IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 75

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The zoo is the area where animals are kept safe. It is often believed that zoos must be closed because animals are not safe in it. On the other side, few believe that for some animals this area is essential. I will discuss both statement and my point of view in the below paragraphs.

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Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps us understand the present. Write on both views and give your opinion, citing examples from your experience

The history of every country is considered to be its treasure. But every individual has its own perception about this subject. It's often believed that the past has nothing to offer, whereas others think that it is the only past that clarify the present. I would like to discuss the both sides of the above notion with the illustrate example in the below paragraphs.

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Some people say that technologies such as mobile phones are disrupting social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

The smartphone is the technology that has gained more popularity among every individual. But it is often believed that the cell phones have eliminated the social interaction among the people. It makes the people physically less and digitally more social. I completely agree with the notion and will discuss the reason in the below paragraphs.

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a controversy that pursuing a career in the early years or changing jobs constantly will give an individual more job fulfilment. In my opinion, while job-hopping is a fitting choice for those having less career ambition, I partly agree with the notion that staying in a steady job will provide a more pleasant experience.

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In some countries, the government pays unemployed people on a weekly basis. How does this impact individuals and the government? Do you agree or disagree with this idea?

The grant to unemployed people is paid in many countries and it is definitely affecting the nation and the society.I partially agree with the statement and will discuss the point to support my argument in the below paragraphs.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Countries were becoming more and more similar by the same products which bought anywhere in the world. In my opinion, this progress comprises both position and negation.

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, the abolishment of university fees is a controversial topic. Many people hold the belief that everyone should be entitled to the whole fees, others opine that all the cost attached to college should be paid completely by students. In my opinion, these viewpoints are justifiable to a certain extent.

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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The dispute about the priority of the high monetary reward and the cosy environment of the job has been there for years. Some people claim that the pay should be the main consideration when searching for the jobs, while others argue that the significance of working mood is more than its treatment. The idea of both sides with my own opinion together will be further discussed and elaborated in this essay.

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if a product is sold and people but it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. do you agree or disagree with this

It has been said that a running item has not required to advertise, instead it can be recognised an a way of amusement. I completely disagree with this statement, because without promotional activities, it is not possible to exist in the competitive market as well as update people about new features.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

Movies are the biggest source of entertainment and at the same time, instills audience enough knowledge regarding different walks of life. It is reckoned by some people that films can be enjoyed on their personal smartphones or other technological gadgets rather than going to theatres. However, others believe that movies must be watched in a theatre for full enjoyment. I, completely accord with the latter notion and various reasons associated with both statements will be discussed in upcoming fragments.

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Some people think that trial marriage is currently a positive trend for youngsters in order that they know each other better before marriage. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the rate of divorce surges to a great extend, and one of the reasons is, the life partners do not know each other properly or any of them is not able to satisfy physically, which make people think about that engaging in cohabitation is good or bad before the marriage. I partially agree with the above notion and the reasons for my inclination are articulated in the following paragraph.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many people exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Health plays an indispensable role in every person's life and physical workouts aids in maintaining it. However, it is reckoned that the majority of employed people devote minimal or no time to Physical activities, which have given rise to various health issues. This ongoing trend has numerous reasons associated with it, which are discussed in upcoming fragments along with personal suggestions.

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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applications may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good employment, while there are others who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills. In my opinion, I believe that enhancing soft skills and gaining experience is far more important.

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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applications may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many employers are likely to find wisdom, skilled workers for competitive occupations rather than those having merely formal qualifications and less practical experience. From my anticipation, job applications will not appeal any requirements of certifications. Thus, I am convinced by that statement because of the considerations at two aspects, such as productivity and wage of the employees.

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Advertising encourages customers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality 10th do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that advertisements are playing a major role in hiking the annual turnovers of large organizations. However, this is reckoned that there are motivating common people to make purchases in huge quantities irrespective of paying attention to the quality of product. I, to a large extent believe that this is true. The essay will decipher various factors behind this standpoint.

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Nowadays, more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. what are the reasons for this? what would you suggest as a solution?

It is true that competition is a significant attitude in a workplace which is more prevalent among young and old employees these days. This essay will discuss the causes and the measures in order to solve this problem.

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More and more people today are moving from the countryside. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a positive or negative development

These days, the influx of residents from rural areas to metropolises is growing exponentially. From my perspective, there is a host of compelling reasons leading to this negative migration.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can a lack of sleep cause? What can be done about the lack of sleep?

In today's era, it is arduous for some sections of society to take an adequate amount of sleep. Because of this pattern, various problems arise, and this essay will discuss those as well as a measure that can be taken to ensure people will get enough rest and sleep.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people have different views on children's education. Some parents think that it is the only way to well educate their kids in a good manner by using violence. However, I firmly disagreed that this kind of punishment could be effective.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, Technological developments have revolutionised the way of shopping. In other words, all shops in the local markets, moreover cites are on the urge of the obsolete, the reason is emerging trends of shopping online. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with the statement and shed light on the reasons of convenience as well as time saving which lead people tend to E-commerce.

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