IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1868

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Completing university education thought by some to be the best way to get a job, On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.

In the modern day society some individuals think that successfully passing out as a graduate or a master from a university is the appropriate way to get employed in an organization. Meanwhile there are some who thinks hands on experience and improving soft skill are more valued. In my opinion, I believe that having practical knowledge which gained through on the job experience and polishing soft skill are much more beneficial.

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Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and so is the media in 21st century. Today, all means of information in form of social media, news media etc can be seen dominating public viewpoint in all forms of individual's actions and thoughts. In my personal perspective , I think it is very arduous task to revert this domination of media over the general masses.This eassy will further substantiate the same with relavent points.

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Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Fossil fuels have been considered as a major power source by many nations till date. However, some countries have shifted towards natural sources, such as wind and sun. In my view, it is a positive development and will discuss why alternate sources are a boon.

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do you agree or disagree that children should be banned from playing computer games?

It is certainly true that computer games have become the focus of everyone's concern. some people believe that restriction should be there on playing games for children. i disgree with the given statement because it is beneficial for children if plays under parent's supervision.

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some people belive that unpaid community service should be a compulsary part of high school programmes. to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued by some people that free community services should be an essential part of secondary school curriculum like charity work, upbringing of town and taking sports classes of younger people. I strongly agree with this argument as it will be beneficial not only for the students but also the society.

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The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is certainly true that a large number pf people loss their life on road accidents. Therefore ,it is a suggestion that imposing a severe punishment can reduce the mishaps on road. However, i compeletly disgree because this is far away from being best method others factors need to be considered.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The purpose on advertisement is to spread the news about new products or service to the customers, also about the new promotion in the existing products or service. We can know about the price and offers about the products through advertising. We need it because we could make a decision when we go shopping. I am of the opinion that advertisement could improve our live and let us know which one is the best.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There are different markers that can be used to classify someone as a good member of a society. These markers vary across the world, people and culture. While there may be some expected traits to be in these markers, some can be quite debatable. Regardless of what these characteristics are, this essay will discuss briefly on different views on where the traits and characteristics that make one a good member of the society should be learned.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

A great amount of trash is been producing by population in the current world. This reality can explain for a lack of aware about the care of planet and for the future generations. However, the authorities still are on time for decrease the rubbish in the Earth, perhaps a solution could be to create laws in order to enhance the enviroment.

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As a result of deforestation and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no scepticism that population of animals is declining due to human activities such as deforestation and killing animals for their fun. I beleive, an issue of saving these living creatures should at the top most priority . This critical problem can be dealt by combined efforts of indiviual and government.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops,Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is a controversial topic whether technology and cultures are compatible or not. While technology gets more advanced, traditional cultures lose their trace as it is believed that they simply don't match. This essay will argure why, this is totally preposterous.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

“Relying on technology and its drawbacks on our abilities to think is a topic of controversy in our society specifically among highly educated individuals. The severe usage of technology caused a variety of problems in some of the urban communities; however, the beneficial exploitation of technology has proved high productivity in most of the industrial domains. This highly debatable issue can be discussed through the demonstration of the benefits of the utilization of artificial intelligence in solving problems, and the abatement of the human thinking abilities due to the extreme reliance on technology in problem solving.

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Increasing the price of fuel is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Traffic and pollution have become issues that are on the increase and the best method of resolving these is by raising the fee at which fuel is sold. In my opinion, I disagree with this solution because instead of solving the issues at hand, it would result to increase in prices of goods and services. These problems can be resolved effectively by establishing traffic congestion and environmental laws and conducting vehicle checks on a planned frequency.

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Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Since, there are thousands of languages around the world, the ability to speak in more than one provides an immense advantage these days. Even though there are many ways to learn a new linguistic skill, schools are where the majority of the population learns a new language other than their mother tongue. In this essay I will discuss about the right time to introduce foreign languages as part of the curriculum and the advantages and disadvantages of each approach.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home once they finish school.They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development?

In many nations, young people decide to move out once they graduate from school and share a rented place with friends. In my opinion, this has both benefits and drawbacks. (thesis statement)

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dvertisements result in people becoming increasingly similar

It is sometimes believed that advertisements result in people becoming increasingly similar and that they discourage individuality. I deem that although advertising certainly does promote conformity amongst certain people, most people will always make their own choice.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

In today’s world, traffic and pollution are a huge obstacles to overcome in every nation. An increase in the cost of petrol is certainly not a better method to deal with such issues. This essay explains the reason to support why this is a bad idea and suggests possible measures.

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some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compered with living in an apartment.

Some people may argued that it is more beneficial to live in a house when compared to an apartment, while I believe that living in an apartment would be a better choice than a house.

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Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

Nowadays, in our globalized life, communication is an inseparable part of our routine. There have been two techniques for making c;face-to-face and written communication. From my standpoint, although both have their own merits, I believe verbal is more effectiveness for individuals.

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Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this positive or negative development?

There are different views about long term trip to experience word after high school. Some young students believe that travelling abroad for one year would open their minds and improves their practical knowledge, On the other side, some believes spend a year during the most active and energetic times of youth in travelling is not acceptable and does not make any sense. In my opinion a gap year travelling should be taken before students will involve in true live, this could help them to choose suitable university subjects or apply proper jobs wisely.

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