IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 52

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no denying in saying that advents by human civilization have eased their life, however, put adverse effects on the environment. Global warming and deforestation are two stressful issues in current times and are becoming unstoppable. Few disputes the former has deteriorated the nature, while others think the latter is responsible. Elaborating on both viewpoints, I will shape my opinion.

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So,Almost everybody nowadays is found using personal vehicle for travelling purpose. What are the reasons of this increasing trend? Explain what negative outcomes may be faced in the society due to this.

The demands for private means of transportation for travelling is rapidly growing among modern people. Initially, this essay will suggest that the biggest causes of the phenomenon are poor public transit and comfort zone of living standard and then argue that changes in the environment and financial burden are the most detrimental ramifications.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Many people think that you have to speak another language if you live in an abroad nation and it has many sociological and practical issues . I totally agree with this notion because foreigners have different languages , lifestyles , cultures and working patterns . This essay explains what are the social and practical problems which are faced by them , followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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Some people think that advertisements are good for the society whereas others oppose this view. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Recently, there was an argument about the role of advertisements can affect society. In general, there is a contentious debate on advertisement in modern society hence some individuals believe that it is beneficial while others tend to think the other way around. From my perspective point of view, I strongly opine to the advantages of advertising since its methodology of marketing has been prominent in our lives.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Within our high-level cornerstone of knowledge as well as proper education, children nowadays have been doing well in their academic performance. Besides studying, they can have a break to chill with their daily leisure activities ,however, some people believe that it should be in a discipline otherwise the result can be meaningless. From my perspective point of view, I strongly unify with the opinion of the article.

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Many people are copying celebrities from magazines and on TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a good idea to copy celebrities?

A great number of people tend to copy celebrities from popular magazines and on television. By doing so, they try to put themselves in the place of a star. In general, I do not think that this tendency is beneficial for ordinary people and fans.

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People believe that these days there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this? How to improve this?

Politeness and respect towards society are gradually diminishing among the modern generation. Initially, this essay will suggest that the biggest reasons for this phenomenon are insufficient guideline by parents and less confidence level in people and then argue that strong family bonds and acceptance of failure are the most viable solutions.

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Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages, therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The computer is the most powerful and successful invention in the history of human history. These days, computers translate non-native languages without any error and within fractions of a second, that is why many believe that learning a foreign language is a lost cause, I disagree with this notion for the following reasons.

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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowlegde or experience.

Mall numbers have been increasing over the past years and, they have been offering more and more interesting activities each day to the public. However, some people believe that shopping offers a lot of negatives effects while others think that malls provide amazing experiences to customers. I strongly believe that shopping has a hugely positive impact on human evolution.

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It is common practice for some students to take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In today's modernised world few students are preferring to take a leap after attending high school in pursuit to roam or to undergo a job. I think that the above-written decision taken by candidates to pursue their desired function is advantageous to them in a variety of ways which I will discuss in the following paragraphs.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Unlimited numbers of people tend to live in city areas and this trend creat various major problems for individuals and society. Initially, this essay will suggest that the biggest complications caused by this phenomenon are high unemployment and crime rate and then argue that self-employed and personal development skills are the more viable solutions.

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At the present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the number of youths in some societies are relatively higher than those of senior citizens. I believe the benefits of creating new innovations by the youths are more important compared to the disadvantages.

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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning while others believe that traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Although there are many proponents of a traditional approach to education, some now believe that in the modern classroom, the methodology of imparting knowledge should be based on experiential learning. This essay explains that even though I believe that experiential learning is the way forward, traditional techniques are essential in certain cases.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the accompany of modern technology, shopping now can be purchased directly from the internet since it does not only provide convenience but also be prominent in term of helping customers to reach further choices compared to an average shop or an outlet . And, an argument was questioned about this habit of purchasing to be the domain offer for everyone in future. From my perspective point of view, the growth of online shopping is presumed not to disturb the usual custom of buying in the next few years.

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The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the implementation of demonetisation, payment methods became a hot topic of discussion. While some side towards credit cards, many people still prefer to stay with cash citing the reason that credit is still a newer concept in the long history of finance. This essay elaborates on why I feel that credit cards are a preferred payment method as compared to physical currency.

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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

Research on personality development is a vast topic in the field of psychology. There is a view that nothing can alter our identity as it is determined by our genes before our birth. This essay elaborates, why I completely disagree with this view.

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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

It is a belief by some section of society that people who entertain have been able to charge a hefty sum. In this essay, I will enunciate upon the ideas for my rationale and will ponder upon other professions that should have better pay.

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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although it is thought by some that career contentment is more vital compared with a permanent position, others, however, believe that it is more essential to have a lasting post. I consider having work security as essential in a lasting position.

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Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.

Globalisation has brought both boon and bane to human life. Progress brings a lot of changes in the overall development of anything, so is with health. Nowadays it is easy to take precautionary measures than opting to go for treatment of any disease as it becomes very expensive to cope with the same. I agree with the statement and I will discuss this in the following paragraphs.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Work is essential to survive and takes a huge chunk of our lives. In the past, it was quite common to have one job for your entire life, however, time seems to be changing. I think having several earning streams will be a new normal in near future, which will also require us to keep on learning new skills.

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