IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 73

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money they make. Is money a true indicator of the success of a business? In what other way could success in a business be measured?

In today’s world , it is often argued that successful businessmen have lucrative income from their firms and its profit is a measurement of their Business growth. However, there are other aspects, which will be discussed in this essay, also play an essential role in the booming trade.

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Many people think technological devices such as smart phones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although many people reckon that modern technology has brought more downsides than benefits, I firmly disagree with that and believe that current devices assist society in myriad ways ranging from keeping in touch with relatives to guiding us the right route while we are travelling.

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A rise in standard of living in a country seems to benefit cities more than rural areas. What problems might those differences cause? How can these problems be reduced?

It is true that when a country is undergoing economic prospects, urban areas advance quickly than other districts. This essay will discuss factors contributing to this situation, followed by measures to address this problem.

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To many parts in the world there is continuous coverage of sports opr television. some believe that this discourages young from taking part discuss both and give your opinion.

Sports is the precedence of masses and in many realms oh the globe there is ongoing telecast for proper coverage of live sports action.However, many suggest that it discourages young ones to compete in sports whereas others disagree.My dissertation will shed light on both views with suitable examples; shaping my viewpoint at the end.

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People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It can be easily recognized that communicating through the internet is becoming more and more engaging to people, in comparison with face-to-face interaction. There are several factors that account for this trend, which leads to my belief that this change is for the better.

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Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether the difference between the high paid job and the low paid job should be lowered is certainly up for debate. I personally agree with this claim that the salary distinction should be reduced. This essay will provide arguments and evidence to prove that this policy should be established.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

The stock market has been extremely competitive nowadays. People choose to do shopping in large malls instead of the small stores located on the street as they would like to pursue a higher living standard. As a consequence, an abundance of small local stores is closed down. As a whole, this is a positive development for national revenue. This essay will discuss the benefits that this development brings.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, it is usual that people go to large shopping centres or malls to shop their products. Unfortunately, the consequence of this new behaviour leads to the closure of many local businesses. Like many things in life, there are positive and negative aspects related to this topic. Although there are many beneficial points in this development, the negative aspects are relatively sad and the answer is just unfulfilling.

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Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV, why do they do this? Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people?

Imitating eminent personalities through print media or television has become quite common among masses. This is primarily because populace considers popular stars as their role models. Personally, I believe that it is a negative development as individuals may acquire certain negative habits, which can destroy their future.

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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging out quality of life. do you agree or disagree?

It is true that globalization has been facilitating our lives since long. Therefore, the establishment of intercontinental groups and their manufactured items are getting familiar day by day and it is said that this is affecting our lives in true terms. However, I slightly agree with the statement despite some potential benefits.

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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to find part-time jobs. Some think this is a good development while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Recent years have seen one of the conspicuous trends among the youngsters of working for short time -- which has created a debate that weather it is welcoming development or not. Notwithstanding, this disquisition delves into both standpoints, and subsequently will explore my own perspective, accordingly.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

In recent years, the youth are attracted more towards fast foods and have a lesser interest in nutritious food. As a result, parents are facing problems with an increase in the weight of their offspring. In this essay, we will discuss the problems related to obesity and the possible solutions which we can implement to be rid of the concern.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Taking care of your children could be not only a hard task but a matter of debate; Their parents disagree when it comes to whether they should encourage their children to participate in group activities or that is important to let them decide how to spare their free time. Although both sides have good arguments, I believe that the right answer lies between them, and in fact, from where I stand the solution seems quite simple.

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Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry ...)can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every single mortal is blessed with cetrain talents, for instance, many tends to draw , sing and to write.But everyone can gain pleasure and follow their passion to try anything they desire.However, many beleive that certain things can be mastered by persons with some gifted abilites,but i believe that any individual can perform these tasks.My dissertion will shed light on both veiws.

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Nowadays, there are many reasons environmental pollution. What are causes and solution?

It is incontrovertible that recent years have seen an immense amount of deteriorating conditions of environs -- which has been mainly caused by human activities, and there are many remedies that authorities can make it possible to ameliorate habitat health. Notwithstanding, this disquisition will delve the causes behind this unforeseen occurrence, and subsequently will put forward the panacea to arresting this menace.

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It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open in your opinion

Historical houses demand a high budget revenue on its renovation and restoration of the prestige artifacts.So it is quite hard for them to provide free exposure to mases.However,there are some measures dicussed in upcoming dissertion which i believe can be really helpful to provide free ticket for people to experience history.

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Do you think businesses should hire employees who will spend their entire lives working for the company? Explain why do you agree or disagree. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Nowadays, many companies are adopting the policies of recruiting human resources for their whole life span. I completely agree with this transformation due to these prime reasons. Firstly, employees will not leak the company secrets to other firms. Secondly, organizations may save huge wealth for the training processes of new workers. This essay intends to analyze both reasons for my belief in details with suitable examples.

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people opine that crucial positions in the government are inappropriate for the young, while some oppose that letting youngsters take on these positions might be a wise decision. In this essay, I will attempt to justify both arguments as well as to provide my perspective which supports the latter.

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Spending on advanced computer systems by authorities is very beneficial for development but many oppose this trend. do you agree or disagree.

Advancement in computing have no boundries and and they comparises mammoth share of the human work. however, some individuals oppose to spend revenue autnomics but, I firmly belive that it is vital aspect for spending in order to surge the progress.

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Children get good grades in school whenever they are encouraged rather than physically abused. I personally believe that good appreciation is better than punishment to encourage students to do well in school. This essay will discuss both sides by taking examples from newspapers and journals.

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