IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1782

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, obesity is increasing in a rapid pace. The reasons of it and how to tackle this issue

It is unfortunate fact that obesity has always been one of the most widespread illnesses. Nowadays the issue of overweight has become as actual as it has never been before leading to hard and sometimes lethal outcome. I consider the main causes of such lamentable trend are consuming too much unhealthy food as well as having sedentary lifestyle. It apparently affects on people’s digestion system and also reflects on appearance.

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Recent research has shown that internet and TV have a greater influence over people's lives than politicians

In a new media age, internet and TV have seen a dramatic increase, thus, it has a important role to play in people's lifetime. Some people opine that politicans are less vital for inhabitants. Hence, there is different widely views on the issue of whether politicans have a effecient impact on modern world or not is contentious one. With research-based information and salient examples, the essay will be fully highlighted.

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Some people think that money is the most essential factor in promoting happiness Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?

Despite the challenges of life, I have a variety of reasons to make me happy. Let's start with the most important reason which is health. Health is a precious thing for a person, so losing it brings misery. When I am reading the horrific disease reports, I remember that I am still healthy and this encourages me to be happy. Many people are willing to spend all they have to restore their health, so health is irreplaceable. My second reason is money, I think having a good amount of wealth mak...

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Why do we need to prevent the extinction of some animals like dinosaurs and dodos if it is caused by natural processes? What is your opinion about this?

With the help of palaeontologists, all around the globe, these past few centuries, we have made incredible discoveries about creatures that existed before us. But a trend of natural mass extinctions has been recorded. Nowadays we have the technology in order to avert these, but what will this offer to our planet? In my opinion, there are multiple drawbacks if we do not try and prevent these situations and in this essay I will explain why.

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Some people think that history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understanding the present.discuss both views and give your opinion

Some argue that studying regarding the history is purposeless, while others object this notion, saying that the past aids people to acquire a proper vision about the present. My personal perspective is although most of the factual theory which is related to the history is fabricated, overall, the learning of it provides a correct guidance and a strong foundation to the prevailing period.

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Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that conducting and controlling of scientific research should be governmental responsibility rather than corporations and private organizations. This essay will completely disagree with this point of view because of the benefits to the government, corporations, and the whole society. This essay will first look at the benefits for corporations and then discuss advantages for the government and individual benefits.

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Many people feel that urban environments are more unhealthy than they have ever been. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem?

Uban life is becoming increasingly popular. A number of the community, believe that the atmosphere in the city is no longer safe like it was earlier. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and put forward several solutions for this issue.

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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

At what age children should start formal schooling? It has been a long-running debate. In some countries, people think that four years old is good to start formal education. However, others believe that children should be sent to school at the age of seven. My view on this issue is that children must go to school at seven years.

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Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of private-health care outweigh the advantages?

In today's era, private-medical facilities are dominating in the healthcare. Some people believe that running this services by privately funded organization could have some demerits, so it should be restricted. However, a great number of people, including myself, are of the opinion that the pros of this private service outweigh the cons. In this essay, I will proffer the justification of my own belief on the matter.

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Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide competitions. Other argue that it would be better if these countries can spend money on the children to take part in sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some states prefer to invest a lot of money to put their sportives in global competition and some people claim that is better to invest in sport for young generation.From my point of view the both are very necessary,but I agree that children have to be encourage to practice sports since an early age and for this gouverment has to have some implication.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin to learn a foreign language in primary school rather than secondary. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that learning a foreign language has been a debatable issue these days. in my opinion, it is advantageous to learn a foreign tongue in elementary school rather than high school, and I believe its benefit far outweigh the drawbacks because not only does it allow children to learn the new culture, but also they have better job prospects in the future.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

During the globalisation era, advertising flooded all areas of our lives. As a result, some people believe that advertisement encourage individuals to buy useless things. Whereas, others believe that advertisement help human to purchase useful products. This essay is going to discuss advantages and disadvantages of advertisement.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hand are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages ?

Nowadays, thanks to the advance of technology, most housework is being done by machines. Personally, I believe that this trend benefits more than does harm.

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physical education should be ommitted from the curriculum. Do you agree?

I disagree with omitted physical education from the curriculum. First, if this subject is omitted, students will concentrate on the other academic subjects. That means they will spend more time on academic subjects and forget about physical training. Maybe some of them will never do the physical exercises. That can lead to obesity and make us lazier. Second, most of the students, especially teenagers, enjoin the PE class because they want to have fitting bodies. Many teenagers are not satis...

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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

Nowadays, as most of people tend to judge many things from their visual appearances. One of that is color and this tool has become a major influence to an individual's decision. I firmly believe that this statement is true for many reason and this essay will explore how is color so powerful.

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In some countries, people follow the latest fashion and hairstyles. In your opinion, what is influencing this? Is this a good or bad thing?

Fashion plays an important role in our society. And, over the last couple of decades people have become fashion conscious. The main reason for this trend is firstly, globalisation of designer labels and secondly, celebrities endorsement on social media, which I feel leaves a negative effect on our mental wellbeing and personal finance.

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Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is little room for doubt that tourism is one of the fastest-growing industries in the world. However, its impact on culture remains a source of constant debate. This essay will elaborate on both positive and negative effects of tourism from a cultural perspective.

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In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods our need, it is also perceived as entertainment. Is it a positive or negative development?

In most economically advantaged nations, not only is shopping symbolic

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Governments give lots of supports to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although many artists are well supported by the authorities, some people believe that it is the profligacy of public funds, and it will become necessary to use the taxpayers' money more frugally. This essay opines that many artists couldn’t continue to work without

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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people can not expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have various positions regarding whether job security has the lower level of importance compared to job satisfaction or people can not feel elated with their career when they have temporary job. While job satisfaction can sometimes be beneficial, I generally believe that having a steady job plays a crucial rule in conveying a sense of delight during the working hours.

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