IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 55

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making temperature higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising?

Global warming is the biggest threat to the continuity of mankind. There are several factors contributing to raising the global temperature, but there have been agreements in the research field to point out that man-made activities are the main root cause. This essay aims to discuss the negative impact of coal and aeroplane on the Earth’s heat. They are notorious for the origins of global warming.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is an increasing tendency among people to carry about their health. Despite it, people in some countries are suffering diseases cause by consumption in excessive quantity. Therefore, governments may impose taxes on this kind of unhealthy products. I partly agree with this statement since the country’s rules should help society in any possible way.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Innate talents for some of the people are exceptional in this contemporary society. There are predominantly two contradicting debates are happening. While, it is generally believed that some people have born with certain talents in sports and music streams to become achievers, but others think that rigorous training and practice makes people good at any talent. I will discuss both views in this essay and provide my opinion with necessary examples.

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Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think they should be knocked down and give way to modem building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is currently a contentious argument over ancient buildings should be maintained or demolished. In my opinion, I quite believe that old households have their values. This essay is going to analyze some comprehensive preferences to support my idea.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The immense development in technology has provided us with a better platform for research that is called the internet. It increases our approach to knowledge limitlessly, which is a significant point for society. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement that it provides us with useful content that helps all of us in our education and employment sectors every day. The essay will discuss the fact that how an internet tremendously helps us and will provide appropriate examples to amply elaborate the fact.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is the main argument in today,s society that high pay scale is primary than contentment at the workplace. In my opinion, I agree with the mentioned statement because it gives the sense of achievement to an employee as high payscale greatly benefits him/her that helps to keep motivated a worker for their farm work. The essay will discuss the statement with appropriate examples of a Chinese survey and a study from the UK will amply elaborate it.

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In many countries, imprisonment is the most common solution to crime. However, some people believe that better education will be effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the rising figures in the crime rate are one of the major cause of concern for a large number of nations. In my opinion, although, improvement in the education system can bring some control on this problem, it can never irradicate it completely. In this essay, we will understand why the imprisonment of the defaulters would be an appropriate course of action to decrease illegal activities.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent (how much) do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It has been seen that a growing number of individuals become overweight because of consuming unhealthy snacks; therefore, many people suggest for imposing a maximum tax by the government on junk recipes to reduce ongoing matter. In my opinion, the proposed step could be decreased the issue in some cases, I think other measures are required.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children ) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the argument for quality education, an aspect that is commonly brought up is theory versus practical teachings. Many individuals believe students should be forced to participate in volunteerism without pay. I wholeheartedly agree with this view and will be discussing why in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often believed that high remuneration is of more relevance than job gratification. I agree with this statement because fat pay increases the level of motivation and financial status of the individual.

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Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

While some individuals think that offences are the production of social unrest, others opine that it is just an innate characteristic of human. In my opinion, both the statements are true if we consider prime reasons for offences.

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Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the modern-day world becomes increasingly advanced and more developed, poverty might seem like a problem of the past. But, the numbers of people living below the poverty line are on the rise. In this essay,I will discuss the causes of this issue, as well as propose possible ways we can help the poor.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As our lives are increasingly becoming consumed by the media, our interactions with advertisements must be closely studied and evaluated. While some experts propose that ads allow us the benefit of being introduced to new beneficial objects, others might argue that they make us more consumerism-oriented. This essay will discuss why I agree with the latter viewpoint.

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some people believe that artefacts from foreign countries should always be returned to their place of origin while others believe important artefacts should remain whether they can be best studied and look after Discus both points of view, and give your opinion

A common argument being had among many people is about artefacts and whether they should be taken to where they were originally produced or if they should remain in their secondary permanent locations where they can be taken care of and also properly analyzed for the sake of learnings. I believe they ought to remain where they will be studied. This essay will discuss both views and in addition why I hold my opinion.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Decreased quality of sleep is the real modern-day pandemic because the number of people who suffer from difficulties falling asleep is on the rise. This essay will discuss the issues that such a problem might cause, as well as the possible solutions that could be utilized to tackle it.

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Some people think that internet is shrinking our world with its tremendous benefits. Others argue that it has major adverse consequences for the course of human civilization due to its negative effects on family relationship. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Technology is flourishing by its leaps and bounds in each and every field and internet plays a prominent role in the human generation. However, it has been argued that the internet is having more disadvantages in people life than the advantages. This essay will elicit upon both the elements then only I will give my own view.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While a number of individuals opine that imprisonment for long periods is the prime way of decreasing offences, others think vibrant actions will be more appropriate to do so. In my opinion, the rate of violence could be dropped by imposing proper laws and legislations considering some aspects instead of just imposing longer sentences; however, both views will be discussed.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by the majority, that embracing of unfortunate times in life, like financial instability or unpleasant job, is the best they can do, while other think that an individual has to put efforts, in order to improve unsatisfactory circumstances. In my opinion, whatsoever is the case, a soul should never quit trying under any condition, as prolonged efforts give a ray of hope for prosperity.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or storage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by the majority, that embracing of unfortunate times in life, like financial instability or unpleasant job, is the best they can do, while other think that an individual need to put efforts in order to improve unsatisfactory circumstances. In my opinion, a soul should never quit trying under any condition, as prolonged efforts give a ray of hope for prosperity.

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Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When talking about refurbishings and renovations, many people are of the opinion that structures that have been up a really long time should be destroyed and a new one built in its stead. I strongly concur with this reasoning and in this essay, I will discuss why.

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