IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 57

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture. What is your opinion?

Everyone desires better health. It is argued that either the government should provide complete healthcare for free or avoid some special treatments. In my opinion, the authorities should provide basic healthcare free of cost and they should avoid treating rare diseases. In this essay, the role of the states in facilitating medical services will be discussed.

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The death penalty should be available as a punishment for serious crimes. To what extent do you agree?

Some believe that the death sentence should be applied for the gravest offences. I totally disagree with this statement and the following essay will examine the negative aspects of this movement.

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Art classes such as painting or drawing are important for children s development so it should be compulsory in high school.Do you agree or disagree

There is a common impression that teaching subjects like painting and drawing are significant for children's development. Hence they should be made mandatory in high school. This essay will provide reasons and explanations to answer the question of why I fully agree with this statement ?

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Some people think that public health is a the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Everyone desires better health. It is argued that who is responsible for public health either the government or the people. In my opinion, both the authorities and the public have their responsibilities towards the well-being of society. While the sedentary lifestyle of the population leads to unhealthy eating, the low taxes imposed by the states on junk food and carbonated drinks encourage their consumption. In this essay, the responsibility for the mass’s health will be discussed.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this To what extent do you agree?

To curb any illness, preventing it, is the first step. It is argued that the government should spend to take preventive measures . I totally agree with the statement because precautionary measures are more economical in improving the well being of public and these methods must be funded by the government. In this essay, the importance of funding preventive methods will be discussed.

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Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?

It is believed by certain individuals that books are not able to reserve an important place as a key medium of entertaining and informing. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement. The reasons behind the above endorsement will be discussed in the essay below with relevant examples.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many of us believe that it is solely the responsibility of government and other prominent enterprises to work in benefit of the environment, while few opine anyone can contribute to improving nature. I strongly disagree with the ideology of the majority and I will discuss how a person could participate with relevant examples.

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While some think that art is an important subject for children too study, others think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is argued that craft is not important for the school’s curriculum and time should not be wasted on it. Some people state that creative study improves the mental level of students and career-oriented parents oppose this and say that artistry do not promise a bright future. In my opinion, a creative study is important for a child’s development. In this essay, art’s importance and why some think it is a waste of time will be discussed.

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People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

Numerous characters deem the practical solution to lessen the number of the incarnational rate is to confine miscreant in jails for more extended periods; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm there are many better choices in settling this issue. In this essay, I will examine, firstly, how confining a law-breaker for a longer time helps to create a happier place to live; also, the negative aspect of neglecting this policy before coming to a reasoned conclusion.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some believe that the best solution to bring the crime rate down is to accept longer incarceration, others argue that there is a multitude of options to tackle this social issue. The following essay will examine both these theories and I will also explain why I think it is better to focus on alternative ways to reduce criminality.

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write about advantage and disadvantage of CCTV cameras

Nowadays, security is the most important aspect while conducting anything from good governance to corporate business and CCTV cameras play the most vital role in ensuring that everything is secure. This essay will discuss further the advantages and disadvantages of these camcorders.

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Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people consider that academic studies are of utmost importance while others align with the thought that subjects like arts, music and drama play a major role in the development of an individual. I agree with the latter fact because extra-curricular activities are now a good career option and to a certain extent help one in discovering self and improving mindset.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single.Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. others disagree. Discuss both views and you opinion.

Although personal details are kept to be reserved, few organizations ask for these details. few people believe that an individual's characteristics are not relevant whereas other people think they are useful. this essay will discuss both the opinions and will conclude with my point of view.

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In some area of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of the doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In today’s generation, there has been a controversy among the people regarding teenagers roaming around on the roads at night. Recently, in the US, children are barred to go out alone in the night and are asked to compulsorily take an adult in case they wish to be outdoors. In my opinion, I completely agree with the decision taken by the authorities as it is dangerous for them.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Technology is widely used in education. Opinions are divided with regards to whether computers being utilized is a beneficial improvement or a problem. In order to give my opinion, it is important to consider both sides of this debate.

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2) In the future, more people will choose to go on a holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday Do you agree or disagree?

Exploring unknown places in a distant land is a dream of most of the people.It is believed that in future domestic places will be visited more by local people rather than visiting places in foreign countries.Personally, I completely disagree with this statement because the curiosity of seeing a different place in a foreign land is undeniable and the improved economical status of individuals all across the world.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Because of the significant growth in technology, people are able to use mobile phones for various purposes. Most of the countries are using online applications for payments. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using it and will conclude with my point of view.

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Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

A creative mind is a blessing for society and learning art will enhance a student’s overall performance. because of its benefits, intellects emphasize that it should be made mandatory in schools. I agree with the notion and basic level of the craft must be taught in schools because it improves child mental level and broadens their thinking horizon. In this essay, the importance of teaching arts in schools will be discussed.

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For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

Art was considered an integral part of communities and valued for centuries. However, with the change of time values change, the art does not attract the human’s eye anymore. Instead, people started to consider science, technology and business sectors to be more influential . In my opinion science and technology comforted human life and business gave financial stability. In order to revive art’s popularity craft festivals must be celebrated. In this essay, the causes of the decline in art’s popularity and way to gain people attention will be discussed.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Survival of the non-native overseas without the knowledge of the local language creates a barrier in connecting with folks and in performing day to day activities. I completely agree to the statement cited above and this essay will discuss the issues faced by the individual residing in abroad without the command over the native speech.

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