IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1695

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? How can its popularity be increased?

These day, many people are convinced that riding a bike is consider as one of the least polluted vehicles. In the following essay, some reasons will be evaluated to explain why this way of transport is not prevalent in some Areas as well as recommend some solutions to increase its popularity.

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The world natural resources are beingconsumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?

It is true that the world is experiencing the problem of the overconsumption of natural resources. This has resulted in serious consequences which should be addressed urgently. This unsustainable growth in the exploitation of natural resources has already had some damaging impacts, both on the environment and on communities. In environmental terms, contamination of land, air and water has reached alarming levels owing to dependence on fossil fuels to meet growing energy demands. For instance,coal is the main source of energy in China and Australia. The burning of coal and oil result in air pollution and global warming, through the release of greenhouse gases. In social terms, forest destruction results in a shortage of timber and commercial over-fishing devastates fish stocks. These environmental problems then impact on local communities and fishing villages like Napflio in Greece, for example, threatening jobs and traditional ways of life. It is evident, therefore, tha...

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Some people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing contribute more towards a child's overall development. The school curriculum should provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the school wants all-round development of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Since the establishment of schools, creative subjects have been implemented to the curricula in order to give young minds all-round growth. Many believe currently there is not much time dedicated towards subjects such as arts, music, drama and creative writing. Although some may argue that creating more time for these subjects can help children have a full growth however, I disagree, this is because it can result in negative development as it would require cutting more time out of other subjects.

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With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?

Virtual means of communication have eliminated the distance among individuals, and increased human’s socialization quality. People believe that with such renovation, humanity will always evade isolation and mental illnesses namely depression. In my opinion, I partly agree with the probabiliy that internet provides us in terms of connection and togetherness.

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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many governments encourage companies in big cities to relocate to the suburbs or nearby province. In my opinion, the benefits that this trend bring still exceed its draw backs.

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Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In order to be successful at a sport, some think you must be physically strong while others believe mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Various coaches argue with each other about the biggest contributor, which leads sportsmen to the success in competitions. However, whether physical skills or mental toughness play the most important role in creating successful sportsmen? This essay will show both views as well as prove that the victory in competitions is only possible with a mix of these factors.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has technology affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

In today’s society, it is true that technology has a huge influence on communication of human. I believe that there are various ways that affect the interaction between people. I also rely on that technology has both positive and negative impact on social life.

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Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions to solve this problem?

It is undeniable that a number of different species have been driven to the brink of extinction because of human beings. There are several causes of this alarming trend, but some feasible measures could certainly be taken to tackle this problem.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation

There is no doubt that migrants from the developing countries have been increasing in the recent years. The main reason for this is that poor facilities and opportunities in their native place; however, this can be effectively tackled by the government's action plan.

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In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowsadays, parallel with the advancement of technology are lifestyle disturbances in some areas. This does wonders for people at some extent as well as some drawbacks appear. In my viewponits, I believe that the advantages and disavantages in the development are equal

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some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is supposed that nowadays the standard of a person who needs to success could not be learnt and cultivated through attending a university and an equivalent institution. While I totally agree with that statement, I am going to delve into feasible reasons in this essay.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people think that children should be taught to be good person in society by their parents. However, from someone perspective’s people that these values should be taught at school. Personllay I feel that school and parents both are play equally important roles on teaching children to become good citizens.

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It is argued that people will gain more benefits when engaging in team sports such as football. Other people, however, believe that it is better to participate in individual sports like golf or tennis. I personally agree with the first group

Some people hold the belief that partaking to team sports provides players more benefits than individual ones , while others are of the opposite side.In my opinion , these ideas are justifiable to a certain extent .

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Implementing robots in factories can have mant benefits, others oppose this. Write both view and give opinion.

There is no doubt that the use of machines in various industries is quite normal. However, people are differed, whether this change brings a positive or negative outcome to the business firm. In my opinion I personally think that this can have more positives than negives.

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In certain countries, the number of people who use bicycles as the main means of transport is reducing even though it is beneficial both physically and environmentally. What can be the reasons for this change in preference? How can people be encouraged to use bicycles?

Nowadays, most people are commuting to work by other means and choosing to work out indoors. Even though the daily use of bicycles can result in gaining physical fitness and reducing carbon-foot print many are using other alternatives. This essay will shed some light on the reasons behind the reduction and steps which can be implemented to encourage cycling.

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Nowadays, more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. what are the reasons for this? what would you suggest as a solution?

In the modern times, there are jobs which are done by both youngster's and older generation's. Because of the changes in technology and constantly evolving times, we require more people, either old or new, as training for that particular work has become effortlessly casual. In this essay, we are going to discuss about the reasons for this, and also going to provide a suggesion.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In ministry offices there is generally believed, that improving currency value is the most important aspect, whereas group of people believes, improving currency value should not be the only goal for a ministry. I would agree with the statement, the ministry should also focus on other aspects other than improving currency value.

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Today food travels from thousands of miles from the farm to the consumer. Some people say that it would be better for the economy & environment if people ate food produced from local farmers. Would the advantages of this idea outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, food travels long distances before reaching consumers, and it is therefore believed that consuming locally grown food would bring about a number of economic and environmental benefits. Despite some advantages, I believe that the disadvantages of this idea would be more significant. Consuming locally grown food is advantageous in several ways. First, when produce is purchased and consumed locally, the local economy greatly benefits. More income will be generated for those invol...

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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a common perception among the people that the media mistreated popular celebrities. Some people think that the well-known stars should be entertained like normal people and we should give them space for their personal lives. While there is another school of thought who believes that this is our right to know about the private life of a famous person. In my opinion, we must not inquire about their personal lives unless they want to share willingly.

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