IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 66

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and development soft skill in more important Discus both views and give your opinion?

While some people opine that higher studies promote the chance of getting jobs, others state that having practical competencies are more significant. In my opinion, education and on-hand skill both are valued based on the nature of the employment.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer–based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

An extremely significant topic today is related to the dependency on computers and other technologies. Even though computers are relatively new inventions, they have become an indispensable part of our lifestyles. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on the future prospects of technology and whether we can benefit from using it.

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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People in different countries have their own preferences for buying or renting a place for living, depending on their convenience. While rental dwellings have there own merits and demerits, I believe that purchasing a house is better than rental ones. I shall further explain it in the following essay.

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In many countries children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?

While Some people think that serving paid work by the children would promote serious problems, other opine that it will expand their expertise in practical life. In my opinion, youngsters should be associated with paid work but with proper supervision.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause a serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays there is an immigration trend in which people prefer to study abroad or live in another country rather than in their own nation. However, language often creates an enormous barrier for most of the new immigrants, including both social and practical problems in real life. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement provided. Therefore, I will discuss the reason why I agree with the interpretation by outlining some of the problems that immigrants will encounter.

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Some people think that teenagers should be requested an unpaid job in their free time, it will be helpful for both individual teenagers and local communities. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer.

It is an irrefutable fact, that communities need help from all kind of people in the entire world. Teenager´s help is important, because they are not small children. It is agreed, in this essay, that young kids need to work since an early age, eventhough they do not earn a wage. The following up paragraphs will analize this position with explanations. Finally, my personal opinion will be given.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that it is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about the culture of other people, we can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. I strongly disagree with this statement for several reasons.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs , including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Though some individuals are in favour of establishing animal rights and they are also in the opposite of abusing them by applying them for various purposes, others think of utilizing them for the welfare of humanity. In my opinion, employing these creatures are required to keep the biological balance. However, this essay will discuss both views.

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stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. what do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest?

As everyone knows, these days, the competition becomes higher and higher so, it is inevitable that people should adapt themselves unless they could not have the better well-being, and this could lead to the increasing of stress in modern people. Therefore, I totally agree with this statement, and in this essay, I would like to explain the causes and the solutions in this problem.

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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

The form of modern families and the participation of their members have many differences compared to the old ones these days. I believe that these continuous switches are positive together with the development of society.

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Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

It is often argued that pupils should wear a specific set of clothes to schools while some disagree and say children should be given the freedom of choice regarding the school dress. I am sceptical that the former is true and I will explain why throughout this essay.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is often thought that the regime is spending a lot of wealth on the artwork. However, some are of the opinion that they should use the money on more important things. In my point of view, I totally agree with this and believe that they should use the money on more necessary subjects.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Travelling and working for one whole year after finishing high school is highly encouraged in a few countries for teenagers who are about to join in a college. The major advantage of following this is the chance to explore and understand more about different lands and cultures. However, the disadvantage is it will keep those young people at high risk of addiction to bad habits because of uninterrupted freedom and spoilt company.

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The government should not waste money on arts as this money would be better spent on other projects like sanitation or infrastructure. Do you agree with the above statement?

In some countries, the government must not spend more funds for artistic interests as that amount can be helpful for people when spent on the development of building, roads and improving cleanliness. I totally agree with this because it is unnecessary for common people and improving useful elements would be appreciated by them.

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Some people believe charity organization should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both opinions and tell which side do you agree?

It is often argued that people acquire talents by birth in sports and music, not by learning the skills to become successful. While many people support this, I believe, to become a famous sportsperson or an artist, it needs strong determination and practice and any children with these qualities can excel in these fields.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is an irrefutable fact, that values have changed in all over the world. Holding material things, now a days have becoming a symbol of succes. It is disagreed that economical values are most important than moral values. The following up paragraphs will analize explaning this situation. Finally, my personal opinion will be given in my experince.

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Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. give both views and give your own opinion.

Releasing the movies from another country in local theatres or cinemas has always been controversial. While some argue on the positive sides of it, other debate that it is ruining our local culture. In my perspective, the content of a movie holds more worth than the nation it belongs to; therefore, there would not be any effect of it on the society if the movies are chosen properly.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the problems which a growing population of overweight people causes for the healthcare system, many people advocate that the key to solving this issue is to have more game and exercise in schools. I completely agree that this is the best way to tackle the issue of deteriorating public health in relation to weight.

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Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

It is often argued that sportspersons make more income than people in other important jobs. While some think it is not fair, I believe it is justifiable as they train hard and are always away from their homes. In this essay, I would discuss both these views and state my points.

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in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some parts of the world, the elderly often tell the young that they can achieve all their goals if they try their best to do it. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.

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