IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1777

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Science tells us that some activities are good for our health while some others are bad. Dispite knowing that millions of people all over the world continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is the case and what might be done to change it

It is undeniable that scientific studies enable people to have a better grasp of which habits could jeopardize their health. However, this still fails to prevent them from cunducting those harmful activities. In this essay, I will be elaborating on the casual factors resulting in the problem as well as proposing several solutions to stop it from worsening.

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With the continuous progress of the Internet, WeChat has become more powerful and useful. Some people applaud its popularity but others oppose the overuse of WeChat. What is your opinion?

Enjoy the Popularity of Wechat while Avoiding the overuse

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend so you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays many teenagers do not know d to distinguish between correct and incorrect deeds. Some people argue children should learn them from an early age. I completely agree with this point of view and I believe punishment is so essential.

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Both governments and individuals are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in sociely such as poverty and health care.

It goes without saying that many entities have put a mass of effort to tackle environment problem since it is a main threat to our life nowadays. However, there is an argue that instead of focusing on how to secure flora and fauna world, people could re-consider to solve community problems. Although I believe that citizens life is vital for a society to thrive, in my opinion, both eco-system should receive equal consideration as they have related to each others.

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Some people prefer to be self-employed, whereas other like working for companies or institutions. Which is a better approach?

Many people endeavour to set up their personal corporation or hustle to secure the employment in multinational companies. Some folks prefer to have their own business instead of working under someone, while on contrary side others would rather favour to have job. As per my opinion, I believe that best approach is to work for yourself instead to work under someone else.

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Some people prefer to be self-employed, whereas other like working for companies or institutions. Which is a better approach?

Many people endeavour to start their own startup or hustle to secure the job in multinational companies. Some folks prefer to have their own business instead of working under someone, while on contrary side others favours to have job. As per my opinion, being the independent owner is far better than working for someone else.

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The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement while others believe this is harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Opinions are divided on whether changes in the range and quality of food brought by advances in science and technology are detrimental or beneficial to humans’ health. Although this development is not without its advantages, the drawbacks can be overwhelming.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreigh countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad oughweigh the drawbacks?

Study abroad nowadays has become very popular around the world ecpecially to the youth of today's generation. Although l think that it maintains some obvious unpredictable sides, l strongly believe that the advantages of the study overseas can outweigh its disadvantages.

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Children should play online games nowadays. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

Multiplayer games nowadays have become very popular especially to the youth of today's generation. This essay will discuss the positive sides of online gaming as well as negative aspect of games based on online system.

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Some believe that it is a better idea for people to communicate through internet while others believe that face to face education is far more important than privious one. Discuss both sides.

Nowadays, many governments around the world create opportunities for everyone who wants to learn something through online. This essay will discuss the positive sides of online education as well as a education based on face to face system.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Music controls the world nowadays; it has existed from centuries and people enjoy its variety of genres. However, often time people start listening to international music rather than listening to local and traditional music. However, I believe that traditional music overweights international music as it shows a big part of culture and the country identity.

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In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

It is undoubtedly the case that huge number of cars is moving in the highways and this is causing problems for many communities. There are several reasons for this problem and various measures can be taken by both induviduals and governments to imrove this problem.

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Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Agree or disagree?

More and more people reckon that entertainment industry is no longer developing as before. That is a result of languid human who tend to spend almost time for using modern devices. I partly agree with this assertion, while it may be true in the case of some communities, other seem to be unaffected by technology and the modern world.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, online shopping is becoming more and more useful. People are buying via the Internet a variety of things, which they are needed of starting from books and air tickets ending with groceries, and it is considered that this way is gaining rapidly in popularity. Moreover, this way of shopping has already outweigh the advantages compared to the normal style of buying stuffs.

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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Nowadays, anyone looking for a new home is usually faced with a conflicting choice of either choosing an apartment or to search for an independent house. Many believe that living in an apartment is a much better choice, while I would argue that an independent house is still superior among the two options.

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With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you disagree?

It is true that the World Wide Web and other Social sites such as Facebook, Instagram, YouTube, etc. are used by all age group for different purpose in their daily routine. However, there are negative effects if not used in proper manner by children. I feel it is right that parents and children both have to face difficult situations, if internet is not used under the guidance of adult.

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Loneliness is an increasing problem in many societies, especially among the elderly. Why is this? How might it be remedied?

Earlier people used to live healthier and happier life. But due to the rapidly change in lifestyle people feel alone especially when they are old. There are various issue behind loneliness in older people lives. However, this can be cured by taking some small efforts by changing our lifestyle.

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Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

In serval years there is a huge increase of the private transport than the government transport. Few people believe that once each month people should travel by public transport instead of their own vehicle. In this essay I will discuss both procs and cons how it is beneficial in terms of air pollution and how difficultly it will be to manage by public transport.

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Private car ownership has been increasing over the past few decades. This has given ordinary people greater mobility, but has also led to concerns about traffic congestion and air pollution. Do the advantages of private car ownership outweigh the disadvantages?

It is easy to understand that owning a private car will give owners a great flexibility in travelling. However, some people concern about the negative impacts of that on the environment and society. I totally agree with this opinion as the disadvantages of private car ownership is much greater than its advantages.

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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Having friends is not less than a blessing. We all choose friends, where some of us choose the most like-minded people to be friends, while others prefer friends who have completely different way of thinking. This essay will discuss both sides of argument and provide evidence that why both types of friends are necessary.

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