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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions

Climate change is one of the concerns that humanity is facing these days. This essay will suggest the major threats of global warming that caused the rising sea levels, leading to the loss of lands and flooding of homes. However, possible solutions to reduce pollution and build flood protection in the affected area will be discussed.
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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema other says to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Entertainment is vital in every individual's life. Nowadays, newly released movies are easily accessible on mobile phones and mini pads.It is argued by some that films can be seen on personal devices, that is why there is no need for visiting theatres to watch a movie.However, I believe that both have their own significance and the benevolent merits are elaborated in the following passages.
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People today can use the internet to learn about lives and cultures in other countries, so it is not necessary to travel anymore. Do you agree?

Nowadays, the Internet is influencing all of our lives overwhelmingly, people tend to learn about countries and different cultures via web crawling. Hence, novice aspect is becoming popular among society which travelling to other countries might be diluted. However, regarded to this my view is contrasting.
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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the present, with the advance of globalization and technology, children education is a primary concern in any society. Some individuals argue that it ought to begin as soon as early, while others claim that formal education should begin after seven years of age. From my point of view, I tend to agree with the former since this way there is more time to learn and share information.
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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is often argued that graduating from university offers the best chance of finding a rewarding career, while others suggest that real-world experience and the development of practical skills are more valuable. In my opinion, I believe that both of these options can help a person to find a great job and that the optimal choice depends on the specific career a person is interested in.
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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obesity is on the rise and is affecting children's health, all around the world. It is believed by some that this issue should be tackled by the governments. I agree with this point of view as the government can not only spread awareness amongst its citizens but also develop infrastructure to keep children healthy.
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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government have the responsibility to change the situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many parts of the world, there are prominently increasing the number of young generations have been confronted with some problems that including both children's physical and mental issues. Most parents are advocating that governments should take the initiative to tackle the problem so that can make an effort on children’s physical and emotional well-being, Whereas other citizens contend that parents should assume the responsibility for children’s access to quality education and life. I prefer the former.
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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think that people should be free to choose Discuss both views and give your opinion

It's often argued by some populations that dangerous sports need to be prevented. Whilst, others say everyone is free to do any business.I agree with the second statement. This essay will express both views in detail in the following paragraphs until reaching the conclusion.
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In some countries, governments provide payments for unemployed people. How does this impact people? Is this a positive or negative development?

The government in certain countries pays money to individuals during their unemployment periods. In my perspective, this can bring positive development to society and the government as a whole.
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Some people think that to learn a second language well it is necessary to live in the country where that language is spoken.What is your opinion about this?

It is considered by a few individuals that in order to adopt another vernacular, it is essential to be living in that place where it is spoken. In my opinion, learning a second language is a necessity to live comfortably in another country. This essay will discuss why learning a native language spoken in which people live is important.
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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's era, everyone needs fame and there is much competition among the society. In the present generation, famous persons like actors or actresses are more known for their money and looks than their lifetime achievements, moreover, it sets a bad impression on the adolescents. The above statement is agreed and it will be discussed in this essay.
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As public safety is of the highest importance, it is often necessary to test new products on animals. It is better for a few animals to suffer than for human life to be placed at risk by untested products. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, testing on animals in the field of medicine is ramping up. Many people believe that it is a wise decision to make animals suffer than risk a human's life; others, however, have the opposite feeling about this. I advocate the latter point of view.I personally feel it is wrong to exploit them for human benefit.
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The government should lower the budget on the arts in order to allocate more money to education. To what extent do you agree?

Authorities ought to limit the funding on the arts in order to raise the budget in the field of teaching. I completely agree with the statement. This essay will express my point of view in detail in the following paragraphs.
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In order to overcome stress, some psychologists recommend doing nothing at all for a period of time during the day. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

Nowadays, stress is becoming a general topic with the busy and workaholic lifestyle of most of us. Scientists who's specializing in psychology recommend staying away without doing anything to release from the stressful lifestyle. In contrast, it is a bit conflicting according to my view.
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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether adding more physical training in a school is a controversial issue today. I completely disagree that it can cope with the issue concerning the increasing overweight population.
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Many of today’s most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Several representatives of modern society deem that it is essential to spend a day at workplaces whereas others argue with this statement and allege that it is more important to spend time with families or on acquaintances. From my perspective, I definitely support both opinions and am going to reflect on this essay my own view of such an issue in order to confirm my core position.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some professionals argue that subjects that aim to teach pupils overseas languages should be included in the curriculums of elementary school rather than those of mid-school. In my opinion, I believe that there are more advantages of this proposal change than its disadvantages.
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Many people are choosing to move to cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern life, technology is flourishing in many developed countries that are why most people are motivated to move from rural areas to the centre, these days. However, my viewpoint is that all locations could have their merits and demerits but I believe that there are more drawbacks than benefits.
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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Ÿ Should the arts be included in school programs?

It is true that the public adopted the elements of arts such as art,music and theatre are crucial. While I think the arts have been an important issue for our contemporary type of life, also the government would add to the school curriculum arts.
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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

It is often said that in some areas around the world the young generations habitually are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and commencing university studies. This trend could have some benefits and drawbacks.
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