IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 48

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number, and so on) for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary era of communication, personal details of individuals need to be provided for creating social media and other internet sites accounts. This essay will argue why sharing private information online has more negative sides than the benefit it has.

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some people argue that it is the best to accept bab situation, such as unsatisfied factory job or shortage of money. other believe that it is better to try and improve such situations discuss both views and give your opinion.

Handling work pressure has become incredibly difficult nowadays. However, it is argued that contentment with the present condition is better than making some efforts to change and uplift the finances. I completely disagree with the aforesaid notion because working hard in order to live better life can make major transformations in the economic condition of the individual. This essay will discuss both views.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Obesity is a concern throughout the globe and a burden on the health care system. Few individuals are of the opinion that in order to tackle this issue ,more importance should be given to physical training in educational institutions. I completely agree with this opinion and the same shall be discussed further in this essay

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Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possibl. While others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinio.

In this contemporary world, it is irrefutable that schooling acts as a torchbearer for the youngsters. However, it is argued by many individuals that schooling of young children must be initiated from the very beginning, while others opine that it should not begin before 7 years of life. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and argue why I think the former point is better.

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With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to the ever-increasing population, many people today, not by choice, reside in apartments with no place for recreational activities. In my opinion, it is vital to have sufficient space for families.

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Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argued that there is no need for parents to read stories since children can help themselves with reading and watching videos. While I understand that there are difficulties for busy fathers and mothers, I believe storytelling is a great measure to help offspring's development.

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In many countries the widespread use of the internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Is technology a boon or a bane? This is the most arguable issue as with advancement in technology people are able to do their job remotely or do homeschooling rather than commuting to the concerned places. However, I am of the opinion that the environment which we adapt to while working at an office or studying in educational institutions are more beneficial for the overall growth of the company and also for the personality development of a student.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the improvement of communication technologies and continuous development of infrastructures, travellers, as well as scientists, are now able to roam around different inaccessible sites, formerly unexplored. Although conquering new areas may hamper the biodiversity of the surroundings and cause injuries or even the demise of any visitors, exploring new areas have many positive aspects such as discovering previously unknown sites and inventing a wide range of natural resources. In my opinion, sightseers and researchers should be encouraged to travel around new spots in order to bring benefits to human civilization.

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Some people are born to be leaders, while others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give opinion

Leadership is an eye-catching term in our modern life. Some scholars insist that Leaders have their innate set of personality traits that came naturally, and made them distinguished humans. While others believe that leaders can be made through setting the right nurturing environment so they can keep improving their skills. In this essay, I will highlight the two opposing points of view , then I will share my thoughts on why leading people is an art that needs both factors to reach the fullest.

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Many young people are leaving their home in rural area to study or work in cities.What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

In the contemporary world, the migrant of youth from the countryside to cities is rising. It is opined by many individuals that it is a positive development while others argue that it has a plethora of downsides. In this essay, I will explain about what are the causes of this shift and why I feel it is a beneficial trend.

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More and more people are eating healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

The number of people adhering to healthy food and regular physical activities is rising. The main reasons for that are advances in science and awareness about the benefits of an active lifestyle. Among possible approaches aiming to make other people do the same is school programs telling about the importance of sport and good food.

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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house than buy one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a property?

The shelter is one of the basic necessities for every individual whether rented or owned domicile.In various nations, renting a house, condo or apartment has become the first preference over buying one.This has its own merits and demerits which will be explained in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Today, the sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this new millennium, profitable sales of desired customer products solely depend on the branding of the product which does not consider the direct requirements of the society. Likewise, I agree with this notion, as buyers are greatly influenced by exaggerated commercials on social media, and they don't invest their money wisely in the inevitable needs.

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Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.

The minds of the children can be shaped during the early years of their life so caregivers have to be cautious about their behaviour. A few people ponder that offspring should be presented with a reward for showing the best behaviour while others postulate that they should be punished when they misbehave.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why I am personally in favour of motivating a child when they behave in a good manner with everyone.

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school teachers used to be the source of information . However, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before as the increasing variety of information resources. Do you agree or disagree.

Although it is believed by certain people that the role of teachers has been superseded by the growing number of informative resources.In my opinion,I completely disagree with this perspective as an evolution of any kind of technology can never replace the intelligence and skills of an instructor.

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Teenagers should never be put in the same prison with adults no matter how serious their crime is. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Nowadays, youngsters are getting involved with various crimes in society which warrants a jail term. It has been suggested that they should not be kept with the grown-ups for specific reasons, and I agree entirely with the opinion. This essay will discuss why these two groups should be separated in jail.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective.

While there are apparent enormous benefits of increasing the fuel rates to curb the problem of pollution and traffic congestion but there are significant discernible drawbacks such as preventing a section of society from accessing personal vehicles. I agree with the former statement to an extent. However, there are alternatives that are beneficial for society at large. Explicated below are the reasons for my assertions.

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Some people believe that non academic subjects should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate only on academics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Subjects in the classroom course work are chosen meticulously so that they enlighten the students' learning process. However, non-educational domains receive a conflict welcome as the school of thought consider that it breaks the child's attention, whilst others deny it. I strongly contempt the former conviction and elucidate my point of view with suitable reasoning.

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best both for individual and society. Do you agree or disagree?

Some say that creating a family before 30 should be encouraged because it is beneficial for society and individuals. I totally disagree with that because some people are in their prime from the career perspective, while others do not have enough resources for having a comfortable life.

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Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued whether people should opt for satisfying or secured career paths. I believe both sides are important to enjoy life and sustaining a suitable balance of ourselves is essential.

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