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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Buying things in the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this ways outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, it is irrefutable that a large number of individuals prefer to shop online rather than visiting outlets physically. This trend could help people to save time and as well as wealth. However, there is a risk that bank details might be compromised by a few unauthentic companies. Despite this, buying things on the internet has numerous advantages which surely outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this present world, people are travelling across continents more than ever before. Even though this greatly contributes to cultural exchange, certain rules regarding respecting cultural differences should be followed. Moreover, it is an often argued topic whether hosting countries should welcome cultural diversity or tourists are the ones who should respect local traditions and behaviour.

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Some people think that the government should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. What do you think?

Artists like painters and musicians are an asset for any country and play a pivotal rule in the recognition of the nation. Some advocate that they must get monetary help from the government whereas, many opine that these creative minds should get sponsorships by some other means. I strongly agree with the later perspective of the author as mentioned below in detail.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ? (approximately 250 words)

It is sometimes argued about the importance of the existence of public areas such as squares and parks in modern societies. While I agree that these areas bring many benefits to societies and the spiritual life of citizens, I think it would not be possible to have them everywhere as well.

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Some cites have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings. People think that they should be free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many have an opinion that people who are constructing houses or buildings, should be able to create them with their own design. I agree with the point of view as it has many advantages likes the freedom to express their own design and cost of a building can be reduced to their budget.

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Due to development and rapid expansion supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globalization and industrialization have brought immense changes in the market. With the drastic increase in the number of hypermarkets all across western countries, some believe that small business owners are unable to match their prices and are shutting shops as a result. I, however, opine that this change has provided us with immense benefits which far outweigh the negative impacts. This essay will discuss the aforementioned topic along with examples and supporting arguments.

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Some people believe that the government should support the funds for the arts, while some other people suggest that money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A particular issue about social funds has raised quite a concern at home and abroad. Some individuals consider that governments should spend more money on public health and education while others believe it is more useful to support the funds for arts. In my opinion, it is necessary to look at the inherent details on both sides and leads to a plausible conclusion.

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In the future we may have to live on other planets. For this reason, some people think it is necessary to spend money on research about space. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people are of the opinion that it is important to invest in an investigation about space as there may be a scenario that we may need to live on other planets. This essay strongly agrees with the aforesaid statement. Discovery of water on Mars along with the analysis of data from other planets is indicative that they may be able to support life and all such activities need a huge amount of funding.

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Some people think the best way to stay fit is by joining a gym/health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Health is the top priority for every individual, and everyone ought to keep a healthy lifestyle. However, some individuals believe that gymnasium or a fitness cub would keep them fit, others think that normal walking and climbing would serve the purpose. In my opinion, a gymnasium would be more beneficial for a myriad of reasons. In this essay, we shall discuss these two points further.

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Some people feel that the primary function of a university should be to prepare students for the working world. Others argue that the purpose of university education is to provide knowledge for knowledge’s sake. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is often believed that universities should prepare the students for the complete job whereas others think that colleges have a responsibility of giving them education only. It is not their headache to prepare them to work in the market. In my point of view, colleges are responsible for providing learning as per their working environment. I will discuss both views and would like to elaborate in the below paragraphs.

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Some parent believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both sides.

Studying mathematics in school is considered a redundant discipline, as some parents think, while others believe that it is a fundamental subject regardless of whether it will be used in the future or not. On the one hand, the opinion that mathematics is an unnecessary field of studying at school has weight because computers are used everywhere. On the other hand, some believe that mathematics lays the foundations for logical thinking.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that we should encourage rivalry in children rather than collaboration. Despite the benefit of competition, I believe that young ones that work together become of better use as adults. However, in this essay, the arguments surrounding these issues will be discussed.

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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Most of the people in the society have a belief that some children who have been an offender for a crime should be penalized. Others believe that behalf of them, their parents should be got punishment. It is worth when discussing both views and in my opinion, I believe that giving a penalty to children for their wrong is beneficiary than penalizing parents.

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Why do some people who leave school early are more successful compared with those who complete their studies? Reasons why they are more successful and what is required to be successful?

Everyone desires success, and they do go through various trials and tribulations to achieve it. However, some individuals believe that people who had left their school early are more prosperous than those who finish their education. In this essay, we shall discuss the causes of such people’s success and the requirements for prosperity.

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the cause? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Going on a holiday and finding yourself in another culture is the new trending idea of this century. There has been an increase in the number of individuals going on journeys compared to previous generations. In this essay, we discuss the reasons why it has become more affordable to take vacations and why it is beneficial to go on these trips with a companion.

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Some people think it is always an advantage to buy local products. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people like to purchase products from the local area as they consider it an easy option. I totally agree with this point of view, because the goods are easy to find in a local market and we can check the genuineness of the product before purchasing.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

There is currently a contentious argument over the reason why the crime and drama genres are increasing their popularity. In this essay, I am going to examine potential explanations for this preference and give my opinion about those genres.

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Many people think there is a general increase of anti-social behavior and a lack of respect to others. What do you think are the causes of this and how to improve the situation ?

Nowadays, many people believe that there is an increase in crimes and disrespect in society. In this essay, I will discuss the probable causes and solutions to cater to these issues.

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Some people feel that the primary function of a university should be to prepare students for the working world. Others argue that the purpose of university education is to provide knowledge for knowledge’s sake. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There are several controversial views in society regarding the challenges faced by education. On the one hand, the institution must prepare students for their future professions, and on the other hand, universities must teach knowledge, and how the student disposes of it is a personal matter. I support the thesis that the University should provide a transition from education to work because students should be able to apply their knowledge in a profession. This essay will consider two important factors as independence and the ability to apply their knowledge to work.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

A rapid growth in online learning, especially during the pandemic has raised many questions in relation to this type of schooling. Critics argue that online learning is having a negative impact on learners, while others believe that the outcomes of this situation are only positive. This essay will discuss the beneficial effect and drawbacks of virtual learning.

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