IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 49

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A country has to provide its population with different food cereal and crops. It is highly unlikely that a nation will be self-sufficient in producing all edible products simultaneously. A number of people claim that governments should supply the foods cultivated within their border, and they should purchase a minimum amount of foodstuff from outside the country. I think that the idea of consuming foods within the county is entirely preposterous, and nations should exchange foods with each other for the betterment of the people.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The best mode of transport is debatable. Few people say that governments should have more budget for the rail network as compared to highways. Even I am of the opinion that the nation should focus more on the usage of trains rather than motor vehicles.

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In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is the case happening? How should children and teenagers should be punished?

It cannot be denied that today’s youth are engaged in criminal activities like theft, smuggling, etc. in various places of the world. This essay will explicate the two causes of this phenomena and explain how we can tackle this obstacle in the coming years.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The world is becoming smaller every now and then. All the products are mostly available to potential customers all over the world. Even I think it is a positive development that the nations are turning out to be more or less similar as most of the items are easily available globally.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The choices we make decide our paths and in a way, our destiny. It is often said these days that the public has a plethora of options to choose from. Even I strongly believe that vast alternatives are available for all individuals today.

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Nowadays,many people choose to be self employed rather than work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages.

At the present moment, Many young populations worldwide choose to work independently in their startups or projects rather than joining an entity and working as employees. In this essay, I will share the motives behind such step. As well, I will discuss some of its drawbacks of working independently.

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The qualities a person needs to become truly successful cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the talent of a person cannot be taught in an institution. While others disagree with this statement. To be successful one should possess a natural asset that cannot be learnt from schooling. I agree with this as when folks are exposed to the real situation they can gaze at the ability of an individual. This essay will discuss the supportive points on the given task.

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Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. what are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions.

The work-life balance for modern society is becoming an unachievable task even after putting more efforts into it. Initially, this essay will suggest that the biggest complications by this circumstance are less quality time with family and health issues and then it will argue that decreasing the number of working hours and doing regular exercise are the most viable solutions.

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At the present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

The average range of young generation is rapidly growing in some nations compared to elderly citizens nowadays. In my opinion, the benefits of this condition outweigh the drawbacks. Initially, this essay will demonstrate the role of adults to develop their countries with the latest concepts and technology and then it will discuss the importance of experienced elders.

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Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different arguments related to the various education problems that we face today. Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe that the importance of studying at university may boost their own opportunities, while some critics oppose it, as they think there are other professions that are required for society. However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that the harm of pushing people forward to an undesired outlook certainly will bring a variety of mental issues.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are different arguments related to the various environmental problems that we face today. Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe that the loss of specific trees and wildlife is a major concern, while some critics oppose it, as they think there are other areas that need more attention. However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that natural hazards like global warming and the shortage of drinking water draw urgent attention.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different arguments related to our attitudes to handle various grim situations in life. Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe that it is better to accept a worse outcome while some critics oppose it as they feel we should work tirelessly to improvise the results. However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that in the interest of the individual, he/she should strive hard to change the circumstances.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is a debatable issue that students should learn nutriments and cooking skills or they should concentrate on studying the main subjects. In my essay, I will discuss both views and explain why learners should experience a learning program that combines both.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There are different arguments related to the relevance of the effect advertisements have on people. Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe it is highly useful to compel individuals in buying many products, while some critics believe it has no effect on prospective buyers. In this essay, we will discuss both aspects, however, I strongly believe that these ads play a very important role in our life.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is expected in the coming days that the people will refrain from buying conventional books and newspapers as they will be in a position to read whatever they want with the help of the internet for free. Even I strongly believe that with the advent of technology, the communities will be heavily reliant on reading e-books/papers at no extra cost.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

It is an undeniable fact, that pupil these days are opting for schooling abroad than studying in their own country. Quality and scope of the study is a major lookout for the scholar these days. I believe there are various advantages while one is opting to learn outside from better teachers to vast job offers. This essay will discuss the benefits of opting the education in other countries and how it outstand the downside.

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Some people believe advertisements have positive effect on people and business while others do not. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There are different arguments related to the relevance of the result advertisements have on people and their businesses. Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe it has a positive impact and is beneficial while critics are of the opinion that its effects are negative and is detrimental. However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that the result of advertisements on humans is advantageous in many ways.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Book rooms squander for the nation's valuable assets and funds and it must be replaced with developed technology known as computers. Although this notion is favoured by one part of the society, in my opinion, these machines cannot overcome the ancient way of spending time in libraries. Initially, this essay will demonstrate the role of book rooms to develop a social life and then it will argue the major benefit to access of unlimited stuff for readers by computers.

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TASK 2: Some universities will offer their courses on the Internet instead of traditional classes so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

Universities in recent years are providing Internet-based courses for their students, which might come with a number of benefits. However, I would argue that this development is negative, and this essay will explain my viewpoint.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

A number of persons believe that forceful attitude usually depicted in movies and video games has a negative impact on the population’s behaviour; however, some other people do not think it does. I believe that watching or playing violence on contemporary media has a significant negative effect on how people act. Analyzing that we believe what we see or hear and that society is a reflection of what its people are exposed to proves this.

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