IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1744

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Task: Life was simpler without somuch of technology.How far you agree.?

Before the technologies took over the world, life was more easier in all ways. I partly agree with this statement as there are many benefits of the same.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In modern time, new kind of media, such as social media, play an important role. Children are easier to get information by these. However, some said that media coverage of celebrities may having a negative effect, especially on children. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement by couple reasons which will be outlined in following essay.

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School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. Do you agree or disagree?

School children have became too dependent on computers. It cause the degeneration of children's reading and writing skills. Some believe that computers should not be used in the classroom and teachers need to go back to teaching basic study skills. In my view, I would argue with the idea in following reasons.

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Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What could be the reason for this trend, and what can be done to reverse it?

Today, although there are numerous progress and development in science, technology and society in human being, the decline in citizens’ health in rich nations has been an alarming issue. Hence, understanding reasons as well as propose feasible solutions are necessary.

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City centers are very crowded with cars. They often cause a great deal of pollution. Cars should be banned from all centers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Every weekdays, I am stuck in traffic during the way to work. It leads one to wonder whether cars should be banned in city centers. In my view, despite the lots of cars have made serious pollution, the cars should not be excluded from these areas.

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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The increase in modern technology has brought a lot of change in the way people communicate. Mostly, development of language interpretation app made everyone to communicate easily with foreign people. I strongly believe that language interpretation apps outweigh the disadvantages, in this essay, I will explain the benefits of these apps and how it outweighs the disadvantages.

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The best recommendation from psychologists to overcome tension is stay calm without doing anything during the day.

The best recommendation from psychologists to overcome tension is stay calm without doing anything during the day. Although many would not agree to stay calm, I completely agree that individuals should stay calm if they are tensed.this essay will discuss the importance of staying calmer rather than doing something.

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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so.

It is becoming a trend nowadays for children doing a part time job in their leisure time and this phenomena is supported by the parents. Even though this activity brings beneficial effects for them, it can be followed by several drawbacks.

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advertisement are becoming more and more common. it is positive and negative developmen?t

In recent years, Advertising is gaining more popularity on the markerting products and services. While advertisements are considered to be advantege, they have numerous negative influences.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

In the recent era of technical advancement, Some new devices have a greater impact in the minds of childern. kids nowadays gets used to it. However, Current technology has its own benefits and pitfalls.

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Some people suggest that schools should pay more attention to academic subjects for children because these subjects are useful for their future career. They think that subjects like music and sport are not useful and should be reduced. What is your opinion?

When we talk about school subjects, especially when coming from a school which had 15 mandatory subjects a year, one thing is evident- there is something for everyone to choose from. Many people have a favourite subject at school and they can very much differ from person to person. It is an open discussion which school subject is the most important one.

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Computer are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The technological devices are popular in classrooms in today's world. Few argue that this inclusion will result in damaging effects, whilst others claim that it is a positive one. In this essay further, both the statements will be discussed and then the conclusion will be drawn.

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dresscode. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

Nowadays, in many school facilities there are strict rules related to what the students can wear or uniforms are mandatory. On the other hand, in some schools students are allowed to wear whatever they want, of course, their style should not be provocative. In this essay, I will explain the pros and cons of having to wear a uniform.

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Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health. However people are walking less nowadays. Why is this happening ? And give possible solution

Walkings is the easiest way for human of all ages to get rid of health issues. It is a kind of cardio exercise which can reduce the risk of getting heart-related diseases. However, now the children, teens, middle-agers and elders tend to walk less, missing the opportunities to do the simplest workout.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem&

Agricultural sector is developing steadily but worldwide problem of famine is still unsolved. Among wide variety of issues the paramount ones are different pace of agricultural sector development, climate and quality of soil, varying from country to country and causing people’s starvation.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

A cornucopia of opinions have been arising recent years around education of children. There is a believe promoted in some cultures that a child will benefit greatly if she or he works hard. This essay will argue that this approach has both benefits such as better job prospects and social status as well as drawbacks which could damage health of youngsters.

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some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of the community It is true because if children will go to the community and serve them, the community will greet him. In fact institute is a place where they get to learn about moral and ethical duties in some scenario both the highlighted points is correct.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are many way that parents rising their children for example, to allow them to make their own decision in everything but some parent said they can choose what is best for their offspring. In this essay I will discuss in both point of view.

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Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the internet, television. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion?

Some sets of people argue that the lecture with an instructor in educational institute is way more valuable than other learning materials. I strongly concur the view in that both the accuracy of the knowledge and the development of the people who being educated.

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Governments investment in the arts,such as music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead?

Nowadays,we often have an argument about the question how to use nation budget rationally.Someone thinks governments should spend money on public services than the arts.I think,I can not be persuaded by any opinions.

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