IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 47

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Many people these days choose to work abroad after graduation. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.

It is going without saying that being employed abroad following finishing post-secondary schools is skyrocketing that brings pitfalls as well as benefits. Notwithstanding, this discourse delves into both outlooks, and subsequently will put forward my own perspective, accordingly.

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Many governments invest a great deal of money in space research. What are the advantages and potential disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?

Understanding the universe beyond the earth's atmosphere is an interesting activity for all the countries across the globe. The majority of governments around the world are spending a huge amount of money to explore space. There are considerable merits and demerits to this phenomenon, however, I will explain why the advantages outweigh the drawbacks in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Conducting experiments on living creatures is commonplace. Although there are some real benefits to the human society favouring the practice, the sufferings of other creatures are much more significant. In my opinion, it is imperative that all forms of animal testing should be completely prohibited by the law.

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Some people believe that advertisement persue them to buy thing, others think that they do not mind it.Both view and your opinion.

Nowadays, advertisement is omnipresent. There are some people who think that these commercials make viewers buy things, the opponents consider this is no longer happens. I, totally agree with the former’s view because the advert has a strong influence on buying culture.

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Countries with long average working hours are economically more successful than those countries which do not work long hours. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has been much discussion revolving around whether a higher number of working hours are the key to the nation’s financial success. I personally disagree with that insight, and the reasons will be discussed in this essay.

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Theoretical subjects such as mathematics and philosophy are taught in universities but students prefer more practical subjects such as accounting and computer programming. Some people believe theoretical subjects should be abandoned in universities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that university students consider career-related subjects more preferable and some people argue that notional curriculums should be dismissed. However, I disagree with this argument and believe they are essential for higher education.

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It is a common aspiration between many young people to run their own business rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?

Being an entrepreneur is an ability to run a business with successful strategy implementations and bringing profits to the organisation. It has become a dream for many individuals to run a business themselves instead of employing a company. There are considerable merits and some demerits of this decision, which will be discussed in this essay coming forth paragraphs. I will provide supporting reasons and examples to back up why advantages are higher than disadvantages.

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The care of old people is a growing problem. Some say the government should care for old people. Others say that it is the family’s responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

An increasing problematic issue looks after aged people.It is argued that caring for old people is whether the response of their relatives or the government .I believe that this topic has to handle both by their family and the government.

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Some people believe that children should be allowed to choose what subjects they study at school. Others argue that everyone should study the same subjects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The argument about what subjects school children can study has both sides. Some opiate that there should be a choice while others argue that there should not be. In my opinion, the choice of what courses to major in can be chosen at a certain level.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is the case? What can be done to attract local people?

It is often seen that cultural heritage hotspots are mostly popular among outer visitors, not locals. Although this problem can be attributed to a whole host of reasons, some feasible solutions can be considered to address this.

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Nowadays longer distances are travelled by people to work and study on a daily basis. Some considered it to be a negative development. While others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At present, people have to travel to work or study on longer distances every day. Some think it is a negative tendency, while others are against this opinion. I believe that such a tendency has more negative effects than positive ones.

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Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number, and so on) for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary era of communication, personal details of individuals need to be provided for creating social media and other internet sites accounts. This essay will argue why sharing private information online has more negative sides than the benefit it has.

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some people argue that it is the best to accept bab situation, such as unsatisfied factory job or shortage of money. other believe that it is better to try and improve such situations discuss both views and give your opinion.

Handling work pressure has become incredibly difficult nowadays. However, it is argued that contentment with the present condition is better than making some efforts to change and uplift the finances. I completely disagree with the aforesaid notion because working hard in order to live better life can make major transformations in the economic condition of the individual. This essay will discuss both views.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Obesity is a concern throughout the globe and a burden on the health care system. Few individuals are of the opinion that in order to tackle this issue ,more importance should be given to physical training in educational institutions. I completely agree with this opinion and the same shall be discussed further in this essay

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Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possibl. While others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinio.

In this contemporary world, it is irrefutable that schooling acts as a torchbearer for the youngsters. However, it is argued by many individuals that schooling of young children must be initiated from the very beginning, while others opine that it should not begin before 7 years of life. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and argue why I think the former point is better.

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With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to the ever-increasing population, many people today, not by choice, reside in apartments with no place for recreational activities. In my opinion, it is vital to have sufficient space for families.

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Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argued that there is no need for parents to read stories since children can help themselves with reading and watching videos. While I understand that there are difficulties for busy fathers and mothers, I believe storytelling is a great measure to help offspring's development.

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In many countries the widespread use of the internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Is technology a boon or a bane? This is the most arguable issue as with advancement in technology people are able to do their job remotely or do homeschooling rather than commuting to the concerned places. However, I am of the opinion that the environment which we adapt to while working at an office or studying in educational institutions are more beneficial for the overall growth of the company and also for the personality development of a student.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the improvement of communication technologies and continuous development of infrastructures, travellers, as well as scientists, are now able to roam around different inaccessible sites, formerly unexplored. Although conquering new areas may hamper the biodiversity of the surroundings and cause injuries or even the demise of any visitors, exploring new areas have many positive aspects such as discovering previously unknown sites and inventing a wide range of natural resources. In my opinion, sightseers and researchers should be encouraged to travel around new spots in order to bring benefits to human civilization.

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Some people are born to be leaders, while others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give opinion

Leadership is an eye-catching term in our modern life. Some scholars insist that Leaders have their innate set of personality traits that came naturally, and made them distinguished humans. While others believe that leaders can be made through setting the right nurturing environment so they can keep improving their skills. In this essay, I will highlight the two opposing points of view , then I will share my thoughts on why leading people is an art that needs both factors to reach the fullest.

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