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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is irrefutable that in past peolpe give more preference to small local shops but now large shopping centers or malls are becoming popular for doing shopping due to this numerous small local shops have closed, in recent time period. However, I believe that closed small shops is beneficial in some ways and detrimental in other ways and thus I would considered it to be both positive as well as a negative development.

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Some people prefer living in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in an apartment?

It is irrefutable that majority of masses give more preference to live in a house while opponents feel that the advantage of living in an apartment is more. However, the disadvantages of living in an apartment overweight the advantages.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.

Thousands of people believe that art is the way of their lives. Although the question of whether art education is elemental for school children has drawn much attention from the public, many schools are eliminating their art programs due to budget constraints. However, I believe that children should learn art-related subjects.

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In most countries, animal and plant species are declining rapidly. What are the causes of this? What measures could be done to prevent this decline?

It is certainly true that animals as well as plants species are decreasing rapidly, in few nations. However, this eassy will discuss about the reasons in the first peragraph and then it will concentrate on its solution in the subsequent paragraph.

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Stress-related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the cause for this ? What solutions can you suggest ?

People affected by stress associated illness are rapidly increasing. This essay will discuss the two major factors that contributes to pressure related sickness and also provides suggestions to overcome them.

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Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.

Certain people argue that every types of fault should be fixed punishment .But, others deems that firstly listen the purpose of behind the crime then deciding the punishment.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Although art is recognized as a versatile subject around the world, there are people who think that it is important subject for children at school, others argue that it is a waste of their time. I agree with former argument that art is impeccable for holistic mind growth in children.

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Tv viewing is good for children. Do you agree or disagree?

Entertainment plays a key role in current generation. It become a part of their life's. It is often argued that watching TV by children is not good for them. I agree with this opinion because there career is doesnot depends on Tv.

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Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantage and disadvantage of such a choice?

In present time, some residence prefer purchasing meals from shops and restaurants rather that preparing it themselves. This would be due to the busy lifestyle and easy affordability. However, this has pros and cons of it's own. The upcoming paragraph analyse the root cause of this phenomenon and its favourable and unfavourable effects.

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TOPIC 1: Tourism is a good thing for developing countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

To thrive economically in developing countries, tourism is believed to contribute significantly to this purpose. Although tourism promotes the development of the economy and strengthen the cultural differences, it also causes environmental damages and instability of society.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

The world of sports is a multimillion dollar industry. Around the globe, people flock to sporting events or watch their favourite teams faithfully each week on television. As a result, professional sports athletes receive huge salaries – well above, for example, those of doctors, lawyers, teachers or social workers. There is some debate about whether such outrageously high salaries are justified.

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some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get home work everyday in order to be successful at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Few people think that it's not needed to give the work to home daily to the youngsters by educational institutions. But, other public feels that assignment is must for the kids to get a good score at school level. In my opinion, giving the task to the kids is a good thought, but it's must be in the limit. Because, children require free duration along with their studies.

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People in developed countries are buying more and more cars. Do the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

Due to rapid development in economy and fast access to cheaper loans, more and more people are purchasing cars. While this may provide convenience and greater access to individuals, but it also puts strain on environment due to the pollution caused by the cars. This essay will discuss the benefits of owning a car as mode of transportation and detrimental effects cars have on environment.

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The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognized as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

Today, the number of species under extinction threat is increasing and that is showing us the importance of biodiversity. Fortunately, it is not too late to maintain biodiversity. With small but effective changes we can save many species.

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Some people say that rich nations should help poor countries with their basic needs like food and education while others oppose the idea and argue that the poor nation themselves should try to improve their condition. Do you agree with the idea that rich and developed nations should help the poor nations??

Some people think that wealthy nations should support underdeveloped nations while others argue that it is the uttermost responsibility of their own government to create opportunities for food and the education system. In my point of view, the Government of the developing countries is responsible for their community.

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with the statement?

In recent times, high cost of scientific medicine has made people to lean towards usage of traditional forms of drugs. Alternative forms of medicine are believed to be less productive and deadly because they contain acidic contents and has no regular prescription in their usage. However, their reliability in treatment of some certain ailments and being major source of medicine for our ancestors are factors that prove the statement otherwise.

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Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As we can notice that the automation industry is playing a crucial role in our lives. With more advancement, the industrial science will replace many resources which are going to be extinct. Today, our world is going through severe calamities. At first, it can be envisage that these problems may be overcome by our advance technology, however, in my point of view I believe that depending only on technology is not going to be sustainable for a long period.

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Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Crime is a serious and growing problem in many different countries around the world. While most people agree that it is the best way to have many police on the street, I also accept that it is one of the best way to reduce the problem. This essay will discuss the importance of the police and secondly, it will discuss how we can deal with the problems.

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In recent years, people in many countries have been able to afford more material possessions such as electronic kitchen appliances, computers and vehicles. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this increased level of affluence, and give your opinion about whether this is a positive or negative development.

The business problem that I was working on is identifying the features of the consumer products that are important for the product’s success. The analysis includes identifying the critical features in the products that are most important for it’s success in the consumer market. The main tools that were used in this analysis are Excel, SQL, Python, HDInsight and Hive.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The most popular way that is used more frequently between most parents to punish their children is hitting them. Some parents claim that smacking their children is the most affective way to discipline children. This essay will argue why spanking children is completely the other way around of raising them.

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