IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 71

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Computers are becoming an essential part of education.discuss advantages and disadvantages

It is not doubtful that nowadays' education is supplied by loads of technological techniques. Even if using computers on a daily basis of the educational process may show many desirable benefits on its elements, but cause what is called plagiarism. This essay will thereby explain both pros and cons of such a current improvement.

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Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more beneficial both environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Some individuals prefer to consume locally-produced foods instead of imported ones because of environmental and economic concern. In my opinion, some diets are required to bring from overseas as they are healthy to have.

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In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general educational across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrowly range of subjects to related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

Indeed, there is part of middle schools providing targeted educations to teenagers, subjects such as business management and internet technology are applied in those institutions earlier instead of in colleges. While some other schools continue educating students in a general base and require their children to learn a wide range of curriculums. In my opinion, I believe the general educations is essential for students in their early ages, and career-aimed educations can be drawn later in universities.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Choosing the right work-place to pursue one's career has always been a crucial decision. While some prefer to stick to the same association for their whole life, others, however, like to change their company for better future prospects. In my opinion, this decision depends on an individual's career goals and the amount of satisfaction at the work-place.

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Traffic jam is a problem in many towns and cities. People believe that this can be done by making roads wider. Do you agree or disagree?

It can be seen that congestion has become the plague in every part of the country especially in urban areas. Due to one of the reasons, many believe that this issue might be tackled by improving roads. I somehow agreed to this notion and inclined to articulate in the next paragraphs.

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Due to the tremendous growth of e-learning, it has been said by many that its ever-thriving advantages lead to the replacement of offline training. While on the other hand, some contend that traditional learning value will never deteriorate. I shall discuss both these statements along with a rational conclusion.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Discussions related to maintaining health are among the top nowadays. Due to this reason, many opine that it is very essential to do any kind of physical activities related to gym or sports in order to remain fit. Others, however, contend that the diet plan is more important to ameliorate health. I shall discuss both these views and comes to the logical conclusion in further paragraphs.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Since the last few decades, the severe well-being problems are escalating in the certain demographics of a society. It is, therefore, the obesity has become a major concern in the people of all age groups. This essay will discuss the root causes of the condition, including sedentary lifestyle and poor diet along with that some preventive measures will also be mentioned to mitigate the effects.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity. How could it be tackled.

Since the last few decades, the severe health problems are escalating in the certain demographics of a society. It is, therefore, the obesity has become a major concern in the people of all age groups. This essay will discuss the root causes of the condition, including sedentary lifestyle and poor diet along with tha,t some preventive measures will also be mentioned to mitigate the effects.

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Nowadays people are working from home using computers and telephones. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

There is no doubt that nowadays' technology plays a key role to fulfil remote-working goals. This can be obtained smoothly by using smart appliances, which may help many individuals and companies to do their daily tasks efficiently. Thus, there are both merits and demerits that will be further explained in this essay.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

It is a horrendous truth, that rapid growth in manufacturing of goods affects the environment drastically. There are a plethora of reasons, why this product manufacturing causing the issues, such as deforestation for construction, goods-producing factories generate toxic fumes and polluted water into the rivers, but nevertheless,there are some considerable solutions of this misfortune like, plant more trees and limit the working time for factories.

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Some people think that a sense of competition should be encouraged in children. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, feelings of competition can be found in almost every sector. This has influenced the senses of both positive and negative vibes among juveniles. Many educationalists have argued that it assists in kids' growth in today's tough world, others oppose by prioritizing humanity among all. This essay will discuss both aforementioned views and will present my notion.

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9. Some parents believe that children today spend too much time looking at screens. Others argue that this is necessary in the modern world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Watching tv among kids has exploded over the past decade — not only outside of school but also as an (often required) educational tool. Between homework, social media, video games and YouTube videos, many kids rack up six or seven hours of Screen time daily. Some people opine that letting children habitual the web is indeed important while others say otherwise. I, however, believe that slide watching in a limit can benefit children. This essay intends to discuss both the aforementioned views.

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Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many states have considered imposing taxes on products which contain high amounts of sugar. Although this may seem like a straightforward answer to cut down excessive carbohydrate consumption, I believe that this is not a viable solution.

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Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have contrasting views about what would be the ultimate goal of an educational institution. While some people opine that school should prepare their pupils as a productive member of society, I think they also should help these children to grow as a person meanwhile.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

In recent years, the number of people who own an automobile has increased significantly. In my opinion, this resulted in serious transit congestions in most of the cities around the world. Some ways that governments could aim to deal with this issue will be proposed and discussed in this essay.

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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way. While others prefer one-on-one instruction. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Many individuals are of the opinion that, for gaining knowledge or learning, the best method is to learn in a group. While others give preference to single-way learning. I shall discuss both these views in further paragraphs along with a logical conclusion.

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Should governments make decisions about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

People have contrasting views, whether the state authority or the individual should choose their way of life. It would be better if the government selects some ideas of living and let rest options for the citizens.

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1. Adults today do not do enough exercise. Some people believe that showing major sports events like the Olympics or the Football World Cup on television encourages people to exercise. Others argue that there are better ways to encourage adults to move more. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the advancement in technology, the fundamentals and dynamics of lifestyle have been altered significantly. In a recent phenomenon, the increasing tendency has been observed in people spending more time in-house by using gadgets. This, in result, has started a heated debate between people having a diversion in opinions based on the preferential method of promoting physical exercise among matures. A school of thought thinks that mature people can be motivated more by telecasting more sports events, while other refutes this and thinks otherwise. In my opinion, there are more realistic solutions available regarding this issue.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experiencing with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasing early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and effects of widespread drug use by young people.

In the present era, drug addiction among teenagers and young adults has become a common problem. According to some pedagogues, parents and community leaders are somehow responsible for this situation. Although a number of reasons are behind the current trend, it can be solved.

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