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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Some people think that wild animals should not kept in zoos. Other believe that there are some good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The issue of whether zoos oughted to be existed or not has been widely debated because some people claim that wildlife are simply to provide entertainment, and it is unnecessary to put animals in a captivity. However, there are many beneficial reasons in terms of education and conservation value as I will discuss both side view and my own opinion
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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?

Some people hold the belief that television and electronic game that contains violence can have a devastating effect on the society. In my point of view, I partly agree with this statement.
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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-beingWhat factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

As all people spend most part of their life at work, being pleased with it is vital to people’s health and prosperity. It is still a question what makes individuals pleased and how much they expected to be close.
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Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Recycling helps to protect the environment. Recycling reduces the need for extracting, refining and processing raw materials all of which create air and water pollution. As recycling saves energy, it reduces greenhouse gas emissions, which helps to tackle climate change. Some people think children should be taught at school whereas others believe it should be taught at home. In this essay, the benefits of both will be discussed.
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Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

One of the most controversial issues today relates to the choices between houses and apartments. While a wide range of people intends to stay in houses, others tend to live in high buildings. The following paragraphs will delve into both points of view.
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These days, people work in more than one job and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

I will start by analysing the advantages of changing career several times during the lifetime. One of the greatest benefits of having more than one job is that it is easier to earn money. Generally speaking, many students find an occupation so as to be able to become independent from their parents in terms of money. Although they find some trivial jobs, such as being a cleaner, they can become professional specialists after having finished their studies.
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🔶Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. 🔸To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is undeniable that large cities have provided great facilities for their citizens; nevertheless, problems that have been arisen from the overpopulation of these cities, such as accommodation issues and traffic, make people believe that by transferring large corporations and factories to suburbs, these crises can be alleviated. I strongly see eye-to-eye with these people because of the various reasons mentioned in this essay.
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Some people say it is a waste of time to plan for the future and that it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that planning for the future is an activity that wastes time and concentrates on the present is more essential. In my opinion, I disagree that it is unnecessary to plan for the future. Firstly, this essay will discuss the benefits of make a plan for the future, and secondly, discuss what will happen if we do not prepare for the future.
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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your opinion

These days online classes have become extremely popular because of their effects, as more and more universities are offering courses online. However, despite the popularity of online education, the majority of students prefer traditional classes. When you compare the two classes, they seem similar, but they have many differences, especially when school are closed due to corona-virus.
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Some people think that the government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree?

In society today, the idea of the government should impose higher tax on fast food to encourage people to start eating healthy remains a debatable topic. In my opinion, I completely agree with that idea because I think unhealthy food affects detrimental to people’s health.
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the media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. why do you think people are interested in the live of famous people? do you think its a good thing?

The media's interest in infamous people who have typical backgrounds is the outpouring and unpleasant to some. It is because many people can relate to it and dream of achieving similar goals. In my opinion, the media is losing its actual purpose by giving more importance to renowned people and is deteriorating its growth.
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There is more and more violence in movies and on TV, therefore it is necessary for the government to control the amount of it to decrease the violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that films and TV programmes today have become indispensable, influential, and replete with violence. From my viewpoint, violence should be proscribed or censored to avoid negative impacts and lower the rate of violent crime, nonetheless, can be considered as a warning on possible real-life situations.
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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Even though the crime convicts have served their jail terms, many of them still commit more crimes. The reason for this could be, they developed some kind of resilient to believe that the benefit they received from their action outweighed the punishment they received. Some potential solutions to prevent this might be to extend the punishment with rehabilitations and also training courses on how they can live as a normal person.
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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that parents whose children attend private school should be exempted to contribute tax that support the state education system. I completely disagree with this view due to several reasons.
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In cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

In modern society, traffic jams are the most urgent issue for many cosmopolitan cities around the world. There are several causes of the high volume of vehicles on roads. However, there are certain steps that governments should take to resolve this problem. This essay will be discussed both main factors contributing to this problem and solutions to remedy.
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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

At a very young age, it can be beneficial for kids to know about what is good and bad for them. Some are of the viewpoint that comeuppance is the best kind to help children to learn such differences. I support this statement to a major extent for some valid reasons. My preference as well as kind of comeuppance is discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
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Some people think that social media platforms are useful for business and making new friends, while others think that such websites are harmful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.

The era of internet communication is consistently developing. One face of its developing is the evolution of social media, when we know that social media usage is one of the most popular online activities. In 2019, an estimated 2.95 billion people were using social media worldwide, a number projected to dramatically increase to almost 3.43 billion in 2023.
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Some people think that social media platforms are useful for business and making new friends, while others think that such websites are harmful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.

Since 1998s, the era of internet communication is consistently developing. One face of its developing is the evolution of social media, when we know that social media usage is one of the most popular online activities. In 2019, an estimated 2.95 billion people were using social media worldwide, a number projected to dramatically increase to almost 3.43 billion in 2023.
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news editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. what factors do you think influence their decision? Do we used to bed news ? would it be better if more good news was reported ?

What we see on TV and what we read in newspapers, have sociocultural influence on our lives. Without a doubt news is finalised by news editors, they decide what should be telecast on television and print on newspaper and these decisions depends on certain factors such as privatization, publicity and profitability. It also be noticed in the past two decades, most of the news channel coverage bad news rather than good news.
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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. But the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative form of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Possession of cars have increased over time which have led to too many cars on the streets. Other ways of transport should be considered and laws should be set in place to place a check on ownership of cars and its use. I strongly agree to this. Three reasons have been started to support this decision.
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