IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 49

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?

Today, workers are tending to accept overtime working at the workplace. This essay will clarify the reasons for this trend and the problems associated.

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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, socio, and Commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Students experiencing burdens from their education, surrounding community, and commercial perspectives. This essay will explicate the main causes such as competitions in the schools and parents behaviours toward their children along with some appropriate solutions.

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The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lot of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

The Industrialization of megapolis has led to an increase in the percentage of persons migrating from rural to urban areas in search of greener pastures. It has therefore led to serious problems such as overpopulation, but there are a number of solutions available to tackle it. This essay will discuss the causes of rural-urban migration and profer solutions to it.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

It is argued that earning lots of money is more significant to people than being happy at a job. This testament disagrees with this statement. I believe that people are increasingly concerned about the risk of stress-related ill-health frequently experienced by them at highly paid jobs and they care more about the feeling of fulfilment at work.

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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some think that if a hobby is not difficult, it will not be enjoyable. I totally disagree with that as it makes a hobby less attractive and there are other more important features.

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Some people believe that people have the right to university education and government should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often said that students have the right to higher education and the nation should provide it for free of cost irrespective of their economical status. However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that it should not be considered a privilege and there should not be a compulsion on the part of the state to make it available without any cost.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The world is becoming smaller every now and then. All the products are mostly available to potential customers all over the world. Even I agree that the nations are turning out to be more or less similar as most of the items are easily available globally.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Education is considered to be the chief architect in the growth of a child and many think that a school is a go-to zone for educating them, whereas others opine this notion and believe home is the best place to educate a kid. In my opinion, the school provides more benefits, as a young mind can evolve better around each other. Though, both the standpoints have their own merits which shall be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The expenditure on public transport is under debate. Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe that the maximum expenses should be diverted on the development of the novel rail tracks for superfast trains while some critics oppose the idea as they feel that the present modes of travel must be improved. However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that there is a need for bullet trains for faster connectivity.

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Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A country has to provide its population with different food cereal and crops. It is highly unlikely that a nation will be self-sufficient in producing all edible products simultaneously. A number of people claim that governments should supply the foods cultivated within their border, and they should purchase a minimum amount of foodstuff from outside the country. I think that the idea of consuming foods within the county is entirely preposterous, and nations should exchange foods with each other for the betterment of the people.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The best mode of transport is debatable. Few people say that governments should have more budget for the rail network as compared to highways. Even I am of the opinion that the nation should focus more on the usage of trains rather than motor vehicles.

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In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is the case happening? How should children and teenagers should be punished?

It cannot be denied that today’s youth are engaged in criminal activities like theft, smuggling, etc. in various places of the world. This essay will explicate the two causes of this phenomena and explain how we can tackle this obstacle in the coming years.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The world is becoming smaller every now and then. All the products are mostly available to potential customers all over the world. Even I think it is a positive development that the nations are turning out to be more or less similar as most of the items are easily available globally.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The choices we make decide our paths and in a way, our destiny. It is often said these days that the public has a plethora of options to choose from. Even I strongly believe that vast alternatives are available for all individuals today.

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Nowadays,many people choose to be self employed rather than work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages.

At the present moment, Many young populations worldwide choose to work independently in their startups or projects rather than joining an entity and working as employees. In this essay, I will share the motives behind such step. As well, I will discuss some of its drawbacks of working independently.

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The qualities a person needs to become truly successful cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the talent of a person cannot be taught in an institution. While others disagree with this statement. To be successful one should possess a natural asset that cannot be learnt from schooling. I agree with this as when folks are exposed to the real situation they can gaze at the ability of an individual. This essay will discuss the supportive points on the given task.

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Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. what are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions.

The work-life balance for modern society is becoming an unachievable task even after putting more efforts into it. Initially, this essay will suggest that the biggest complications by this circumstance are less quality time with family and health issues and then it will argue that decreasing the number of working hours and doing regular exercise are the most viable solutions.

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At the present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

The average range of young generation is rapidly growing in some nations compared to elderly citizens nowadays. In my opinion, the benefits of this condition outweigh the drawbacks. Initially, this essay will demonstrate the role of adults to develop their countries with the latest concepts and technology and then it will discuss the importance of experienced elders.

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Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different arguments related to the various education problems that we face today. Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe that the importance of studying at university may boost their own opportunities, while some critics oppose it, as they think there are other professions that are required for society. However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that the harm of pushing people forward to an undesired outlook certainly will bring a variety of mental issues.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are different arguments related to the various environmental problems that we face today. Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe that the loss of specific trees and wildlife is a major concern, while some critics oppose it, as they think there are other areas that need more attention. However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that natural hazards like global warming and the shortage of drinking water draw urgent attention.

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