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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views

In general, many of them trust that the loss of life is a better warning to avoid terrible violations. Though, many hopes that life long judgement is a good caution. This essay discuss both the views of having punishment with loss of life and then life long prison.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones nowadays has unwanted effects on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rapid development of technology has offered people innovative devices such as Smartphones and Laptop computers, which made the lives of people easier. However, some claim that these advancements have negatively affected the literacy level of the young generation. I strongly agree with this argument.

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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that teaching a foreign language in primary schools is better than teaching it in secondary schools. In my opinion, its benefits far outweigh its drawbacks.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is argued that the rich nations should provide humanitarian support during natural calamities in poorer countries. This essay agrees with the statement, because it helps economically weak countries to recover rapidly, and developed nations will be technically equipped to provide required support.

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In many countries, the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why is that happening? What will be the effects of it to the family and the society?

In most regions of the world, the ritual of having meals with family is fading away. This situation is a consequence of the busy schedule and globalization. I believe that this situation is not good for people and leads to disintegrated and unhealthy families. To start with, the major reason why families are unable to have meals together is the busy schedule and aspirations of the current generation. People in current times are very competitive and aspire to have high profile lives. Consequently, they take up highly paid jobs and end up having a busy lifestyle / schedule. Secondly, addiction to social media has led to a situation where people are only interested in their virtual friends. This also leaves them with no time for their family. Finally, people in this global world coordinate and work with teams located in different time zones leading to changes in lifestyle and mealtimes. The above situation has led to detrimental effects on the family life. The most vulnerable mem...

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

Pollution and traffic problems are one of the ongoing significant problems worldwide. With the spike in number of vehicles on the road day-by-day, I strongly agree that the government best tool is to hike the petroleum prices.This essay will discuss the reasons on how increase in oil prices will help to reduce the traffic and pollution problems.

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Nowadays, child labor has become a major concern. why it is so? What can be done to solve this problem?

Child labor is often at the top of the agenda throughout the world as the leading problem in 21st century. This essay will explore how poverty and poor education system are the root cause of this concern, and through providing free education and controlling inflation this problem can be curtailed.

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Write an essay discussing the pros and cons of smartphones

In this day and age, the topis that the benefits and drawbacks of smart phones deserves consideration.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today.

From the last few decades, people have been using fossil fuels such as charcoal, petrol, gas, and diesel as their main source of energy. With increasing global warming due to the greenhouse effect of these fossils fuels, people are getting more noticed about unsafe use of them. Some of them believe that a safe alternative source of energy should be searched urgently to save our planet.

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Shopping is now one of the most popular form of leisure activity in many countries for young,adult, what do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Now a days shopping is very famous not in youths but adult also. However, shopping is easy because of lots of mediums available. Furthermore, in this modern world there are various easily accessible medium,such as online shopping, which save our time and energy also provide try and change facilities.

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Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product. Discuss if you agree or disagree

There are people who believe that to achieve in business at a better place, should have a trade mark of any one product. I agree with the statement (View point, above notion etc..). This essay will first discuss the role of unique product to get huge number of customers and secondly will highlight grade of the product in a good quality if it concentrates on the single product

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Nowadays, adults do little exercise. Some people believe that the best way to address this issue is by covering great sports events such as the Olympics on television. Others think that it is more beneficial to take other measures. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, adults all over the globe are giving less importance to active lifestyle due to their sedentary living habits, and are suffering from various life threatening diseases. Some experts opine that telecasting of various international sporting events on television could overcome this problem; however, others and I believe that there are myriad of other ways which are more effective, and could encourage individuals to exercise on a regular basis.

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The number of people suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people believe that alternative medicine can help. Do you agree that alternative medicines are effective?

These days, people are falling ill due to change in way of life and this cannot be diagnosed by latest drugs. There are many who believes different method of remedies can help. I agree with the statement. This essay will first discuss, how latest drugs cannot support for permanent cure and secondly discuss, the side effects caused by it can be overcome by the different methods of treatment (causes side effect that can overcome by the different method of treatment)

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Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this statement?

Medical facility has to be chargeable despite of the individuals earning. Also the fitness of individual can manage with in their limit and ideally they are the whole responsible. I disagree with the statement. Firstly this essay will discuss about affordability of medical expenses of each citizen in the country and secondly, society also taking a major part on the fitness of individual.

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Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Those who believe that being well educated is the only way to get highly paid job but some others trust that having good amount of domain experience is the best way to ensure high paid job. In my opinion, having good amount of experience will earn more than the high education.

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Social Media websites have amassed large user bases. Do the advantages of being a part of a social media site outweigh the disadvantages?

Internet based social networks have admired most users basically. In my opinion, being a social media users has both equal number of advantages and disadvantages which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, children are granted by parents to utilize electronic gadgets to develop their knowledge. In my opinion, using electronic gadgets has both equal weightage of advantage and disadvantage. Which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the current situation, the population of those several countries has a higher number of middle age people than the elderly people. In my opinion, this situation is has more advantages when compare to than disadvantages. Which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph.

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Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In current situation, considerable amount of food items are consumed by people received from the farmhouses, located far away from the urban cities. Some Those who believe that the better way to support nature and a cost effective way is to take diet only from local farmers. In my opinion, this practice has more advantages than the disadvantages which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph.

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Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?

In the recent days, most of the couples making the decision to postponing birth to kids later in life. This essay will discuss the possible causes for the increasing trend among new couples and also the consequences that may result of this practice.

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