hybrid seeds , they even have invented latest technology that speeds up and save a lot of time for farmers.

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Nowadays, the older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. what problems does this cause and what are the solutions.

Economy is backborn for the country development. Nowadays, The economy is formost reason and also a needs to live for each and every person. Because, In the present scenario older people who need employment have to compete with younger people who has just graduate from the universities. So, I suggest below some causes and solutions.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

Technology has invaded our modern life style. using computers becomes essential for us. They used in several fields like hospital, crime investigation and in Airports. This using will be increased by the time and affect our future positively.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

It is clear that the recent debate on whether parents should allow children to Learn a foreign language early or not does not seem to come to an end anytime soon. Although this suggestion does have some certain drawbacks, its advantages will Outweigh. Some people believe that learning new languages in primary education carry Some major implications. First, if children expose a foreign language, there will be a Confusion with their first language. This means that at primary school, children learn Literacy in mother tongue and coincidentally, learning a new language while they have Not being professional in the previous one will confuse them with an array of Vocabularies and grammars, which might lead to linguistic misunderstanding. Second, by beginning learning a foreign language at the age of six to seven, it will Delay in the development of the child’s mother tongue. For example, one child who is Practicing and improving language skills in one language is crammed with s...

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Libraries are obsolete these days. so universities should follow digital media. What is your opinion? Discuss advantages and disadvantages?

Library is the collection of numerous books of different categories. A teacher can't teach the entire subject in the classrom, students need to refer textbooks and many reference books to procure the knowledge. Nowadays, technology plays a significant role so that, majority of the masses prefer to read in smart mobiles, laptops, computers, tablets and other smart gadgets. According to me, I opine universites , schools and colleges to utilise the internet and digital media along with the libraries. The following subsequent paragraphs will give a better insight into pros and cons of this topic. Instead of carrying plenty of physical copies of books, it is obsolutly pramatic to maintain a single weightless gadget which fits in our pocket. All those books which are available in library , can be accessed from any part of the world through our mobile, if there is an internet connection. Moreover , size of pdf file and word file is less when compared to other audio and video fi...

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years. govemment focuse on improving qualitity of life, that would bring a lot benifits for citizens. Such as. communication, transprotation, health care. Some arguement that built railways is more useful for local people than roads. In my opinion, it is good idea that more train station is built. There are some reasons.

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Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

I definitely agree that the pros of maternity leave outweigh the cons. A number of arguments support my oprnron

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If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished? State your answer and give your reasons. OR If a five year old commits a crime, should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of a child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child’s behavior?

It is an ongoing debate that parents are responsible for the misdeeds of a child or not. I believe that if youngsters commit a crime, their guardians should be blamed and they should be punished. An elaboration of my viewpoint with a relevant examples and reasons has been justified in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that it is good idea to express their point of view and ideas through social media however other believe opposite do you agree or disagree

One of the most distinct quality which actually differentiates the humans from animals is their ability to communicate with their fellows. Although other species do communicate through different sounds and signals, but none of them use any language for communication, which is the most effective and efficient way of communication. Since ages, communication is divided into two classes know as written communication and the verbal communication but the medium we used to transmit our ideas and view point, are still evolving with time.

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More and more people are allowing their children to play on computer and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In this fast changing mordern era, technology upgrade day by day and people of each age-group are using many devices. The numerous parents are encourage their kinds to play computer games because they believe with the help of this, they can develop technology skills. I would like to put shine on merits and demerits of playing on computer in subsquently paragraphs.

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It is sometimes said that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. Do you agree?

Job is essential to all to survive in this world.People always search for job which depends on the wages.Most people agree that high salary is highlight for selecting a job.

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Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree

It is often believe that working from home has numerous prones while it is part or full time.where other people are not agree with this.

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