IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1749

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that in order to give opportunities to the new generation, companies should encourage the employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people hole a belief that young people should be given job opporttunies, therefore companies ought to encourage senior staffs to have soon retirements. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this point of view.

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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others thinks that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

Intelligence is the measures of our conscience and sensibility. There are a lot of methodologies through which we can assess the level of intelligence. But some people think that success is the best measure of intelligence, while others thinks that intelligence can be measured in other ways. I totally disagree with the statement that success is the best measure of intelligence. Here, I will give my explanation.

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Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in a building as all facilities and books will be available online for all to access. Do the advantage of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that with the easy availability of the internet ,huge infrastructure of traditional library will be substituted by online library. While I accept that this development has some drawbacks, I believe that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.

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In the past, people usually stayed I one place thought their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different place their lifetime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

Nowadays, the way of living is more different than in the past. In the old days, it was common for people to live in their place of birth forever. However, modern people often live in various places throughout their life. They have a tend to migrate. The essay discusses about the strengths and weaknesses of both views.

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In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

Rules and regulations are mandatory to establish peace and prosperity in a society. Our parents and family members used to teach us about norms and morality from the beginning of our childhood. Childhood is the best periods to build someone as a well behaved and decent person. So there might have some rules and regulations which should be followed strictly by any children. But too much strictness can ruin there beautiful childhood. So we should remain mild enough in case of implementing rules on them.

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The Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Internet is the most renowned source for providing with information. It has associated with technology to make our life smooth and faster. In many aspect, It just increased the accessibility to every sector. But many believes that when internet used as a source of information, it has more drawbacks than advantages. I disagree with the statement.

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The search for mythical creatures is a waste of time and money.

It is believed that investigating in mysterious species is the toss off time and budget. In my opinion, discovering new creatures is needed because scientist still not fully know about the world. For examples, in the deepest seas or on the highest mountains we have not searched it clearly.

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Some people believe that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged.Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There has been a great change in terms of sparking children sense with the help of latest information. It is playing a important role in our daily life. It is getting vast popularity. Some people believe that knowledge of competition it brings a large amount of positive views for children, while others contend that taught to co-operate is batter. Although both process are helpful but in my perspective , the method of co-operate teaching is beneficial for children .A close examination of both sides is necessary to decide batter view of it .

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The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decades. This has made oversea travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Nowadays, Due to less costs of air tickets people prefer to visit all over the world. There are some positive and negative effects to make trip so approachable.

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These days, a number of people pursue home ownership instead of just renting one. This, they consider, as very important. In this essay, I intend to look at the reason for this trend and highlight its overwhelming negative consequences.

To begin with, the ownership of homes is a rising trend in many countries. This I think is due to the huge cost attached to just renting one on the long run, with its attendant strain on the family pocket. For example, in Lagos, Nigeria, the prices of rooms has skyrocketed in recent times, with this gulping up to half of the income of the family on a monthly basis, especially for the low and middle-income earners. This has in-turn exerted much pressure on the family budget, with just a little amount of money left to pay for feeding, education and other essential expenditures. As a result, the standard of living is seeing a significant drop. People therefore count is extremely important to own their own houses so as to be free from this uncomfortable burden.

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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effect on the society

It is true that the aged population is gaining ground in the number of countries where longevity is lengthened greatly by dint of higher living standards, better healthcare and serene life. In my view,however,this trend has both positive and negative outcome on the society.

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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society? What is your opinion on that?

In the modern times, the increase in the percentage of aged population is a significant feature in many developed countries. There are some who fear that caring for the elderly would be to great a burden for the younger generation. However, in my view, this trend, indeed, has both positive and negative effects on society.

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Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential for improving health and deal with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches: private companies, individuals or governments?

Health undoubtedly plays the most crucial role in human life. Therefore, research into medical developments are needed when it comes to enhancing people’s well-being and curing diseases. As far as it is concerned, the financial responsibility of such research should be assumed by pharmaceutical enterprises rather than individuals and goverments.

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Write at least 200 words. Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately, while others think that it is more advantageous for children to study at the same school. What is your opinion?

To begin with, single-gender education system assists children in paying more attention to their study and reduces distractions from opposite-sex mates. For instance, Those boys who studying in a co-educational school want to look like a real man and impress the opposite sex with their gallentry, thus they may ignore their lectures and receive poor performances at school. This can also affect girls’ concentration. Also, the number of inappropriate relationships is decreased thanks to this education models.

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Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school, some people believe that this has negative development while others think there are some benefits. Discuss both view and give your opinion

There exists a tendency that people in modern life are taking increasingly longer time to work or school. While some people assert that this trend is of rather an advantage, some believe that there is a lot more detrimental consequences. These both sides of the statement will be discussed as follows before drawing my reasoned conclusion.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many hold that one's free time should be entirely devoted to mind-boosting hobbies, such as reading or doing puzzles, whereas others are firm believers of restorative rest. I strongly believe that although relaxation is capable of enhancing productivity, intelligence-stimulating pastimes are more viable options, because of their long-term impacts.

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More and more wild animals are being kept in the zoo these days. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

In this day and age, the tendency of keeping wildlife in the zoo are becoming popular. In my opinion, although this trend has certain drawbacks, the benefits are more significant.

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doctors recommend older people for exercise regularly. however, some people do not excersie. what are the causes?

Due to the detrimental heealth problems, health workers are recommending aged masses to do a physical workout on a daily basis, although most of them did not pay much attention to it. the reasons has been expatiated in the upcoming paragraphs.

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS BETTER FOR STUDENTS AT UNIVERSITY TO LIVE FAR AWAY FROM HOME THAN TO LIVE AT HOME WITH THEIR PARENTS. OTHERS THINK STUDENTS SHOULD NOT STUDY AT UNIVERSITIES THAT ARE FAR FROM THEIR HOMETOWNS. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

No matter what they say, university life is significant for every person especially for making it a bad or good habit. Nowadays, many people argue that the best option for collage students is living long distance from home than living at parent’s home with them while the other crowd thinks oppositely. For my perspective I strongly agree with first statement because of providing independent and teamwork.

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Some people suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this

Most companies and government departments around the world require experience before hiring people. Therefore, experience has become something basic for everyone. But is it necessary to work and take experience immediately after school? Personally, I believe that having job after school is considered as a double-edged weapon. So, in this essay both the positive and negative edges are going to be discussed.

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