IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1641

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The advantages of robots doing the basic serving functions in the entertainment, leisure and retail sectors of the economy outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, we are in the fourth industrial revolution in which the retail and business are replacing workers with robot as well. While there are some benefits for employers, it also bring some drawbacks for the economy.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films than locally produced films. •Why could this be? •Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Watching films is a popular way to entertain. The competition between international films versus locally made films is highly dominated by one side, foreign films. The essay will analyse the root cause of this phenomenon and explain why the government should fund local firm industries.

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Some people believe that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

Most people think that life threatening games should be discontinued. Those sports which involving risking of lives such as bull fight and racing should impose a ban by the government. I agree that risking lives in the name of sport is not a sensible approach as far as entertainment is concerned.

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Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

It is argued by a group of men and women that children must be motivated to be competitive , while others believe that the essence of adjustment is essential for children. Certainly, both of these virtues are significant in life , but it is important that children should be taught where they need to compete and collaborate.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A great number of higher secondary students decide to take a yearlong break to explore or learn before entering into tertiary education. I completely agree with this notion, as it will help them to enhance their knowledge regarding their career, and also they gain life experience.

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Some people believe that young people should spend more of their time with their families and less on entertainment outside the home. Others disagree.

Some people believed that youngsters should allocate much of their recreational time for their families instead of entertaining themselves outside. While it is true that young individuals spend their time virtually with family, I believe it s also possible to expand social circle.

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Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Community workers play an important role in society, be it teachers, nurses or doctors all of them contribute to the upliftment of the society. Every job has its pay which is defined by the experience, education and the nature of the job. I personally do not agree that professional workers should be paid more as compared to showbiz or sports personalities. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons in support of my view.

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I many countries, people are living in a throwaway society where things are used for a short period and throw away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

In today's fast pacing world, the need to constantly be at parr with the rest of society seems to be a the urge of the modern generation. This unfortunately comes with a new "throwaway society" wherein, instead of fixing, re-using and using sustainable products, people prefer to throw and replace their belongings. This adds to the environmental burdern in terms of overusing resources as well as excessive production of waste.

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New parents should attend a parenting course to learn how to bring up their children well. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There are many schools of thought on how to bring up children and whether or not parents need to enrol in parenting classes. I am in favour of new parents putting i efforts by joining these classes and in this essay, I would like to discuss the reasons behind it.

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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The arrival of translation software worldwide due to the advanced technology has made many travelers' lives more convenient on their trips, but learning a language, in many people's view, play a significant role and benefits learners. I definitely opine this view because mastering a language is not only provides more opportunities for the learners but also the translation skills are impossible to be replaced by any advanced software.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. What is your opinion?

In many nations, few workers earn high income. Numerous characters deem rewarding only elite employees with high salary is advantageous for the country's economic power; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm the administration must not grant those few staffs with tons of money. I reckon it is beneficial us to provide the 1 percent workers with huge amount of money.

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Nowadays different language soft wares are available that restrict the people to learn foreign languages. Learning a new language is important or it’s ok to use the technology for it.

Language is the most important tool in human civilization to learn about any aspect of the culture. With the advancement in technology, these days different language software is available in the market that restricts people to learn foreign languages. I believe using modern technology in every aspect of life is useful however learning a foreign language has far more advantages.

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The number of people who are at risks of serious health problems due to overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Nowadays, numerous persons are in threat of significant health issues due to the increment of the obese in their body. There are few arguments about the rise of obesity. This essay will elaborate the reasons behind this trend and few solutions to overcome this issue.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, there has been a growing trend that people tend to buy things on the Internet. This present both pros and cons, however , in my opinion, its benefits are much more significant than the drawbacks.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary world, technology has brought in tremendous growth in students lives. There are two predominantly contradicting views are being debated in society. Some people are believing that the computers used for schooling are positive behaviour, the other portion of citizens says that it has negative impacts. This essay will discuss both the views and I will provide my opinion with a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

People often argued that students should have a permanent teacher during their school period, while others think that changing teachers annually is more essential. I believe that schools should provide different teaching styles of teachers for students.

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Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means, others believe that these games are contributing to children’s development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Children are our future and they must schedule their time, so that they are been benefited utmost. It's been advocated by some groups that the computer games are not good at all and other individuals don't share the same thought over this arguement, they considers that playing pc games to be as part of the growth of their children. I also credence over the statement that playing video games contributes in evolving of their child and will also bestow both views.

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More developing countries are given aid from international organisations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but other suggest that practical aid and adive is more important ? Discuss both views and give your opinion ?

In this growing world, every country is making progress in its way. In the ase of developing countries, they required more attention and wise decision regarding the projects to compete with the developed countries. No doubt international organization is providing help to the developing countries either financially or practically and even giving their advice as well. Let's discuss both the angle of aid provided.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are causes? And what will be effected on society?

Presently, many countries around the world do not have many students who choose to study science course. From my point of view, there are a lot of reasons and effects about this cause on public.

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The desire for higher status or great wealth than others is what motivate most people to succeed in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this modern world, everything is cheaper or you can everything you want in your life if you are rich by your status or by wealth. Some people think that higher class pupil motivates to the other so that they can start to do hard work to achieve higher status in society. I agree with this statement.

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