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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

At some point, it is no brainer that people can enjoy more happiness at a young age rather than when they become older. The complete oppsite view also has good points to stand, even with growing responsibilites that adults should bare. I think the oppsite view couldn’t be more true.
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SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO PROVIDE HELP AND SUPPORT DIRECTLY TO THOSE IN NEED.OTHERS HOWEVER PREFER TO GIVE MONEY TO NATIONAL AND INTERNATIONAL CHARITABLE ORGANIZATIONS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

While some individuals choose to give help and support personally to the needy,others would rather offer money to local and foreign charitable organizations. Although,giving money in person to those in need ensures accountability,charitable organizations guarantee fair and equitable distribution of funds for needy people.In my opinion,this is the best method of rendering help.
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Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?

Globalization means interaction and integration among people, companies, and governments worldwide. It is commonly believed by many that we live in a globalized world but some people believe that it is not advantageous to us. However, I believe that to a great extent, it is a positive development and to lesser extent it has some negative impacts.
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Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in need. Others however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

While some individuals choose to give help and support directly to the needy,others would rather offer money to national and international charitable organizations. Although,giving money personally to people who need them creates a relationship between the donor and reciepient and ensures that the monies are used for its purpose,charitable organizations guarantee fair and equal distribution of funds for needy people and in my opinion,this is the best method of rendering help.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Few people thinks it is always good to accept the fate and shows reluctance to change while many people assess the situation and improve their shortcomings. The first option is good at some situation, but, why many people prefer the latter option, will be discuss in further paragraphs.
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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?

In this contemporary world, renting of an apartment is considered a better option in a few countries, rather than owing it. In my opinion, it has more apparent benefits in the form of less financial strains and smooth relocation for a job, than the negligible deficit of economic insecurity at the retirement age.
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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?

In this contemporary world, renting of an apartment is considered a better option in a few countries, rather than owing it. In my opinion, it has more apparent benefits in the form of less financial strains and smooth relocation for a job, than the negligible deficit of economic insecurity at the retirement age.
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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?

In this contemporary world, renting of an apartment is considered a better option in a few countries, rather than owing it. In my opinion, renting of a house has more apparent benefits in the form of less financial strains and smooth relocation for a job, than the negligible deficit of economic insecurity at the retirement age.
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Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Various indivisuals provide private data to the companies, for accessing the softwares they require.Although security is a major disadvantage in providing the data, but the ease of getting things done through applications and staying in touch with various people through social apps are major advantages.This essay will explain how the advantages are very important to survive in this tehnical world and how the disadvantage which is mainly security is not a very valid one.
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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Every country is growing day by day and everyone prefers those countries which have a plethora of facilities. Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world and nowadays, it is easy to access every item in each country.
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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view.

Zoos continue to be controversial, even now that they have evolved into ‘animal parks’ or similar facilities. Most people love animals, and there are strong views on both sides, which I will discuss now. People opposed to zoos highlight the unnatural way in which animals live in such places. For example, captive animals do not need to hunt or raise offspring, and this means that they are not living as nature intended. Furthermore, the anti-zoo lobby point out that animals probably suffer mentally when kept in captivity, even if their surroundings are spacious and similar to the natural habitat. Symptoms of mental issues range from repetitive behaviour to eating disorders, and these are often seen in captive animals. Lastly, it is often said that zoos add little to animal conservation, which is better served by preserving their habitat. Conversely, those who support zoos say that in most cases they offer ...
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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We all done things in the past that may had succeed, or failed, however, to argue that the proportion of past experiences contributing down the road in one’s life has very diverse point of views.
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Now a days some people think that libraries are not necessary, while other disagree. Both views and give your own opinion and example.

Libraries have been source of information and entertainment for years. With easy access to electronic books over internet many open that public libraries are no longer required, however many other contradict stating the essential. Both the views are discussed in enjoying paragraph along with personal opinion.
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"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Consideration of health care has been changing recently. Participants of health care has started to support a new belief: “Prevention is better than cure.”
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every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life would be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Recently, the importance of a language has been a topic of great debate. It is argued that annual extinction of many languages is not a problem, because with few languages life would be convenient. I disagree with the this concept, in my opinion, convenience of using key languages does not make dying out of less spoken dialects acceptable.
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In recent years,the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occuring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

The family system remains a vital part of the human social structure. In this present generation, the makeup of families, as well as the roles are changing. The major reasons why these changes are occuring are  because people now take up roles depending on who is better equipped rather than basing the decision on whether one is male or female and also because people are no longer staying heterosexual, as other gender fluid terms have come into play. In my opinion, it is a positive developme...
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Should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with the statement.

Schools are good source of learning varied languages. Based on the difficulties and stress educatees undergo in learning foreign languages ,many opine that school should restrict teaching other languages to children. However, I completely disagree with this belief and will justify my opinion in ensuing paragraphs.
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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Agree or disagree? Give opinion with personal example

Having higher salary is considered to be significant than job satisfaction. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the notion that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career because I believe that personal relationship as well as relishing the work are more important.
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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is one view that suggests that children should be taught at home for their better development, while there is another view that suggests that it is essential for them to attend school. There are benefits attached to both views. Youngsters who go to school often develop better social skills, and they get better prepared for future jobs. On the contrary, children who are taught at home receive better attention.
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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

The meal is the most valuable things in our life for the begining of human exist. Devoloping of human civilization, mankind find foods easier and fast. However, some people think that it is not healty and decrease life quality, as growing technology and population. In contrast, the new technic of cooking helps to people among many factors such as; time, enough food sources and make new vision of best agriculture and animal farming
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