IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 55

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Tourism is causing environmental problems all around the world. What are the main causes of this? What are some solutions?

One of the root causes of the deterioration of the environment is tourism. This is mainly because of exceeding commercial flights and improper ways of throwing trash which is done by tourists. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to cope with these issues.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

There is no doubt that more and more individuals tend to buy branded products rather than local ones due to their advertising popularity and the spread on the market. The main issue this cause is it destroys the regional display and the most viable solution for this is to create special conditions via the decreasing taxes and extra funding.

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For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

Throughout the whole period of the human history reading, writing and maths have composed the core subjects of the school curriculum. Whereas, the discovery of the high technological devices has caused the necessity of possessing computer skills as well. I am entirely sure that nowadays children are obliged to gain appropriate knowledge in the sphere of the high technologies for a number of noticeable reasons.

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Some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent times, societal norms on what are the most influential parameters affecting children’s development have been brought into question. While some individuals assume that external elements as television, peers and music are more significant, others contest that the family is the fundamental factor. In this essay, both sides will be discussed in my opinion why I believe that the family's role is more critical.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign languages can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People living in a foreign country for a better life and environment. Moving to a new nation where masses have different languages can cause various social and practical issues for newcomers. In my opinion, I completely agree with this perspective due to the communication difficulties and lack of knowledge about the facilities in that area.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Latest technologies and ways of purchasing and selling products are changing the lives of their customers. I fully agree with this statement and the reasons and examples to support my agreement are given below.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

Candidates' ability in academic sections should be perused by various types of institutions class tests or mock. It is not accepted to measure their properties via training plan or project work. From my perspective, this proposition is not completely true.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Watching TV is one of the most common favourite pass-time for many individuals. I agree that this entertainment is believed to be a prime reason that people these days have become lethargic and prefer being unsocial. In this essay, we will discuss a few points that will support my views.

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A big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

A huge remuneration is of more relevance than job gratification. I agree with this statement because not only will a high pay increase the level of motivation, but it will also increase the financial status of the individual.

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In many countries students are engaged in some sort of paid work . Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibilities. What is your opinion?

While some individuals think that doing a part-time job is beneficial for international students, others disagree with the statement. I believe, joining a company beside education is absolutely appreciable considering the positive impacts it brings to the participants.

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to set up unpaid community work, instead of just being put behid the bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Incarceration has been one of the effective penalties for convicts for centuries. Some people opine that the captives should be made to serve the community in lock-ups rather than just being jailed. I thoroughly support this opinion and believe that this would instigate more positive outcomes for both the culprits and communities.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

It is commonly believed that online social media has impacted people and the community we live in adversely. In my opinion, I think this is true especially when it comes to children and teenagers.

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in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

In today's world, although the sphere of agriculture has developed significantly and is very powerful at the current moment a large part of the population still go hungry. Firstly, this essay will discuss why this might be the case and, secondly, it will analyse one possible way to solve this issue.

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In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods you need, it is also perceived as entertainment. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience.

In this century, many people consume all their expenses on shopping not only to have the goods they need also to enjoy buying new products. In my opinion, that behaviour they gain form advertisements and influencers, and I am of the belief that this a negative development on society. I will discuss that below in this essay.

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making temperature higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising?

Global warming is the biggest threat to the continuity of mankind. There are several factors contributing to raising the global temperature, but there have been agreements in the research field to point out that man-made activities are the main root cause. This essay aims to discuss the negative impact of coal and aeroplane on the Earth’s heat. They are notorious for the origins of global warming.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is an increasing tendency among people to carry about their health. Despite it, people in some countries are suffering diseases cause by consumption in excessive quantity. Therefore, governments may impose taxes on this kind of unhealthy products. I partly agree with this statement since the country’s rules should help society in any possible way.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Innate talents for some of the people are exceptional in this contemporary society. There are predominantly two contradicting debates are happening. While, it is generally believed that some people have born with certain talents in sports and music streams to become achievers, but others think that rigorous training and practice makes people good at any talent. I will discuss both views in this essay and provide my opinion with necessary examples.

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Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think they should be knocked down and give way to modem building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is currently a contentious argument over ancient buildings should be maintained or demolished. In my opinion, I quite believe that old households have their values. This essay is going to analyze some comprehensive preferences to support my idea.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The immense development in technology has provided us with a better platform for research that is called the internet. It increases our approach to knowledge limitlessly, which is a significant point for society. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement that it provides us with useful content that helps all of us in our education and employment sectors every day. The essay will discuss the fact that how an internet tremendously helps us and will provide appropriate examples to amply elaborate the fact.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is the main argument in today,s society that high pay scale is primary than contentment at the workplace. In my opinion, I agree with the mentioned statement because it gives the sense of achievement to an employee as high payscale greatly benefits him/her that helps to keep motivated a worker for their farm work. The essay will discuss the statement with appropriate examples of a Chinese survey and a study from the UK will amply elaborate it.

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