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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music is more important than the international music which is heard everywhere nowadays?

Music is a creativity of humans and it has endless variation, sentiments are attached to music. It is therefore needed to release emotions, express sentiments and various other causes. Here we will discuss how traditional music has seen different stages and advancement has led to a drastic change.

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With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the fast and new development of technology, life has become easier. From all the inventions, internet has become a boon for human. Nowadays, people can do most of the things, sitting at home, using internet. Some people believe that with the rise in the popularity of the internet, newspaper will soon become the thing of the past because people can watch and read news online and even newspapers are also available on the internet. I completely agree with the statement.

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In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in many places around the world people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, because of many various opened facilities, and this affects family relationships.

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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Space exploration is one the main issue in our world which has two opposite thinking. Some group believes that it is wastage of resources while the other group consider it as an essential to explore our universe.

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Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Others, however, believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadays, there is an argument among the people where many have the opinion that the parents should not be hurried to do admission of their child in the schools, however, few of the people have the contrast view where they are in support of starting education of the childeren at early age. I think it’s better for the child to start schooling at earlist possible age because it will be an added advantage in the future for carrier growth.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

There is a prediction that the ratio between the elderly and the young generation will not be equal anymore in the future, specifically, the percentage of the older generation will be higher than the youth. Personally, I totally follow the idea that this is a negative transformation.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, Which Most of people are migrating to cities are bringing many problems for people and government. Certainly people want to good job and high salary, so they are migrating from rural areas to city areas. Although government did many activities, there are many problems with this such as traffic jam, increase the cost of products, air and soil pollution etc.

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Some people support the idea of imposing taxes on fossil fuels (oil, coal and gas) in order to reduce energy consumption. Others disagree with this approach. Consider the debate and its arguments, and come to your own conclusion.

Fossil fuel tax continues to be a debatable motion in wider society. It is believed by a number of residents that its implementation is highly needed to do while others oppose this statement. There are accurate opinions on both sides which will be explored now.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workes deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

A standar age of retirement (65 for example) is considered unfair for certain demographis of society, because they think that some workers have the right to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. However, I don’t agree with that, for the reason that I feel that the health has had several advance in the last two decades. Hence, a person with is 65 years still looks like very good and they can be a great contribution for the workplace.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

In certain geographies, individuals believe in renting their accommodation rather than purchasing. We will discuss pros and cons of renting a place. However, it’s a trade off decision based on certain factors like location, family income etc which decide a preferred option between renting vs purchasing home.

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Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn new languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a fact that children study a new language more effective than mature people. So, it leads to the suggestion that they should learn new languages in their childhood. Personally, I completely disagree with this idea.

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People's shopping habits depends more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have always been seeking for their basic needs, but nowadays purchasing certain products has become as a regular behavior of the individuals in many societies. Some argue that people's shopping habits is mostly influenced by under which age group they are classified. However, I contend that there are far more relevant factors that should be taken into account accordingly.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Athers believes that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Keeping animals in zoos is one of the vexed questions in our time. On the one hand, people want to know everything about animals, and zoos can help us to learn a lot about them. On the other hand, captivating wild animals in zoos is harming for them.

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Some People Say Television Is Useful In Education, While Others Say It Is Useful Only For Entertainment |

many people think that the main role of television is uses for education,other says it should made up by for entertainment only this both voew have there own importance.Which is essay will instends to describe

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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that sharing as much as information about scientific research, business, and academic world is good. Though some people believes that information is too important or too valuable to be shared for free. Information can be shared through many medias nowadays, such as internet, and soci media. Sharing knowledge, is very important for all people in the world to know about it, for instance in business, and academic sector.

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Governments should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Generally, government has been focusing on some aspect in improving the quality of life such as communication, health care and education. There is a need to look into the transportation system especially railway rather than roads. In my opinion, more rail station should be built.There are some reasons I suggest this should be implemented.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

In the recent years,studying in overseas has become increasingly common especially for alumnus from countries such as china and India. The fomer students benefit to develop their language skills by communicating with the native speakers . Downside to this, students are suffered from being seperated from their families. This essay will delineate on both pros and cons.

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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Modern technology has emerged with varieties of new development, making work easier and more efficient. Mobile devices and various highly mechanized machineries have enhanced both communication and work efficiency. Therefore, a few amounts of people believe, the conventional newspapers could vanish with the introduction of these new improvements in science and technology using online services like e-books etc. I do not totally accord to this because traditional newspaper is easy and cheaper.

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In many places, new homes are needed , but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Having a home for living is one of the most important human basic need that people should have beside food and clothes. Even though few people think that expanding the areas for the residential complexes to the countryside is unnecessary thing to do, in my opinion, it is better to enlarge the city to accommodate urbanization rather than just protect the countryside without any purpose. I strongly believe this because the fact that the countryside need to be develop as modern as the city, the living cost in city is high, and it will bring economy benefit for residents in countryside.

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Some people think that government should tax unhealthy foods to encourage people to eat healthier. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Recently, it has been discovered that people eat unhealthy food and for this reason, some persons believe that government should tax junk food in other to ensure people eat balanced diet. I agree that certain measures should be taken by the authorities to curb eating unhealthy food.

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