IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 71

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Due to the tremendous growth of e-learning, it has been said by many that its ever-thriving advantages lead to the replacement of offline training. While on the other hand, some contend that traditional learning value will never deteriorate. I shall discuss both these statements along with a rational conclusion.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Discussions related to maintaining health are among the top nowadays. Due to this reason, many opine that it is very essential to do any kind of physical activities related to gym or sports in order to remain fit. Others, however, contend that the diet plan is more important to ameliorate health. I shall discuss both these views and comes to the logical conclusion in further paragraphs.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Since the last few decades, the severe well-being problems are escalating in the certain demographics of a society. It is, therefore, the obesity has become a major concern in the people of all age groups. This essay will discuss the root causes of the condition, including sedentary lifestyle and poor diet along with that some preventive measures will also be mentioned to mitigate the effects.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity. How could it be tackled.

Since the last few decades, the severe health problems are escalating in the certain demographics of a society. It is, therefore, the obesity has become a major concern in the people of all age groups. This essay will discuss the root causes of the condition, including sedentary lifestyle and poor diet along with tha,t some preventive measures will also be mentioned to mitigate the effects.

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Nowadays people are working from home using computers and telephones. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

There is no doubt that nowadays' technology plays a key role to fulfil remote-working goals. This can be obtained smoothly by using smart appliances, which may help many individuals and companies to do their daily tasks efficiently. Thus, there are both merits and demerits that will be further explained in this essay.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

It is a horrendous truth, that rapid growth in manufacturing of goods affects the environment drastically. There are a plethora of reasons, why this product manufacturing causing the issues, such as deforestation for construction, goods-producing factories generate toxic fumes and polluted water into the rivers, but nevertheless,there are some considerable solutions of this misfortune like, plant more trees and limit the working time for factories.

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Some people think that a sense of competition should be encouraged in children. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, feelings of competition can be found in almost every sector. This has influenced the senses of both positive and negative vibes among juveniles. Many educationalists have argued that it assists in kids' growth in today's tough world, others oppose by prioritizing humanity among all. This essay will discuss both aforementioned views and will present my notion.

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9.Some parents believe that children today spend too much time looking at screens. Others argue that this is necessary in the modern world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Watching tv among kids has exploded over the past decade — not only outside of school but also as an (often required) educational tool. Between homework, social media, video games and YouTube videos, many kids rack up six or seven hours of Screen time daily. Some people opine that letting children habitual the web is indeed important while others say otherwise. I, however, believe that slide watching in a limit can benefit children. This essay intends to discuss both the aforementioned views.

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Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many states have considered imposing taxes on products which contain high amounts of sugar. Although this may seem like a straightforward answer to cut down excessive carbohydrate consumption, I believe that this is not a viable solution.

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Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have contrasting views about what would be the ultimate goal of an educational institution. While some people opine that school should prepare their pupils as a productive member of society, I think they also should help these children to grow as a person meanwhile.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

In recent years, the number of people who own an automobile has increased significantly. In my opinion, this resulted in serious transit congestions in most of the cities around the world. Some ways that governments could aim to deal with this issue will be proposed and discussed in this essay.

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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way. While others prefer one-on-one instruction. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Many individuals are of the opinion that, for gaining knowledge or learning, the best method is to learn in a group. While others give preference to single-way learning. I shall discuss both these views in further paragraphs along with a logical conclusion.

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Should governments make decisions about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

People have contrasting views, whether the state authority or the individual should choose their way of life. It would be better if the government selects some ideas of living and let rest options for the citizens.

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1.Adults today do not do enough exercise. Some people believe that showing major sports events like the Olympics or the Football World Cup on television encourages people to exercise. Others argue that there are better ways to encourage adults to move more. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the advancement in technology, the fundamentals and dynamics of lifestyle have been altered significantly. In a recent phenomenon, the increasing tendency has been observed in people spending more time in-house by using gadgets. This, in result, has started a heated debate between people having a diversion in opinions based on the preferential method of promoting physical exercise among matures. A school of thought thinks that mature people can be motivated more by telecasting more sports events, while other refutes this and thinks otherwise. In my opinion, there are more realistic solutions available regarding this issue.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experiencing with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasing early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and effects of widespread drug use by young people.

In the present era, drug addiction among teenagers and young adults has become a common problem. According to some pedagogues, parents and community leaders are somehow responsible for this situation. Although a number of reasons are behind the current trend, it can be solved.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experiencing with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasing early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and effects of widespread drug use by young people.

At present era, drug addiction among teenagers and young adults has become a common problem. According to some pedagogues, parents and community leaders are somehow responsible for this situation. Although a number of reasons are behind the current trend, it can be solved.

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Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree.

It is more often stated that more money should be spent on academics than on recreational activities by the government. In my opinion, both are equally important, therefore, I disagree with the above statement. I will discuss my stance with the arguments in the paragraphs below.

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Some people think that children's free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, people are becoming more aware of the tender's nurturing. Some people perceive that the children must involve in educational activities during their spare moment otherwise it wastes a large amount of time. I strongly support this view. This essay will discuss my stance with the arguments in the below paragraphs.

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Now a lot of people in college are doing academic study. should encourage them lo learn vocational skill (like plumbers electricians). Do you agree or disagree?

Majority of the people are acquiring academy schooling these days.Though attending college is mandatory, some people believe that students should be encouraged to gain some other mechanical artistry such as plumbers and electricians, however,I do not agree will the given statement.I will list down the reasons for my disagreement.

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“Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication”. Do you agree or disagree?

Communication is not just an art and science of expression but is much deeper than that. In terms of communication, many people believe that it will be more powerful for verbal conversation than written delivery. From my perspective, deciding which one is more masterful than others depends on certain circumstances.

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