IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 57

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

Over the last couple of decades, we have familiarized ourselves with the use of advanced payment methods. Credits cards provide great convenience to the human race. Credits cards are widely used for our regular expenditures and we are heavily relying on them. In this essay, While credit cards present certain drawbacks, I strongly believe that the advantages surpass the disadvantages of this payment gateway.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changes because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

The emergence of technology has influenced many aspects of human life, especially the way society interacts with each other. That understanding might lead to a question about how this development can change the way people communicate and the effects that it brings to us. Therefore, in this essay, I would like to suggest the answer to that case and give a plausible conclusion regarding that matter.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The overwhelming majority of kids physical fitness is moving towards the disease called obese, very rapidly which consequently causing numerous health issues across the affluent nations. Having said that, we will discuss the various factors responsible for the above-mentioned statement and impact of it.

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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that creativity is linked strongly to freedom, and artists should be able to represent their proper ideas. While some people believe that they should have all the freedom they need to express themselves, others argue that this should be limited. In this essay, I will explore both arguments, and I will support with examples why I tend to believe that the drawbacks of having total freedom override the advantages.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

Nowadays, most of the students are more on practical and they thought ahead before getting stress and pressure when they enter university life. Some went to other places and explore, others find a job for experience in a certain year. I would agree with this notion, and it will give advantages of the person before jumping into a new chapter.

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In order to be successful at a sport, some think you must be physically strong while others believe mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that in order to play any sport successfully some requirements are needed. While some people believe that physical strength is the most important factor, others argue that mental strength should be on the top of the list. In this essay, I will discuss both arguments and I will support with examples why I agree with both views.

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a common belief nowadays that fast-developing technology leads to the extinction of the authentic lifestyle, furthermore, it is commonly accepted that there is no point in keeping the traditions alive. In this essay, I will look into this opinion and will provide the reasons why I completely disagree with the statement.

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Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. Do you agree or disagree?

The growing number of individuals think that the industries and citizens both are required to be paid for cleaning the environment. I agree with the given statement, and the reasons behind my thought will be discussed in the essay.

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When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globalization has brought in all countries across the world on to the same thread, which ought to have sound knowledge in different types of foreign languages. This mandates the equal importance of all types of skills like listening, reading, speaking and writing while learning destination countries medium of communication. I completely agree with the above statement and provide my supporting examples in this essay.

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Computer games is very popular in all ages and nations. Parent think it has little educational Value and more harmful effects. What is your opinion about this? Give example based on your own experience.

With the advance of technology computer games' popularity started to skyrocket. However, some controversy remains regarding this matter. Parents might argue that negative side-effects may derive from playing and that it is just a waste of time. As a gamer myself I will present a strong contrary point, explaining why they help us to develop important skills and strengthen our social relationships.

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Prision is a common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to give people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, prison is seen to be the most common way to prevent a large number of crimes. However, it is believed by a certain part of a population that education might be the best solution to this problem. I agree with a presented claim since there are a lot of reasons why imprisonment is not an efficient way to solve this issue.

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Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. Do you agree or disagree?

It is forecasted that a nation will make more progress if the state authorities allocate a vast amount of their budget on the technical subjects instead of others. I partially agree with the statement as an allotment in other courses are needed to maintain balance in the society.

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Some people say that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, there is a controversy about phones and their ban in public places, such as libraries, different means of transport and shops. I agree with the fact that technologies should be prohibited in these places since it might cause inconvenience for other people.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is common worldwide that young adults leave their parents' house and start their own life when their studies are finished. Many of those youngsters choose to live on their own or live with a friend. I believe this choice has numerous positive sides and this essay will pinpoint some of them.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Many consider that it could be an amazing idea to study parenting to adolescent at academics. I disagree with this notion and I will discuss it in the following paragraphs along with skills needed to be a good parent.

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Schools should do more to teach students about their health and well being. Do you agree or disagree?

Primary educational institutions should educate students more about their healthfulness. I strongly agree with this idea. It is crucial to have a sound knowledge about our physical and mental well-being in the contemporary era. Besides, the essay will further articulate the vital benefits of learning; physical and mental aptitude.

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Some people believe that having too many TV channels is good for people, while some other pole believe that it only brings some poor quality TV programs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that there are interesting purposes on the broadcast TV for individuals these days, meanwhile; others suppose that it is just the low-quality channels. This essay will discuss two viewpoints and I totally agree with the first one in the following paragraphs.

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Young people today spend too much money and time following fashion trends (clothing, tech) .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the basic needs of humans, i.e., clothes have now become a way to flaunt high status in society. Also, the development in science, which is mainly essential to ease and support various tasks, is now the symbol of high class for teenagers. I completely agree that our youth is wasting unnecessary time and money to buy expensive clothes and electronic equipment.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that as artist receive a low pay scale and they should be provided with state funds, to preserve their interest. I strongly disagree with the statement because; firstly, the government has other sectors to improve. Secondly, the essay will discuss the way of increasing the income of the art creators.

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Shops should sell local foods instead of foreign foods. Do you agree/disagree?

It is true that it is important to maintain local traditions and customs. However, when it comes to what shops should sell, I do not agree with the idea that stores should only sell local foods. This essay will present arguments to explain why I believe both local and foreign meals should be sold by stores.

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