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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibility. Do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about what kinds of functions that a business should take. While some people believe that making a profit is more important, others state that besides creating money enterprises should take their responsibility to society. I partly agree with both views.
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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

A lot of employees unable to exercise during weekdays as well as weekends consequently, facing many issues related to health such as obesity and cardiac problems. This is due to their hectic work schedule during working days and lazy behaviours in their leisure time.
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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Do Implementing curfew help teens more responsible? In certain locations in the United States, young peoples are restricted to go out without adult supervision at night because of legal restriction imposed by the government. In my opinion, this approach offers many benefits; however, this act taken by authorities will also have its own drawbacks.
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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In certain locations in the United States, young peoples are restricted to go out without adult supervision at night because of legal restriction imposed by the government. In my opinion, this approach offers many benefits; however, this act taken by authorities will also have its own drawbacks.
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*Some people prefer one-on-one lessons, while others prefer group lessons. Discuss both views and give your opinion.*

Nowadays, some individuals worldwide selects person-to-person tutorial, while others prefer group lecturing. I think that in one-on-one lessons, ones could attain proper attention, whereas group learning creates a computational environment and makes confident.
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Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples.

For some time now, it has become a topic of debate where most of the individuals believe that growth in the industry and the immense surge in number of global organisations have impacted the mother earth negatively. In my opinion, I completely agree with the above stated argument and in this essay I will elucidate my viewpoint with supporting arguments.
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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Rewarding the students who show their good perform in the school is better than punishing them. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement which will be discussed with deep reasons before the rational conclusion below.
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A woman’s place is in the home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been believed for years that it's the duty of the wife to look after the home affairs. I don't agree with this, as I believe that a perfect house is the one, where both partners play their roles. Secondly, the women are as successful in the field as the men.
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A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be done to reduce violence in our society today?

It is widely believed that the telecasting of crime scenes in movie theatres and the television screens has played an incredible role in spoiling the activities of youngsters; while it has, risen the unlawful action in local areas. Therefore according to my opinion, there should be restrictions on certain films prior to launch and the warning policy for criminals.
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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, getting into extreme sports is enjoying an upsurge in popularity; however, some people hold the opinion that the government should prohibit them due to their potential risks. I completely disagree with the idea that these sports are too dangerous, and I therefore believe that they should not be banned.
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LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEMS AS WELL PRACTICAL PROBLEMS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

People tend to think differently on a single issue as some suggest, that speaking a non-native language can cause a grave crisis while others possess the opposite mindset. However, I totally disagree with the statement.
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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

For the past decades, it is obvious that television is thought to be the cause of many people's lazinesses and antisocial tendencies. In some specific extent I agree with this statement, but I still believe that there are many benefits which should be taken into consideration.
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More and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? what are the possible solutions?

In this competitive world, increased number of individuals apply for the same job. Hence there is a competition among old and young candidates, thereby creating problems like unemployment, agitation and increased criminal activities. These issues can be solved by creating more job opportunities and enhancing business activity.
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In the past when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

At the present time, thanks to the advances of travel industry and globalised education, students decide to study abroad much more often than in the past when it was more common to go to local universities. This essay seeks to explain the benefits and drawbacks of this new trend.
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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenager spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?

In modern days, it is believed that children are not exposed much to the world of jobs. Although others think that schools should encourage their students doing part-time jobs when going to school, I partly disagree with the statement.
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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Current environmental issues such as global warming and air pollution have a substantial effect on the lives of all living creatures including human beings. It is worrisome that despite the importance of this topic, many people may seem to be careless about its negative consequences. As a supporter of a healthier and more natural environment, I agree that the majority of people do not pay attention to the current environmental problems and in this essay, I will present reasons for why people neglect this topic.
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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

The human growth is at the cost of the lives of animals and plants, and it has been argued by many that it can't be changed, whereas the others believe the contrary. I support the latter idea, as the flora and fauna must be saved by making proper policies of civilization as well as devising laws for their protection in order to keep the world green.
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Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern days, it is said that people increasingly focus on national news. Although others suggest that international news is also noteworthy, I believe both should be concerned about for the comprehensive view of the world.
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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenager spend a short time working as well as studying acamedemic subjects. To what extent do you agree?

In modern days, it is suggested that children are not exposed much to the world of work so schools should encourage their students doing part-time jobs when going to school. Although this is quite reasonable, I partly disagree with the statement.
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: Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In modern days, it is believed that the money allocated in technology development of space probing is not justified and there are various better ways to spend this amount of money. Although this is quite reasonable, I partly disagree with the statement.
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