IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 66

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

A very important issue today is the fast-growing usage of automobiles. Over the last three decades,people have begun to purchase so many cars and this is why some people are of the opinion that the world is now 'one big traffic jam'. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on the given topic, show my approval of the statement and provide some solutions to the problem.

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children should always follow their parents' advice. To what extend do you agree?

It is often proposed that teenagers should follow the thoughts and suggestions of the genitors. I completely agree with this statement due to two main reasons. Firstly, parents can nurture positive qualities in youngsters. Secondly, they can play a crucial role in deciding a golden career for their wards. This essay will intend to strengthen my belief in detail with relevant examples.

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some people prefer to shop for food in supermarket , other people prefer to do food shopping online ? DIscuss both views and give your opinion

Food is one of the basic necessity to live a healthy life and to survive. Some individuals like to shop food from big stores and while others choose online food options. According to me, Supermarkets have more variety than online food websites. In this essay, I would shed light on both sides.

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In many large cities, people waste hours of their time every day because of traffic congestion on the roads. What are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In this modernized era, the increment in the number of vehicles is the major concern across urban areas. In each passing day, people waste a lot of time while waiting in traffic jams. The major cause of this phenomenon is the preference of private vehicles to the public, and the possible solution to this problem is the improvement in transportation services by authorities.

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People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traditional and contemporary style buildings both are equally vital for society. Whereas old ones are a symbol of culture and heritage, modern ones are a sign of development. Although few people reckon that new buildings should be build after demolishing the old ones, I radically disagree with this notion.

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People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are thoughts that replacing old-time constructions with newly-built ones are needed. From my perspective, I agree with the statement because this activity brings more benefits to our human societies.

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Nowadays some buildings such as offices and school have open space design instead of separate rooms . Why it is so ?Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is true that modern constructions like offices or educational institutions are designed in an extraordinary way than they were in the past. The original meaning of separate rooms has been no longer forgotten in nowadays architecture. In my opinion, this trend is positive enough, because the open areas make cooperative connections between workers and children much more firm and direct.

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Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this? What are some possible solutions?

It is evident that city dwellers are more likely to suffer from chronic and non-communicable diseases due to the absence of physical activity. The majority of people who are living in the cities have rarely seen working out their bodies. This essay will discuss the reasons and solutions to this issue.

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Combustible is considered as the main reason for environmental issues in society for a portion of individuals who believe that the solution to cope with the problem is raising it's. In this essay, I will examine some facts that convince me of why this is not the major solution and then some examples will be exposed.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

In the modern world, one of the most significant stages in a child’s growth is indisputably the development conscience, which is associated with the ability to discriminate right and wrong manners. This skill might be enhanced with experiences and having good role models and I believe that punishment has a negative effect on this term. Therefore, I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement.

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Q: Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Even though the latest technology like the internet really made our lives easier, there is enough chance of cybercrime involved in it when we submit our personal data to get registered in a site to access a program. A lot of individuals are ready to provide their personal data to enjoy the benefits of an application. This essay would discuss the pros and cons related to it.

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Nowadays many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Significant numbers of people move to other countries because of exciting job opportunities. It is often argued that it is a positive development for children, who belong to these families, whilst others disagree and think kids will suffer from many typeof hurdles. In my opinion, I agree that children will get a plethora of benefits from this trend. The essay will further discuss both facets with appropriate examples reaches a logical conclusion.

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Some people think city planners should create more green spaces and plant trees. Others believe that they should focus on building new houses. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although it is sometimes thought that green areas ought to be allocated more space in city planning, others consider that construction of new accommodations is more important. In my opinion, I believe that the emphasis should be on building houses as it is one of the basic needs of humankind.

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The death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe that capital punishment is no humane way for execution, even if that person has committed a grave offence. Others think that the extreme penalty is necessary to keep the security system efficient in society. Personally, I believe that capital punishment is a necessary evil for a grave offence. This essay will support my opinion with some reasons and examples.

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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A popular topic today is regarding whether photographs and movies are more expressive approach than writings, poetry, and even books. It is commonly believed that this is true.However, in this essay, I am going to elaborate on this topic and show my disapproval.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Global tourism is a blessing for many countries while it is a curse for some specific fields such as the indigenous people and the climate.Despite having few demerits the merits overweigh overwhelmingly due to the consequent expansion of trade and commerce.This essay will describe both sides of worldwide tourism with an example from my life.

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Supermarkets should only sell food products from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

A commonly held belief is that food markets should sell domestic products only and stop importing from other countries. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on this topic and show why I am in favour of this statement.

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Some people prefer to spend time with their own age group while others like to spend their time with different age groups. Discuss both views and gibe your opinion.

Time is the only thing which cannot be regained if lost.Hence, it is important that we spend it carefully.In this context, a few individuals always like to give their time to their contemporaries whereas some want to spend it with the ones who are elder or younger to them. In the current essay, I would discuss both views and give my opinion.

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some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Other believe governments should tightly control the use of freshwater as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

From the birth of the earth, aqua is a fundamental resource for every species. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that each individual has their birthright on water consumption; others emphasize that authorities ought to manage the need of drinkable aqua as its quantity is limited. In my view, under the natural cycle of freshwater, the consumption always lags behind the proportion.

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Many companies use advertisement to increase sales. What are the main reasons that make an advertisement effective? Is it a good thing or bad thing to the society?

Several companies rely most of their business on the advertisement to increase sales. There are a number of reasons to make propaganda effective. However, it is not always made for the common good. Society has felt many times the positive and the negative effect of advertising.

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