IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 70

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Travelling and working for one whole year after finishing high school is highly encouraged in a few countries for teenagers who are about to join in a college. The major advantage of following this is the chance to explore and understand more about different lands and cultures. However, the disadvantage is it will keep those young people at high risk of addiction to bad habits because of uninterrupted freedom and spoilt company.

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The government should not waste money on arts as this money would be better spent on other projects like sanitation or infrastructure. Do you agree with the above statement?

In some countries, the government must not spend more funds for artistic interests as that amount can be helpful for people when spent on the development of building, roads and improving cleanliness. I totally agree with this because it is unnecessary for common people and improving useful elements would be appreciated by them.

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Some people believe charity organization should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both opinions and tell which side do you agree?

It is often argued that people acquire talents by birth in sports and music, not by learning the skills to become successful. While many people support this, I believe, to become a famous sportsperson or an artist, it needs strong determination and practice and any children with these qualities can excel in these fields.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is an irrefutable fact, that values have changed in all over the world. Holding material things, now a days have becoming a symbol of succes. It is disagreed that economical values are most important than moral values. The following up paragraphs will analize explaning this situation. Finally, my personal opinion will be given in my experince.

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Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. give both views and give your own opinion.

Releasing the movies from another country in local theatres or cinemas has always been controversial. While some argue on the positive sides of it, other debate that it is ruining our local culture. In my perspective, the content of a movie holds more worth than the nation it belongs to; therefore, there would not be any effect of it on the society if the movies are chosen properly.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the problems which a growing population of overweight people causes for the healthcare system, many people advocate that the key to solving this issue is to have more game and exercise in schools. I completely agree that this is the best way to tackle the issue of deteriorating public health in relation to weight.

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Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

It is often argued that sportspersons make more income than people in other important jobs. While some think it is not fair, I believe it is justifiable as they train hard and are always away from their homes. In this essay, I would discuss both these views and state my points.

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in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some parts of the world, the elderly often tell the young that they can achieve all their goals if they try their best to do it. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

With the advent of world-wide-web and internet, the trend of reading paper-based scripture, either the newspaper or the books, is fading away because more and more people have started using digital books and online news web pages for free. This trending culture would probably eliminate the usage of printed newspapers or books in future. I totally agree with this notion due to the following reasons.

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Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have contrasting views, whether we should shelter all the creatures of the forest or should accommodate some of them. In my opinion, we should preserve only which are in a dangerous situation; however, both views will be discussed.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In our modern society, it is prevalent that people are used to escaping their concerns and accept a bad situation instead. Nonetheless, some opponents argue that they should try hard to improve the situation. In my opinion, I believe that striving to solve a problem is a relatively realistic solution compared to accepting it and doing nothing. Hence, I will further discuss both views and explain my thought in the following essay.

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Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this statement?

In some developed countries, there is a trend of costless healthcare benefits, regardless of the person’s income. I believe that there are some cases where this free medical care facility is disadvantageous to the general public, however, in other aspects it is quite acceptable. Firstly, I will explain how it has negative effects on society, and secondly, the positive side of this scheme will be examined.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

In the era of modernisation, health issues are increasing day-by-day. Most of the persons are suffering from problems related to their health just because they do not get involved with exercises and it could happen due to their hectic job schedules, and the burden of assignments in their leisure time. This essay will discuss these reasons behind that problem along with some possible solutions such as set hours limit among each individual as well as do not put too much pressure of duties in their free pace.

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Some companies sponsor sports to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is irrefutably true that these days most companies are approaching strategies such as sponsoring sports events to increase their sales. Some people opine that sports sponsorship is a great marketing tool to promote their products; however, others believe that this trend has tremendous drawbacks. I bolster the former opinion and think that this strategy is not only promoting the company primarily but also providing a platform for passionate players.

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Some people believe that scientists have more influence over the world whereas others argue that politician have more influence over the world. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

A group of people consensus that scientists have ultimate importance worldwide; whereas, others argue that legislator has a higher impact. Therefore, ahead of my stance, both the viewpoints would be discussed.

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MARKETING AND PROMOTION IS THE KEY TO A SUCCESSFUL BUSINESS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

In this modern era, media is flooded with advertisements striving to acquire the attention of consumers. It is often suggested that marketing and promotion play a crucial role in the success of a business. I completely agree with this statement due to these two major reasons. Firstly, the public can know about the new products available in the market. Secondly, masses often purchase those products who often promoted by popular celebrities.

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In some countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people rergad this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important learning and taking responsiblities? Write both view and your opinion

In the era of advancement, it has become a topic of concern about whether to allow youth to start earning or not. The chunk of folks thinks it, like a bad phenomenon, however, opposites admit that it will lead to having experience and fulfil duties. I think children should more concentrate on their study and life experiences, not on a paid job. This essay will discuss both viewpoints including how it can be worst according to the failure in the study and how it will help to learn the responsibilities at an early age.

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Many people think that it is better to get advice from old rather than young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that an older person can give a better idea and suggestion more than a younger person or not as they have more experience. I strongly believe that there are more advantages to get advice from senior groups. This essay will discuss the benefits of this statement.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In our modern society, kids are often told they could achieve everything if they have tried hard enough. It is a common phenomenon that most of us have heard this quote from our teachers or parents. Therefore, this essay will outline some of the advantages and disadvantages of this message.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be used other purpose such as residential areas for over growing population or to develop business and boost economics. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

For some individuals, urban parks are very important, although, some people think that this place can be used for a business purpose or for building residential areas for growing society. I completely disagree with the idea of removing parks from the cities, in the following paragraph, I will highlight my point of view.

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