IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1693

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

People nowadays use different methods to connect people around the world together. For instance, music is among those methods.Therefore, some people say that music isa great way of communtication to bring cultures and ages together. I agree with this idea.

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Entry to art galleries and museums should be free.Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that art galleries have a significant role in providing many useful information to the visitors regarding the culture and heritage the artefacts. Even though it is sometimes thought that access to these institutions need to be free for all, in my opinion I personally believe that visitors would be charged the fees since this is essential to run these establishments smoothly.

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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting events and festivals. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is hardly surprising, therefore, that cultural events plays an important role in some individual's lifes and in order to attend those events people expend a huge amount of money on tickets. This essay completely agree with that statement. I truly feel that new friendships could be gained from such events along with getting more relaxed after hard day.

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nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. why do you think people waste food? what can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

In recent times, the public has shown to dispose majority of food purchased from outlets and stores. This essay will discuss the reasons for disposal and provide a solution to aid in the reduction of food.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Countries were becoming more and more similar by the same products which bought anywhere in the world. In my opinion, this progress comprises both

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Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

With the digital revolution and more affordable access to technology, people have chances to make use of mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at anytime. Although there are some negative consequences of this development on both individuals and society, I believe that they are eclipsed by its advantages.

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Some people say that international sports events aid world peace. Do you agree or disagree?

Certain members of the society believes that international sports games help in bringing the world together and spread peace among the nations. I wholly agree with this statement because it spreads unity among the nations and brings a feeling of treating everyone with respect. The following essay will discuss the key reasons of this argument in detail.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Today, people are tend to do freelance jobs than work for a company. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and give drawbacks of that tendency.

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Some people believe that traditional music album and single consumption is vital for the music industry. On the other hand, others think that digital streaming and downloading play bigger roles. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some persons are apparently of the opinion that traditional music and individual consumption are most important for music industry. However, perhaps, It is also certainly true that digital streaming and downloading an equally responsible and contribute to music industry. I have discussed both views to justify the essay content.

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Nowadays, as women and men have to work full time, household duties should be equally divided. Do you agree or disagree?

opinions are divided on whether parenting and household management should be shared equally between marriage partners. I completely agree with this idea.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some experts think that children should start to learn a second language at primary school is better than secondary school. I think the advantages outweigh the drawbacks. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give the reason why the benefit is more than disadvantages.

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Some people think nations and individuals should focus on their own personal problems rather than global ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Man is a social animal. Some people think global issues should be neglected by human beings and they should focus on their own problems. My perspective is opposite of this view. I will explain my reasons with supportive facts that, why one should pay attention to global issues as well.

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Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

For centuries, millions of species on planet earth have peacefully co-existed, supporting each other while thriving off of the resources provided by mother nature. These resources include forests which provide a habitat for animals to survive, along with clean water necessary for survival of any living being and form an ecosystem dependant on each of these components. Even if one of these elements is used excessively, it disturbs the entire eco-system and threatens the health of the very planet we call home. Rapid industrialisation and advancements in technology have increased the need for mankind to acquire more and more land which is done at the expense of destroying forests. In this essay I would briefly discuss why the disappearance of forests is catastrophic for us and elaborate why they need to be saved.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in life. Reason? Is it a negative or positive trend?

In modern society, there has been a hot topic of debate that a large number of young couples have delay parenthood. This trend could be traced back to several reasons, and I am of the opinion that the drawbacks of it outweigh the advantages.

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With many problems of transport and accommodation in cities, some governments are encouraging business to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the world today, the increase in the demand of housing and transportation system at an alarming rate has become the main concern of society. Due to such serious issue, many policy makers has considered a new strategy in which enterprises are encouraged to move out of metropolitan areas. While there are several disadvantages associated with such policy, I would argue that the benefits are more significant.

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Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that people tend to worry about the future. While focusing on the reality is very important, I believe that planning for the future is of greater importance.

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The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Other think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

At present, inventions of applied sciences are hotly debated subject of popular media.It is often argued by some that a huge variety of latest gadgetries are enhancing differences between wealthy and poverty-stricken people over the period of time because of affordability.Meanwhile,others claim that newest technology has narrowed the gap between affluents and impoverished as a result of accessibility.This essay will explore both sides of the argument before reaching a logical opinion.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is unavoidable to appear violence in some movies and on TV dramas. Some people argue that government needs to limit violent films and TV programs so that the rate of violent crimes will decline. In my opinion, although limiting the amount of violent film and TV programs is a good way to downgrade violent crimes, the key to resolve the issue is to use legislation, religion and moral idea.

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Many young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What are the problems associated with it and what solutions to it

Urban oriented immigration is an inescapable fact that we have to face these days. This triggers a reality that young dwellers opt to move to the metropolis, leaving the older ones behind. This essay will analyse the principle problems and offer some sollutions to this issue.

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The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. (Do you agree or disagree?)

It is a controversial issue that attending the parenting courses is the best way to bring up children. In my point of view, this argument can be quite biased for various reasons.

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