IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 128

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, most people are willing to share their personal data with technology companies in order to use their software. Even though such behaviour has its advantages like reduced cost of purchase for users and low legal complications for the organizations, I believe the disadvantages like the risk of fraud and invasion of privacy outweigh its benefits.

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Some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, people's lifestyles are so varied from the prior owing to the fact that women like men can do a rage of the work, so a group of people believe that it is important that universities have the same figures for both genders in various fields. In my opinion, we have to think both sexes are the same as each other, and based on their exams accept them for every subject inasmuch as populations have different abilities; moreover, some works are better for one gender.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons of this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Recently, irresponsible financial decisions are made by individuals. Moreover, it is a result of reckless spending. In this essay, it will be discussed how the educational system and consumerism play a significant role in this situation and how this problem could be solved.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In recent times, the number of automobiles on British roads has increased. Some people believe that there will be approximately 29 million vehicles by the year 2000, which made them argue that there should be a replacement for cars and an international law to control car ownership and use. This essay agrees with the notion above because reducing the number of cars on roads will clear the air pollution and make the roads safer for cyclers.

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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A plethora of invented technologies have brought a lot of new opportunities for everyone, and employees are not an exception. Nowadays, people can work distantly, even from another country. I believe that the advantages of this question outweigh the disadvantages.

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School and university students learn lessons far better from their teachers than ‎from other sources, such as the internet and television. To what extent do you ‎agree or disagree?‎

There is an opinion asserting that a lot can be inferred that tutoring from other sources is much easier to learn than instructing in universities and schools. These interpretations can provide us with an insight into how these institutions could provide a quiet place for learning.I, however, agree with the given statement on the basis of financial constraints and connecting between students and teachers.

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Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty, so some people think that rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people argue that to tackle poverty in third world countries, developed countries should find other alternatives rather than focusing on financial support alone. This essay will critically discuss further about this topic.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Marketing is a powerful tool widely used by businesses to attract potential customers. Among the numerous methods of advertising, emphasizing that products are new or have unique features has become the most popular strategy. This approach stems from the limitations of advertising mediums and the need to capture consumer attention quickly. In my opinion, this trend is a positive development because it fosters innovation and offers consumers a variety of choices.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

It is well known that a great number of Britain's elderly population opt to move to aged care where they are well looked after. Sometimes it is paid by the government. In my opinion, although families should pay for this care, governments should give economic support when needed. I will argue the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

It is commonly believed that it is very difficult to follow fashion trends and they still exist just to sell clothes nowadays. Otherwise, some people say citizens should dress in comfortable dress also what they like. I fully agree that citizens should wear anything that they want because I believe a comfortable dress makes people more confident rather than just following the trends.

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In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers is important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

It goes without saying that communication has a significant role in business development. It has been argued that in big enterprises, coordination between employees and managers is the key point of success. However, others claim that there are some other aspects that play a more crucial role in business progress. I believe effective communication between company workers is the most valuable thing.

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Children spend a lot of time watching TV and playing computer game, however it does not help in improving their mental abilities. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that staying on the phone or watching TV is enjoyable, but it has its disadvantages. While some believe there is no harm in letting their children spend most of their time in front of a screen, others strongly oppose it. In my opinion, excessive screen time can diminish children’s mental abilities. This essay will discuss how this can cause children to lose focus in school and weaken their social skills.

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Some people think computer and internet are important in children's study , but other think students can learn effectively in school and with teachers . Discuss both sides and give your own opinion .

Thousands of years have passed, and still, the best way of learning is by writing what you learn. So, this information leads us to the fact that using computers and the Internet in studies is actually a bad idea. For example, in math or chemistry, it is impossible to learn without writing. but there are a few points to mention about this question.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles others think there are other better ways . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people believe that road situations get more and more dangerous every year. Although opinions are divided regarding the safety measures that have to be taken, when ones claim the regulation of speed limits might help, others assume there are more efficient ways to improve safety. The following essay looks at both sides of the argument, I will support both sides of view in the following paragraphs.

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People believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects equaly. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects that they are best at or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some believe that it is more beneficial for pupils to study every subject at school, while others think that it is better to prioritize one subject that is necessary.

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Some people belive that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects equally others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects that they are best or that they find the most interesting discuss both views and give your own opinion

Concentrating on more future-related or interesting subjects should be taught to students,on the other side they have to pay more attention to all subjects at the same time which are provided by the school.In this essay, I will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of each option and will give my personal opinion.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities Closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals are of the opinion that with the rapid increase in online shopping, all stores in suburban and urban areas would soon go extinct. I firmly disagree because not everyone can patronize online stores, especially people who are not tech-savvy, and there is the risk of breach of privacy and online theft.

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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

In recent days, the number of tourists who visit landmarks which have irregular ecosystems has been increasing. These types of travel have some negative and also positive points that I will discuss both aspects in my essay.

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First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

First impressions during a job interview are often considered critical in determining whether a candidate will secure a position. Some people argue that performing well in interviews is the key to landing a good job. In my opinion, while interview performance is undeniably important, other factors such as qualifications, experience, and networking play an equally vital role in ensuring job success.

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Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want, but other people think they should be more realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Today, the debate over whether young people should follow their passion when selecting a career or adopt a more pragmatic approach is increasingly pertinent. In my opinion, it is a wiser option to select an occupation that is most likely to provide for the future.

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