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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Are family ties becoming weaker? It would be an error if we denied that family relationships are less relevant than before and this has been brought about by the change in our values , lifestyles and the lack of communication among members of the family.
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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In any underdeveloped country, providing the good health, education and trade is essential for the development. Industrialized countries should take the additional responsibility of developing these sectors in the poorer nations. I completely agree with the statement, it will be a long and tough road ahead for less privileged countries to take on challenge on their own, receiving the external help is the best way forward.
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In some countries young people are encouraged to travel or work for a year between finishing the high school and starting universities studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decides to do this.

Young age is the most suitable time to learn new things because during this phase people are more quick and more susciptible to adaptation. Considering the same, many countries are emphasizing on juveniles to explore the opportunity based on their interest in doing work or touring around new places for an year. In this essay, I am going to discuss the pros and cons of this footstep.
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Sample 2: Internet crime is increasing rapidly as growing numbers of people purchase goods over the internet. What can be done to tackle this problem?

The rapid development of the technology has brought about various merits to community, especially the e-shopping industry. In synchronization with the advantages, the cybercrime, is the online fraudulent, is the most worth-concerning drawback of this factor. From my own perspective, there are a lot of ways to solve it.
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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Education is the utmost right of every individual and no rule should cause one been refrained from the same. However, these days many universities are planning or has started the intake of equal number of male and female students in every stream. Such step has been equally appreciated and criticized by the people on the larger platform. Since I agree to this thought to a limited extent, In this essay, I am going to discuss the both sides of the statement and its impacts.
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While, some people think playing video games is waste of time and it can adverse effect on the health of players.I am completely disagree with this statement. I will discuss their merits in the following paragraphs.

While some people think playing video games is a waste of time and it can adversely effect on the health of players.I completely disagree with this statement. I will discuss their merits in the following paragraphs.
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Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.

It is a graving issue that, nowadays, people do not know the family living next door properly as they used to do earlier. This essay will put forward two factors which has accelerated this problem and proposed measures which might address them.
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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has becoming popular to control the children by some short of punishment. Physical penalty is the best way to control children behaviour. This essay will argue why smacking children is entirely necessary to teach them manners despite the parent’s emotion.
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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel like it should be purely optional. Discuss both these opposing views and give your opinion.

Many hold the opinion that physcial activity is an imperative subject in educational institutions, whereas, others think that children should be given the right to decide whether or not they want to paritcipate in them.Both these views will be examined for the remainder of this essay, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
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Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to higher positions. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe companies should only promote those employees who has been working for a company for a long time. I am totally agreeing with those as it give workers working in a company more sense of appreciation.
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Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

The claim states that any individual, insignificant of gender, can not be regarded as a hero anymore. The reason supporting the claim, is that media tends to destroy reputation of a person in the spotlight. This essay repudiates the claim and the supporting reason.
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Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trenda and fashions than what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Leisure activites hold a vital place in everyone's life. Generally, people choose these activites on the basis on their own taste and preferences but nowadays, due to drastic shift in lifestyles and updating systems, these activites have also changed according to ongoing trends. I completely agree that presently fun related activites are undertaken merely to show off status and attract people around.
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Popular hobbies Nd interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashion than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Leisure activities hold a vital place in everyone's life. People, generally choose such activities according to their taste and preference. However, nowadays it has been observed that with the shift in current lifestyle and updation of old things, fun activities are also changing with ongoing trends. I completely agree that free time activities are undertaken merely to show off one's status and to attract people around.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Learning the foreign language at primary school as compared to higher school is adviced by few knowlegable people.Like everything it also have some pros and cons in my opinion, advantages are more in qauntity than disadvantage.
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Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

We are quite aware of the rising issues with the environment nowadays as there is no country in the world which is not facing problems such as pollution or global warming.I partially agree with solving the issue at an international level and the essay will lay out the points for both.
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Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

We are quite aware of the rising issues with environment now a days as the problems such as there is no country in the world which is not facing problems such as pollution or global warming.I partially agree with solving the problem at an international level and the essay will layout the points for both.
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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Consumption of internet, especially, need of social media has increased exponentially for last few years. I intend that social media has brought benefits in our lives rather than disadvantages, if we use it properly.
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children)

Being a part of NGO, making good connections with the neighbours or provide sports education to youngesters should be mandatory according to few people. In my opinion, it will be trimendous act for the development of student spritually and intelligently, that will have positive effect on a country as a whole.
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While , some individuals believe that people feel unsafe at their a residence and also when they outside. There are several factors and solutions. I would discuss these both views in upcoming paragraph .

Firstly , the reason why people are afraid of going out of their homes are very obvious .the crime committed on streets are on a rise. The road accident have risen to a proportion. It increase more then before . As well as individuals becoming scared within their home .Mostly the crimes being committed at houses for instance murder,robberies, etcetera .secondly some people are afraid to go out because of natural calamities and also sometimes due to health related disorders which might be ...
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Some people want cars to be banned from city centers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Today, everyone owns atleast 1 vehicle in the family. It is a debatable topic that cars should be prevented from entering the city, since there. This essay will point out some advantages and disadvantages of the same.
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