IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1781

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people today are worried about young children using video games. What problems might these games cause, for children and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced? You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Video games have evolved dramatically over the past years, and, probably, have become one of the most popular entertainments among youth. There are a number of problems as a result of these entertaining activities, but also some straightforward measures that can be taken to lessen the effects of them on the younger generation, which will be discussed below.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

In fact many people today get used to live the same in all areas of life according to their own or older people's traditional life experience. As a result, people might have a little faith in life and miss opportunity to challenge themselves.

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Countries should spend money on trains rather than new roads. Do you agree or disagree

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines . Does this development bring about more advantages or disadvantages.

Machines have replaced domestic manufacturing. Several items that were previously handmade are recently done by machines . In my opinion, I think the value of machines can bring about more advantages in manufacturing compared to any drawbacks it might bring.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.

Machines have replaced domestic manufacturing . Several items that were previously handmade are recently done by machines . In my opinion, I think the use of machines can bring about more advantages in manufacturing compared to any drawbacks it might bring .

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people' salaries to pay for public services such as roads and schools. Other thinks high taxes are bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it is necessary for government to take a larg amount of taxs of people's salaries for constructing roads and education services. However, there is another group of people who disagree with high taxes.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era of information and technology, women empowerment is at its Zenith. There seems to be a school of thought possessing the belief for an equal share of university enrollment for both the sexes in all the fields. However, I completely disagree with this notion and will state my reasons in this essay.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often said that today’s world has exposed us to overwhelming diversity of choices. This essay will completely agree with this because I strongly believe that the era of Internet and globalization has made the population extremely consumerist. On the one hand, that offers people competitive and cheap prices, but on the other hand many end up doing the wrong choice.

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Some people think educated people more valuable than people who learned skills through experience. Do you think educated people are most valuable for society? What kind of skill can people learn through experience that can benefit society?

Education indeed has a vital role in the growth and development of a nation. Critics, claim that people who land skills through experience are significant for the public. As a citizen, I believe that literacy has an essential role in our community.

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Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Libraries are the main places, where all useful and informative books are kept, everybody can borrow them for a short period to read, even it is a novel or a textbook. Libraries have their strong position in the public and it would not be affected by any other alternatives. It is disagreed, that libraries should be closed, as society has other sources. The libraries are the superb cheapie places to borrow a book as well as by discussing the other benefits of libraries that will prove this.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The main topic talks about the cars quantitative on the British roads since the first appear in 1888, highlighting the huge growth by the year 2000 with about 29 million cars. Given the possibility of alternative transport and also the control of cars ownership and use by the international laws.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

These days, perents do everything to make the future of their children successful even by putting force on them. The detail reason of this thought and the reasons why I believe that this development is negetive for all will be discussed below.

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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

Education has always played a crucial part in everyone's life as it provides everything required for every single person to live happily and succeed academically. There is a wide variety of sources to get educated from like schools, the Internet, and our predecessors. While some people believe that acquiring knowledge and skills from family is more essential than that from schools, I would argue that both schools and family play an equal role in a person’s development and success.

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In some countries employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries employers are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time. Considering the need of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Depending on the countries labor law and other regulations, some countries provide employees with two weeks of annual paid leave whereas others grant four to six weeks. In my opinion, two weeks of paid annual vacation is a good amount to be offered from both employers and employees perspective.

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Some people think traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that, some individuals reckon that conventional games are more effective rather than today's games in order to cultivate child's skills. This essay completely agree with this statement because, traditional games are more based in action and it helps to develop their knowledge that more enjoyed from life compared to modern ones.

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country

It has been observed recently that many people choose to travel overseas to improve their standard of living. There are undoubtedly many advantages to this option but also disadvantages. I am going to elucidate more on the advantages and disadvantages of working and living abroad.

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An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with these problems?

In the recent era, all countries of the world are united by the global village. The skilled masses of the underdeveloped nations want to migrate to the developed areas. There are multiple reasons behind this problem. In my piece of writing, I shall shed light on the the points why this trend occur in the society with remedies.

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Some people believe that hobbies needed to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that leisure activities should be a full adventure to enjoy them to the fullest.In my opinion, I completely agree with given point of view because hurdles lead to curiosity and make them more interesting.

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Many people believe that cigarette smoking has had a negative impact for far too long and the only solution to end ot, is to make cigarettes illegall worldwide. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give explanations and examples to support your opinion.

The cigarette is a common bad nature for many people in our society. This ever - increasing bad habit can cause detrimental effects to the respiratory, not only smokers, but also for surrounding people as they inhale the smoke coming out of cigarettes. The cancer rate has been increased due to the cigarette and governments in many countries ought to ban smoking. I partially agree with this notion because it is a feasible solution to combat all the negative impacts caused by this bad habit, however this technique can destruct the economy.

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent times, putting a ban on advertising aimed at children has become a debatable topic.While some people believe that commercials aimed at kids should be prohibited because of its negative effects, others are of the opinion that it should not be faced out. This essay will discuss the positive contributions of this medium of publicising despite its shortcomings.

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