IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 73

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals, and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the generation appears keen to prefer fast foods rather than their own native foods. Therefore, this adaptation, in particular, may not be beneficial for the youths, as traditional foods tend to lose its existence could be a sign of detachment from one’s culture. I completely agree that it has a counter impact on our society.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in cities and town closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, E-shopping is growing day-by-day at a rapid speed. While, it is good to go for paper-less, time-saving shopping, perhaps, there is a panic that it may lead to the closure of all city shops in the town. But I disagree with the prompt statement, keeping in mind that it will not give everything that you want in a full-fledged manner. This essay depicts the view in an elaborated manner.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuel should be the most important global priority today. TO what extend do you agree or disagree?

Our modern world depends on fossil fuels to power our homes, vehicles and businesses. Some have argued that replacing fossil fuels with renewable energy sources ought to be the number one priority around the world. Personally, I completely agree.

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Some sports are extremely dangerous to the players. Why do people participate in such sports? Tell some measures to avoid the risks involved.

Sports are an important part of our lives, and they are played, enjoyed and watched worldwide. Some of these activities could be fatal or cause a serious injury yet people participate in it. However, there are some steps that can be taken to ameliorate any accidents. In this essay, we shall elaborate on the reasons and methods to mitigate the dangers.

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Some believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while other think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that joining a gym or a well-being club is the most deem fit way to keep healthy while others disagree with the idea as they believe it is enough to regularly walk and climb stairs. I opine that it is certainly important to be an active member of a gym or a club that emphasizes and conducts health activities as a supervised training at these places can help you better recognise your areas of improvement in terms of physical and mental strength. Also, these enable you to leverage an opportunity to learn the exercises you are not aware of and the fitness facts you might not have come across.

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Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations to continue their development. Some people argue that practical aid or advice is more useful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that the question of whether global relief would be effective if multinational organisations offer financial help for undeveloped countries or not has caused vigorous debate. While many individuals argue that this kind of support is promising, I contend that other help, either practical aid or advice, merit considerations.

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Salaries of senior management positions are much higher than other works in the same company or organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is certainly true that the compensation offered to senior management is on a higher side in comparison to other workers in the same organization. I do concur with this phenomenon and in the essay, I will provide my point-of-view with examples.

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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There are countries where more people are deciding to live by themselves than they did in the past/previously. I would argue that this is a positive development/beneficial tendency/ because these people’s actions are not restricted by housemates and it helps a country’s economical state.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Nowadays, it is quite common for youngsters to have a break from studying after graduating from school. In certain countries, scholars are even encouraged to get a job or travel around between secondary education and college. The tendency of stimulating them to pause for a year before starting studies is a trend that has some pros and cons for young persons who choose to do this. The two sides of this trend will be thoroughly analyzed and discussed before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is frequently argued that learning a historical subject is indispensable for pupils rather than global events in the past. I strongly disagree with this statement, as I believe that both of them are equally valuable benefits for learners.

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Some people think government should subsidies food and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper. Other argues that tax should be set on unhealthy food. Discuss both views and gives your opinion.

Nutritional value is an important thing that should be considered before purchasing food items. In the sense, it is considered by some that the government should lower the prices of foodstuff so that it will be affordable by many. While there are others who think that taxes should be imposed on junk meal to reduce their consumption. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion in the end.

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”Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.

These days, a large number of people focus on increasing their wealth rather than doing physical exercise. As a result, a huge number of people are diagnosed with serious diseases and pay hefty amounts on treatments. I firmly agree that prevention measures should be taken, however, the scientist should always do research for treatments which could save millions of lives.

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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

Presently, supermarkets sell both local and imported foods and other products. It is argued by some that these shops should just sell products that are made in their own local areas and should not be selling foreign country foods. However, I both agree and disagree with this statement as super shops need to keep both imported and local-made foods to let the buyers choose.

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Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential for improving health and deal with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches: private companies, individuals or governments?

Modernization and globalization have given birth to more deadly and contagious virus variants namely the notorious Covid-19. However, the cost of the cure’s researches may cost more because of the virus’s mutation that requires more modified medical equipment. From my perspective, citizens and non-governmental businesses' funding outweigh that of the government.

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Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. Do you agree or disagree?

Electronic gadgets like computer and video games are becoming much popular that children nowadays usually spend most of their time on them. It is believed that in spite of spending all day on the electronic devices by the young ones they must be boosted up to spend a few hours on outdoor activities. I strongly agree with the notion and would like to elaborate on my views in the below paragraphs.

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Everyone should stay at school until 18. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is mandatory for students to complete secondary education before going to work in most countries. Even some people opine that they should be allowed to drop out to pursue their own interests, I still agree that compulsory education before adulthood is part and parcel to our adolescents since they could acquire the universal knowledge and social skills required to survive in today's world.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people these days wish to go on a vacation with family, friends and colleagues. Therefore, the choices are to explore their own country or visit International locations. In my opinion, people should explore places and cultures in their own nation and contribute to increasing the tourist count for their nation’s progress.

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Children today have more responsibilities than the past. Some people think it has positive effects than negative ones while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While it is often argued by some people that youngsters are more responsible in the current era, whereas others take the view that many young people are more attentive in the old days. My opinion is that it is better to hold much responsibility nowadays.

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some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning.discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A large section of the society believe that brainpower of the people come since their childbirth, others have a belief that it can be built up by learning. Both sides of this statement are debatable and should be discussed. As my opinion, I believe that it is worth when it comes since delivery.

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some people think university education should prepare student for employment. Other people think the university has other functions. Discuss both views and what do you think the function of the university.

While some people believe, making students eligible for job market should be the main focus of tertiary education, others opine that creating resourceful individuals should be the core purpose. In my opinion, both together can be an objective of the higher studies, because both are required for a progressive future.

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