IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1638

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Since the technology is cheaply accessible, parents find it convenient to engage their children with the same. What problem does it cause and what solution can you suggest?

Due to the fast-paced development of technology, the prices of them go down in a very short period of time after the products are put on sale. With the opportunities provided by the low prices of electronic devices, adults tend to use different ways of cutting-edge technology to communicate with their offspring. This tendency can bring about a number of problems, such as poor-quality family relations and an increased rate of isolation amongst youngsters; however, all these issues could be solved, if right measures were taken.

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Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. Why is this? What problems does this cause?

The number of people across the world moving to cities has increased significantly over the last few decades. There are myriads of reasons why people are moving to urban areas such as lack of development in rural areas and employment opportunities. As a result, there are problems associated with the movement which will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

The development based on economic and financial measures has been broadly adopted in most part of countries to determine material progress. But most of the indicators used do not picture many dimensions of an integrated growth able to consider value-based aspects like happiness and satisfaction with life.

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Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while other think that it provides more business option. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Throughout the world, the climate change is increasing unlike before. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that many businesses experience a negative impact while climate changes; others emphasize that this condition provides golden opportunity to many industries to rise. In my opinion, the impact on businesses directly links to the degree of climate variation.

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Some people say that school education is not useful and the essence of study can be acquired at home. Do you agree? Why or why not?

A certain section of people in society strongly believe that schools are not necessary in imparting education; since home schooling is an option. I do not agree with this statement and this essay will give relevant reasons to support my opinion.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

Technology has opened floodgates of opportunities for people especially for the younger generation. In concurrent times, human beings have availability of electronic gadgets as well as a myriad of adolescents are involved in play stations which have both positive and negative impacts.

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Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The idea of spending free time with co-workers has always been a subject of debate. There are some people enjoy spending their leisure time with their colleagues, whereas there are other people like to keep their private life separate from their official work life. Although arguments on both sides are worth exploring, I firmly believe that having personal life is more preferable but this idea have the certain reasons of debate.

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Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym/heath club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Maintaining a healthy lifestyle can be achieved by commitment to an exercise facility, although some persons are of a different view and believe that everyday actions such as walking and climbing are okay.

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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

In recent years, the approach of using exams to assess students has risen in popularity over the alternative of continual assessment. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach. To begin with the positives, a crucial advantage that examinations have as a form of assessment is that they leave little room for cheating. This is because exams are usually undertaken in the presence of an invigilator, whose job it is to detect any candidate breaking the rules. In contrast, continual assessment increases the risk of plagiarism since assignments are often completed with the help of the internet. Besides reducing cheating, exams are also more time-efficient. As they tend to only appear once or twice per year, they free up more time for students to revise and prepare. Nevertheless, assessing students via examinations does present some problems. For instance, some students are extremely intelligent and creative, but when put under pre...

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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

In recent years, the approach of using exams to assess students has risen in popularity over the alternative of continual assessment. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach. To begin with the positives, a crucial advantage that examinations have as a form of assessment is that they leave little room for cheating. This is because exams are usually undertaken in the presence of an invigilator, whose job it is to detect any candidate breaking the rules. In contrast, continual assessment increases the risk of plagiarism since assignments are often completed with the help of the internet. Besides reducing cheating, exams are also more time-efficient. As they tend to only appear once or twice per year, they free up more time for students to revise and prepare. Nevertheless, assessing students via examinations does present some problems. For instance, some students are extremely intelligent and creative, but when put under pre...

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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

It is often discussed that due to inherited parent's traits, personality fixed by birth. Some people argue that these genetic characteristics tend to maintain for a lifelong span but personally, I disagree that personality is permanent, which could be affected by various individual circumstances.

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Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be give more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often considered that arts and culture are some of the most important aspects for human existence. While entertainment is vital for recreation and leisure, societies around the world are in desperate need for emergency services professionals, such as doctors, police and firefighters. This essay will argue that science and commerce courses are critical for school students than fine arts subjects.

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Obesity in children is a serious problem in a number of countries. What are the causes of obesity? Discuss the possible alarming effects of this problem in the near future?

In recent times, obesity amongst young children has become a growing concern across the globe. This has been a constant issue that the world has been grappling with and hence, needs immediate attention. This essay will discuss some of the major reasons that cause this problem along with the possible impact it might have on kids going forward. Firstly, some of the primary major causes that can lead to weight gain are lack of exercise, poor diet and inherent genetics. School children prefer eating fast food which is extremely unhealthy in the long run and leads to body fat. Furthermore, poor genetics or lack of physical activity also reduces metabolic rate in the body; which not only increases the fat percentage but also further leads to unhealthy weight gain. For instance, it is noticed that consumption of sugary drinks coupled with unhealthy eating patterns is highly popular amongst students during school hours which further causes obesity. On the other hand, obesity can ...

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people hold the belief that video games are actually good or even as useful educational tool while some see video games in a negative way. I completely agree that video games are harmless if you use it in a right way and right time.

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Obesity in children is a serious problem in a number of countries. What are the causes of obesity? Discuss the possible alarming effects of this problem in the near future?

In recent times, obesity amongst young children has become a growing concern across the globe. This has been a constant issue that the world has been grappling with and hence, needs immediate attention. This essay will discuss some of the major reasons that cause this problem along with the possible impact it might have on kids going forward. Firstly, some of the primary major causes that can lead to weight gain are lack of exercise, poor diet and inherent genetics. School children prefer eating fast food which is extremely unhealthy in the long run and leads to body fat. Furthermore, poor genetics or lack of physical activity also reduces metabolic rate in the body; which not only increases the fat percentage but also further leads to unhealthy weight gain. For instance, it is noticed that consumption of sugary drinks coupled with unhealthy eating patterns is highly popular amongst students during school hours which further causes obesity. On the other hand, obe...

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill

As a well-known factor, education system varies from one country to another. It is widely argued by some individuals, in most of the schools at all levels of teaching right from primary till graduation is entirely based on facts with less focus on practicals. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above statement as it helps to prepare the graduates to do well in their career once they enter the working environment. Also, would contribute to increasing self-confidence and decision-making.

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While some think that art is an important subject for children too study, others think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is argued that craft is not important for the school’s curriculum and time should not be wasted on it. Some people state that creative study improves the mental level of students and career-oriented parents oppose this and say that artistry do not promise a bright future. In my opinion, a creative study is important for a child’s development. In this essay, art’s importance and why some think it is a waste of time will be discussed.

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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Friendship is an Imperative part of the journey of a human being. Some people believe that having friends of equal opinions is better, while others believe in having their pals who sometimes don't agree with them. In my opinion, it is important to have our friends who supports our opinion and sometimes disagree with us.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

A part of people discuss that all tests on animals are violent and should be considered in the borders of laws. In my opinion, I believe that controlled tests on animals can be formed in a more justified way. A part of these tests may threat the habitat of some animals and cause permanent diseases in a unrespectful way while the tests have a significant role in developing vaccines and generating tissues from the identical root cells.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

The idea, experience a year off between high school and university, is becoming more popular nowadays. In fact, students take advantages from the off-year, however, there are some risks that thinking of them could help them avoid loss. While students have this opportunities, as examples learning a new skill simultaneous with making a decision about future, it is likely for them to end up with more debt before starting university or losing their required mental readiness for continuing their education.