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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People change their way of life. Recently, people spend their daily life with gadget rather than talk to each other personally. In this essay I am going to discuss the reasons why people use interact online and whether it advantage or disadvantage.

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Nowadays, the mobile phone plays a major role in our lives, which brings many benefits to us but also contains some drawbacks. Both these sides will discussed in this essay.

Generally, the mobile phone will certainly bring about a lot of advantages. First of all, the mobile phone is considered the quickest means of communication in our daily life, we can contact easily with our friends and our relative wherever by calling or sending messages. Second, the mobile phone is also a means of entertainment for people. We can listen to music and play games on mobile phone. Moreover, by using the latest apps for smartphones , we can access to the internet to watch Film and check our profile in social networks and update our status wherever we are. Final, If we have a smartphone in hand, our studying becomes more effective such as look up dictionary, find out many source of reference on internet which is useful for studying.

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Some people think that parents should give their children complete freedom. Others feel that parents should limit their children’s freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some amount of people believes that children’s activities should be controlled by parents, however, another part of people argue that children should be freer. It is agreed that parents are responsible for every action of their off-springs. This essay will examine the importance of freedom to the future life of juveniles and the role of parents in child up brining. On the one hand, the world is changing at a fast pace and children are growing at the same speed. It means that youngsters should boost self-confidence and also self-regulation to survive in this severe life. For example, children who were titled with liberty are capable of deciding things on their own which will be one of the most important skills in an adult’s life. Therefore, parents should engage excessive independence to their off-springs. On the other hand, the mother and father should monitor every action of their children and save them from breaking the law or their own life. The main reason for this is ...

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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Initiating with government programs to motivate people to move their industries, business to regional areas has been part of few countires angenda which is enocuraging many and here is why I think so.

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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some employers think that their workers should dress wisely, while other companies consider the quality of their workers' performance to be more important than their outfits. While the quality of work is, no doubt, very important, adhearing to specific dress codes of certain business industries is also paramount in order to ensure companies' ability to compete within the industry and attract customers and customer satisfaction.

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Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance?

In the modern era, competition is increasing day by day in all over the world. Although, more and more people do have travel long distance for better employment and spend more time on work. I believe that, this trend has both advantages and disadvantages, it is not possible to speak in favour of one opinion.

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The average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of this and suggest some remedies to solve this problem.

Nowadays people is getting obese and also they loosing their body fitness.

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Some students take a year off between school and University to work or travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,children enjoy their life most, than they enjoyed earlier.Most students take a year off between school and campus.There are several pros and cons.In my opinion,demerits outweigh the benefits.In this essay,am going to discuss it.

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Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros than cons?

Machines in today's world are complex in terms of structure or its working. The intrduction of automation of daily works through machine has both advantages and disadvantages.In my opinion it is more of a disadvantage because despite it has the power of getting complex work done easily using machines (i.e automation) it can also be noteworthy that it can bring down the need of man power that are required in getting those jobs done.

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children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However television cannot replace the book as learning tool, which is why are less well educated today. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays children are getting poor education due to the frequent habits of watching television. At any cost , television will not replace book.Eventhough television is incorporated with various knowledgable programs its not sufficient to gain knowledge compared to book .That is why I agree to the above mentioned reasons.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

One of the factors that affect people’s lifestyle and the size of the savings they accumulate over the years is abode. To maintain the stability of those, many people would rather rent their houses instead of purchasing them. This prevalent trend would create certain benefits but there are also some drawbacks.

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Research indicates that the characteristic we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Nowadays, human psychology and mental development are considered to be utterly affected by genetic science. Due to massive progressions made in science departments, scientists are able to understand the importance of inherited genes more than before. However, I strongly believe that a person is more changed but their life experience rather than by characteristic traits.

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Do you think teachers should be evaluated by students.

Teachers are nation builder due to this they evaluate to the pupils so that they can become better citizens for the country. However, it is a reverse trend that students should be an opportunity to provide feedback about their tutors. I disagree with the argument and this essay will discuss my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The world of work is rapidly changing and the employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Why is the case? Can you suggest some ways to prepare people to work in the future?

The worldwide occupation is changing at a rapid speech and employees are not reliable on the similar work or the constant working conditions for the whole life. The reasons behind this case will be outlined in the following essay and giving some suggestions for people to be ready for their careers in the long run.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

It is true, that the number of games and toys available in stores are endless. Some parents let their offsprings to own a great number of it, which can have both positive and negative effects.

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State with you consider to be the most effective: -Comics -Books -Radio -Television -Film -Theatre

Every day, there are many ways to communicate a menssage, this can get to us for all our senses. For example, if we watch TV, we use the eyes, for Radio, we use ear, and for books we use our eyes, smells, and imagination. For this reason I think that the menssage that book want to express, it stay with us for more time, because is more deep.

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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

The advances in technology have made the vast impact on every kind of field and of course agriculture also no longer remains out of the circle.Scientists have invented very productive and quality hybrid seeds , they even have invented latest technology that speeds up and save a lot of time for farmers.

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Nowadays, the older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. what problems does this cause and what are the solutions.

Economy is backborn for the country development. Nowadays, The economy is formost reason and also a needs to live for each and every person. Because, In the present scenario older people who need employment have to compete with younger people who has just graduate from the universities. So, I suggest below some causes and solutions.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

Technology has invaded our modern life style. using computers becomes essential for us. They used in several fields like hospital, crime investigation and in Airports. This using will be increased by the time and affect our future positively.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

It is clear that the recent debate on whether parents should allow children to Learn a foreign language early or not does not seem to come to an end anytime soon. Although this suggestion does have some certain drawbacks, its advantages will Outweigh. Some people believe that learning new languages in primary education carry Some major implications. First, if children expose a foreign language, there will be a Confusion with their first language. This means that at primary school, children learn Literacy in mother tongue and coincidentally, learning a new language while they have Not being professional in the previous one will confuse them with an array of Vocabularies and grammars, which might lead to linguistic misunderstanding. Second, by beginning learning a foreign language at the age of six to seven, it will Delay in the development of the child’s mother tongue. For example, one child who is Practicing and improving language skills in one language is crammed with s...

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