IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 2105

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers.rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In the concurrent world, schooling is the most important part of life. A group of people believe that schooling is the best way to train children to become a good mamber of society as well skill employee. Therefore, more marits are their own life.However,I agree with this statement. I would discussed in ensuing paragraph.

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Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers.rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In the concurrent world, education is the most important part of life.several people believe that schooling is the best way to train children to become a good mamber of society as well skill employee. Therefore, more marits are their own life.However,I agree with this statement. I would discussed in ensuing paragraph.

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Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to World Health Organisation (WHO), the prevalence of non-communicable diseases caused by excessive of sugar intake, namely diabetes and obesity, has been increasing lately. Some people argue that councils have to take action while the other think that sugar intake is a personal responsibility. In this essay, I shall give my opinion that both parties have their responsibility.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?

Education has most important impacr in our lives. We get our education when we are small. Some people argue that infants shouls start their schooling since they are small, but others disagree with that. In my view, I would like to support that young adolscence should spend their time on playing because of few reasons.

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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case ? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, technology advancement in agriculture does not able to provide food to everyone in the world has become a controversial issue. Although, availability of new method and equipments have increased the production of growth, while, still not everyone is get benefited and accessed by it. This is because of growing population and limited quantity. This essay will discuss problem and possible solution further.

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Some people believe that the museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18. Do you agree or disagree?

Museums and historical places depict an ancient culture and it is a great way to apprise the young ones with the glorious past events of the world. A section of the society opines that it is the best interest if wards below 18 are allowed to witness a diverse history without any charges.

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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence.

In the past families consisted of a father who went out for work and a mother who took care of the children, however this trend has changed in the recent times. To live comfortably in a world with growing expenses, sometimes both parents have to earn. This situation has given rise to the constantly debated topic of whether children are benefited or feel the lack of support due to the parents absence. In this essay, I will discuss the two views and justify as to why I believe both the opinio...

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, young individuals are often involved in a variety of community services. Several contentions exist regarding the necessity of incorporating volunteering activities as one of the pre-requisites for graduating from high school. This essay completely advocates the aforementioned suggestion, as it will bring a lot of benefit to the students and the community as a whole.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Declining health of citizens due to poor diet is major concern of many governments in the world. Different people have distinct mindset. Some section of society deem that it is personal job to take care of their health and food, whereas other opine that government should take care of their citizen's diet. The following paragraphs would shed light onto the approaches before making the final conclusion along with my perspective.

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Essay Topic: Some people think that giving money as gift to teenagers is good while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This essay is about to giving money as gift to young and teenagers, but many of them are disagreed. Although its tradition in many countries especially when youngsters are achieving some targets, or completing their studies, they expect to receive some gifts and surprises from their elders. Hence its definitely important to enhance their confidence and moral. I am strong advocate of this approach to give money as surprises on different occasions instead of other gifts

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In the past people liked to store knowledge in books. However, in the present, we prefer to store knowledge on the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

Books have not avoided the process of modernization. Thus, nowadays people keep information not in paper, but in digital storages on the Internet. I believe that this has more benefits than drawbacks.

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Some people think that paying taxes is a big enough contribution to society, while others think people have more responsibilities as a member of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are a lot of discussions around ways to take part in social life as a citizen. Vast majority of people believe that paying taxes is enough to be a descent citizen. However, the others claim that individuals need to do more to be a fully-fledged part of society. I stick to the second way of thinking.

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Some people believe that museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18 years of age. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Historic buildings depicts the culture and tradition of a nation. Therefore some people opine that there should not be any fee to visit public buildings like Taj mahal memorials and many more atleast for non adults. As authorities should intoduce our historical background to their upcoming generations. I strongly agree with this notion. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will elucidate my viewpoint with more relevant examples.

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Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?

In today's cosmopolitan world it is unusual to find a major city or country where there are no immigrants. People travel more now than they ever did in the past and populations have had to adapt to this transitional lifestyle much more quickly than in the past. Ultimately society, as a group of individuals, directs the way that new arrivals in a country are treated. But the government can do a number of things to support this.

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Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree?

I partly agree with the above statement that employers should give longer holidays to employees to increase productivity. I think that the productivity of an employee depends on many factors. And for each employee, it can be a different factor. Keeping subjectivity in mind, we cannot say that one solution fits all. Each employee has a different motivation for working and coming to the workplace. Some employees work for monetary benefits while some enjoy the social aspect of a workplace.

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In many countries in the world,people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to the latest fashion. Why is this happening ? is this a positive or negative development ?

In the world today, people are becoming more fashion conscious and this is evident in their dressing and hairstyles. In my opinion,people desire to look classy and fashionable in order to fit into the society and this has in turn led to so many illicit practices.

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The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

Family environment and upbringing has a huge impact on the psychology of a child. It is the value system they are brought up in that shapes their personalities. I completely agree that parenting skills play a major role in how children behave in society. Many studies point to an unhappy childhood as the root cause for juveniles committing acts of crime.

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The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

In recent times, there has been an increase in the number of crimes committed by young offenders. While few argue that the main reason is the inefficient parenting skills, others think that is not the only reason. I strongly agree on the latter side of the argument.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Dietary sanitation and good health are amongst the major issues of modern era. Some people think that, as an individual it is our ought most responsibility to improve our dietary conditions and health. However, some consider it government's job to provide quality food for its people. I believe, role of government and awareness in population both are pivotal in this situation.

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With the development of science and technology some people believes that there is no great value of artists such as musicians and painters. What are the things artists can do but the scientist cannot? Why should we encourage the art area?

Science and technology are important drivers of the economic growth and the development in the contemporary world. Although it is true that science and technology have also great impact on our lives as well, but the role of the artists is unforgettable and they contribute a lot like other necessities of individual. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will outline the significance of artists and reasons to promote the art fields.

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