IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 50

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe advertisements have positive effect on people and business while others do not. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There are different arguments related to the relevance of the result advertisements have on people and their businesses. Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe it has a positive impact and is beneficial while critics are of the opinion that its effects are negative and is detrimental. However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that the result of advertisements on humans is advantageous in many ways.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Book rooms squander for the nation's valuable assets and funds and it must be replaced with developed technology known as computers. Although this notion is favoured by one part of the society, in my opinion, these machines cannot overcome the ancient way of spending time in libraries. Initially, this essay will demonstrate the role of book rooms to develop a social life and then it will argue the major benefit to access of unlimited stuff for readers by computers.

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TASK 2: Some universities will offer their courses on the Internet instead of traditional classes so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

Universities in recent years are providing Internet-based courses for their students, which might come with a number of benefits. However, I would argue that this development is negative, and this essay will explain my viewpoint.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

A number of persons believe that forceful attitude usually depicted in movies and video games has a negative impact on the population’s behaviour; however, some other people do not think it does. I believe that watching or playing violence on contemporary media has a significant negative effect on how people act. Analyzing that we believe what we see or hear and that society is a reflection of what its people are exposed to proves this.

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The number of people are at risk at serious health problem is only because of overweight. what is the reason and how it can be solved?

It has been claimed that obesity puts individuals at risk of acquiring so many serious illnesses. This essay will examine the reason for this trend and a solution will be provided.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent decades, the elderly population has been augmenting as a reflection of the development of countries and sciences. Nevertheless, this social phenomenon also created a demand for care services and nursing homes. There is a belief that the authorities should pay for these costs and I echo this opinion.

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Many countries on the world are developing their tourism. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there are various ways of making money, one of the sectors was tourism which has been recommended on this topic. As its contributor is benefit in term of boosting a nation's economy hence many countries in global are developing their tourism. From my perspective point of view, however, the opposite side always exists to confront the positive as if it is proof of the balance.

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As a result of electronic inventions, people do less physical activity and this is having a negative effect on their health To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, within our accommodation in term of modernity, life in recent years have been dissimilar compared to the past as it has modified the way of working progress to simplicate. However, there is an argument on this topic since it has been criticizing for its influence on health. From my perspective point of view, I agree that this procedure has created many health issues for some individuals but in an overall vision, its contributor to our physical is not critical yet. In contrast, they help us to improvise society's standard.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is a debatable issue that students should learn the science of food and cooking skills or they should concentrate on studying the main subjects. In my essay, I will discuss both views and explain why learners should experience a learning program that combined both.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For the past few years, people all over the world are not having enough time to spend reading books. Some people opine that paperback books, as well as printed news editions, would be replaced completely with the online form. I completely agree with it. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will put forth my views in detail.

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Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Community's funds are being spending by the authorities on individuals to impart some coaching to get success in sports competitions globally. Although this notion is favoured by one part of the society, others have a counter-argument that there are numerous problems are facing by the local inhabitants and the government should solve this issue with this wealth. In my opinion, public capital should be spent on the residents first. Initially, this essay will demonstrate that public funds are helping to develop the national resources and then it will discuss the benefits for communities.

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Some people believe that part time job can ensure better job opportunities in future. Others think job can easily distract students from study. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a great debate between community members whether a part-time job may provide opportunities for a job or will hinder scholars from completing their studies effectively.As we see nowadays because of huge technological evolution, many individuals tend to have some tasks besides their studies, which I extremely agree with.

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The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

The Industrialisation of megapolis has led to an increase in the percentage of persons migrating from rural to urban areas in search of greener pastures. It has therefore led to serious problems such as overpopulation, but there are a number of solutions available to tackle it. This essay will discuss the causes of rural-urban migration and profer solutions to it.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree ?

There has been a surge in online shopping in the last two decades, providing users with options to buy goods and services. However, I disagree with the statement that online shopping can lead to the shutdown of shops in towns and cities.

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Human activity has had a negative impacts on plants and animals.Some people think that this cannot be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nature and creatures badly effect by the masses actions. A number of individuals believe that it is impossible to overcome this problem but the rest have opposite views.I will substantiate both points and my perspective in the following paragraphs with appropriate examples.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, within our stage of modernity, our tasks have been modified to simplification as well as the populations are able to access the information from the internet since there is a diversity of details. However, some individuals believe that libraries are a waste of resources while others against the comment. The purpose of this article is to have a view on the indicated topic and distribute my own perspective point.

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Topic: In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? disagree?

In this technology-driven world, people are more self-dependent. Hence use of living organisms for the purposes of diet, attire and cure is not very crucial. I agree with this notion completely. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will put forth my views in detail.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many people argue about university course selection; some believe undergraduate should only be allowed to choose subjects that are useful in the future, as science and machinery. However, some others say students should have the freedom to select their preferred course at the university. My essay will discuss both views and reinforce the latter opinion.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the word. Do you think this is a positive or negative development

More and more countries become similar because people have an opportunity to buy the same products almost anywhere. I think it is a positive tendency as it makes many countries open to foreigners and stimulates the economics of different nations.

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The expansion of multinational companies and increase in globalization produces positive effects to everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Globalization and the flourishing of multinational enterprises is a ubiquitous phenomenon that is benefitting not just the nations but also inhabitants. Both these factors have completely flipped the image of society and its working bringing out positives as well as negatives. Nevertheless, I strongly concur with the idea that it showcases the positive developments. I will elucidate on my conviction with relevant examples.

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