IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 74

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging out quality of life. do you agree or disagree?

It is true that globalization has been facilitating our lives since long. Therefore, the establishment of intercontinental groups and their manufactured items are getting familiar day by day and it is said that this is affecting our lives in true terms. However, I slightly agree with the statement despite some potential benefits.

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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to find part-time jobs. Some think this is a good development while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Recent years have seen one of the conspicuous trends among the youngsters of working for short time -- which has created a debate that weather it is welcoming development or not. Notwithstanding, this disquisition delves into both standpoints, and subsequently will explore my own perspective, accordingly.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

In recent years, the youth are attracted more towards fast foods and have a lesser interest in nutritious food. As a result, parents are facing problems with an increase in the weight of their offspring. In this essay, we will discuss the problems related to obesity and the possible solutions which we can implement to be rid of the concern.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Taking care of your children could be not only a hard task but a matter of debate; Their parents disagree when it comes to whether they should encourage their children to participate in group activities or that is important to let them decide how to spare their free time. Although both sides have good arguments, I believe that the right answer lies between them, and in fact, from where I stand the solution seems quite simple.

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Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry ...)can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every single mortal is blessed with cetrain talents, for instance, many tends to draw , sing and to write.But everyone can gain pleasure and follow their passion to try anything they desire.However, many beleive that certain things can be mastered by persons with some gifted abilites,but i believe that any individual can perform these tasks.My dissertion will shed light on both veiws.

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Nowadays, there are many reasons environmental pollution. What are causes and solution?

It is incontrovertible that recent years have seen an immense amount of deteriorating conditions of environs -- which has been mainly caused by human activities, and there are many remedies that authorities can make it possible to ameliorate habitat health. Notwithstanding, this disquisition will delve the causes behind this unforeseen occurrence, and subsequently will put forward the panacea to arresting this menace.

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It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open in your opinion

Historical houses demand a high budget revenue on its renovation and restoration of the prestige artifacts.So it is quite hard for them to provide free exposure to mases.However,there are some measures dicussed in upcoming dissertion which i believe can be really helpful to provide free ticket for people to experience history.

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Do you think businesses should hire employees who will spend their entire lives working for the company? Explain why do you agree or disagree. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Nowadays, many companies are adopting the policies of recruiting human resources for their whole life span. I completely agree with this transformation due to these prime reasons. Firstly, employees will not leak the company secrets to other firms. Secondly, organizations may save huge wealth for the training processes of new workers. This essay intends to analyze both reasons for my belief in details with suitable examples.

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people opine that crucial positions in the government are inappropriate for the young, while some oppose that letting youngsters take on these positions might be a wise decision. In this essay, I will attempt to justify both arguments as well as to provide my perspective which supports the latter.

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Spending on advanced computer systems by authorities is very beneficial for development but many oppose this trend. do you agree or disagree.

Advancement in computing have no boundries and and they comparises mammoth share of the human work. however, some individuals oppose to spend revenue autnomics but, I firmly belive that it is vital aspect for spending in order to surge the progress.

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Children get good grades in school whenever they are encouraged rather than physically abused. I personally believe that good appreciation is better than punishment to encourage students to do well in school. This essay will discuss both sides by taking examples from newspapers and journals.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

It is undeniable that university degree has become the preference of young generation. However, previously students preferred their own nation for the higher education, but these days they are getting attracted towards the international institutions for the completion of their degree. Even though this trend possesses myriad benefits but its negative aspects could not be ignored.

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Some people think that intelligent student should teach separately whereas others think that everyone should teach together. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is no doubt that streaming has been implemented in many educational institutions. Although it is sometimes thought that gifted children should be kept separately, others consider all students must be placed in the same classroom. In my opinion, I firmly backing the former viewpoint as this benefits both types since they can be educated based on the level of ability.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree

Nowadays, the number of people joining social media networking sites is monumental. However, many believe that site like Facebook has adversely affected the lifestyle and society. I agree with this notion, and in this essay, I will discuss how detrimental can this be.

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Without capital punishment, the security of our lives is at stake and criminal acts of violence increase so, it is quite mandatory for controlling violent activities in society and for making it a secure place to live. I strongly agree with the aforementioned as it induces fear in the minds of people who even think of committing anything wrong and the victims get justice.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Living in the modern world these days is not easy. Many people are told to work hard and thus they are able to succeed in their lives, even younger children, they are told to do so. By doing this, there will be both benefits and drawbacks that bring to children's lives. In the following paragraphs, both viewpoints will be discussed in detail.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree.

In recent decades, technological developments have revolutionised the way of shopping. In the sense, all shops and stores are on the urge of obsolete, the reason is the emerging trend of shopping online. In this essay, I will discuss why I completely agree with the statement and outline for the reasons for that.

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that this century has witnessed a dramatic advancement in all walks of life. It is often thought this development has helped to improve the longevity for a great extent. In my opinion, I personally believe that this era is the best time to live since the earthborn because of the development of modern medical technology and equipment.

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Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that living together is ,currently, so popular among youngsters. It is considered that by doing this the couple would get a better understanding of their partner. I completely agree with the statement because they can realise how compactable and realistic they are.

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Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response.

For many people having lavish birthday parties or weddings has become a social status symbol. In order to maintain their social image, people tend to spend more than what they intended to spend. In my opinion, although celebrating marriage parties or birthdays is justified, I believe big and expensive weddings create stress and cause problems for the bride and groom.

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