IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1973

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the current globalised world, environmental protection is one of the moot issues. while some people believe that it is a sole responsibility of higher authorities and giant firms to make an efforts to protect the atmosphere and an individual person is not able to do anything for the environmental protection, I partially agree with statement because proper legislation by governments and following the proper rules by large organization would be help to address the issue. However, an individual can also contribute for environmental protection.

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Some people believe that upbringing of child is responsibility of a mother. Others say this responsibility lies with father. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary era, raising children is one of the most daunting tasks for both father and mother. It is often argued by some that the child's upbringing is

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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. do you agree or disagree.

There is no gainsaying the fact that nowadays, online shopping become popular in people's life . However most of the people buy things through the internet due to this all shops will close in towns and cities . I completely agree with this given statement and put some arguments to support my views .

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Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the argument between whether innate gene or future exercises making a person to be successful in sports field has become a hot topic. Some people support that nature talent is the most determinant factor, while others believe that the hard practices is key to success. Personally, I think the future training and hard work are mainly considered at the fundamental stone.

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Some people believe that children should begin formal learning at school as young as possible. However, others feel that children should not begin school until they are at least seven years old. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a commonsense that education is of great essence in students’ life-long development. However, parents are confused about whether they should scarify children’s happy childhood by sending them to school at an early age or prepare them academically as soon as possible.

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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

Development world is heavily criticized for generating many environmental problems and its contribution to global warming: the defining problem of our times. The immediate threats due to steadily increasing global warming are the dangerously increasing temperatures and rising sea levels. For mitigating the dangers of the aforementioned problem, the solutions of restricting deforestation and alternative resources to fossil fuel will be analyzed for viability.

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Government investment is the arts ,such as music and theatre is a waste of money .government must invest this money in public service instead. to what extend do you agree with this?

It is important to consider that how a government should allocate its resource towards the overall betterment of the society. Some people think the government should invest public service.In my point of view , I totally agree with this idea.

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Some people feel paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers with relevant examples from your knowledge of experience.

As much as we know the celebrity life is one where confidentiality is a luxury, people always want to have details of your life even your private moments. In my view, this is unfair as there are some moment in our lives that needs to cherished alone. This essay will discuss,how people feel about paparazzi invade the privacy of celebrities through pictures and why others feel this is a price for fame.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Although all public services are equally sponsored by governments, people claim that investment in the cultural trends as music and theatre is a waste of money. I completely disagree with the current idea and the reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs as I believe that art creates the ethnicity of a the particular nation.

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Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Getting a lifetime job is becoming increasingly irrelevant in today's sophisticated world. many youngster are changing their work frequently,because they are not satisfied with their prospective jobs.Satisification levle is not merely responsible for thise cause,some other factors are also included.thise essay will highlight that these are the certainly adventouges despite a few inevitable drawbacks.

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People today know fewer of their neighbours than in the past. Why is this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Earlier neighbours were as important as a family member, but now the trend has been changed. Today only few people take interest to know their neighbours. Moving from one city to another very often and changing of people’s mindset are to be blamed. In order to bring about a change, we need to make an effort to socialize with the neighbours.

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Some people believe that the libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is a moot point that whether libraries are replaced with computers or not. Some people think that they are wastage of economical resources of nations while others hold opposite view that libraries are prominent infrastructure of any country. I also support latter view as they preserve wide cluster of knowledge.

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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

With the development of the globalization, more and more people are able to travel around the world. Some argue that international tourism can create tension with the local people, but not create mutual understanding. I agree with that international tourism can influence local people’s life seriously.

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Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree

These days, there are a lot of people who do their work from home; either it is a part-time or a full-time job. People have argued about it, as some of them believe that working from home has many advantages while others do not agree with it. The following essay will discuss in details about it, but in some circumstances, I would agree if working from home some benefits for employee and employers themselves.

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Now that computers can very well translate all kinds of languages in the world, do we really need to learn more languages in future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, applications like google translation are making accurate translations for free. Therefore, it is now a debateless issue that either we need to learn another language or not. This essay will discuss this scenario using the examples of Oxford University research and Time Magaznie Survey in order to demonstrate the points and support the claims.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions in this?

The topic of each essay appears when you hold the mouse over the link. Every essay is checked, marked, has comments and suggestions. Hold the mouse over underlined words in blue to see suggested corrections. The teacher’s summary is at the bottom of each essay.

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Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Due to a highly compatible environment, today's students have been trying hard to get as much knowledge as possible. That is why it is believed that a wide list of subjects should be included in the university curriculum, while others opine that only specific subjects are matter. I agree up to the point that the wide spectrum of educated people has, the more creative and interesting they are so intelligent differentiation is quite important. However, only a thorough studying of a certain subject differs an amateur from a true professional.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that developing nations undergoing some forms of natural catastrophe ought to be lifted by the developed states who can render help with human resources. This essay agrees with this statement because it is morally justifiable for them to assist the third world nations and to also reduce the number of casualties during those periods.

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Some people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?

It is often believed that punishment for traffic offences should be taken more seriously and I completely agree with this view for two major reasons. Firstly, when sanctions are lenient, people will flout the laws and secondly, disobedience of traffic rules may led to grave consequences such as death and as such, it should not be taken lightly. I will expatiate on these two reasons in the paragraphs below.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that public investments in artistic expressions are useless, being better expended in other areas. Personally, I partially agree with this position due to the priceless importance of both areas.

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