IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 93

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that technological advances have made our lives easier and comfortable. Therefore, some individuals believe that the use of state-of-the-art technology can help in checking crime rates too. I agree with the statement and will discuss about it in the essay.

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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?

One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is teenagers playing video games instead of playing in the outdoors. Many parents are worried with the decline in daily exercise and cognitive skills. As such, there are both merits and demerits for this trend, this essay will explain the drawbacks of this development and explain them in detail.

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In some areas of the US, a curfew was imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to go out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompained by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

As the curfew is being imposed due to some emergency situations. Now, there has been some time restrictions allotted for the teenagers, especially during the night time for hanging out, unless they are safeguarded by the adults. In my opinion I completely agree with this welfare measure taken against youngsters safety.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

There has been an ongoing debate where to build an inhabitant for the people in the metropolis as having no space left in the urban areas. However, some people perceive that this land is available in the rural areas only which must be utilized for the agricultural and forest. This essay will discuss my stance with supporting arguments in the below paragraphs.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is widely believed that successful sports persons make huge money than other people who are eminent in their respective fields. In my opinion I don't agree with this statement, it all depends upon your effort and determination.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many purchasing outlets have online platforms and thus, have led to an increase in the online shopping industry. Some people are of the opinion that this growth will result in the closing down of conventional shops in the cities. In my opinion, I agree with this perspective. This essay will discuss the reasons why I think the thriving of online shops will ultimately lead to the closure of walk-in shops.

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Planting trees if very important, some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of the cities and town, while others say that housing facilities should be build instead. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued by some people that planting trees in empty regions of the cities and towns is an extremely essential plan. Others believe that governments should use these areas to provide people with accommodation. Nevertheless, I utterly agree with both ideas, as I will opine my reasons for this support in this essay.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishments is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children ?

It is crucial that morality should be taught to children at their earliest stage of life. I agree to a certain extent that disciplinary actions would aid moulding a child’s behaviour. This essay would succinctly discuss how the punishments assists to differentiate right and wrong and what kind of punishments could be used to teach children to improve their behaviour.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishments is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children ?

It is crucial that morality should be taught to children at their initial stage of development. I strongly agree that punishments would be required to improve the youth behaviour to a greater extent. This essay would succinctly discuss what kind of punishments could be used to teach children along with the importance of it in the learning process.

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Some people think the governments should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve the environments problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, there is an ongoing discussion between people about the potential benefits to the environment when fuel emissions were reduced. While some people suggest the authorities to raise gas costs, in order to address this issue, it may not be practical considering the broader scenario. Hence, I completely do not agree with this approach. In this essay, I shall explain the reasons behind my disagreement with the given statement, and provide examples as required.

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Some people think that current environmental issues are global problems and should, therefore, be dealt with by the government while others believe that these problems can only be tackled by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the contemporary world, the concern for the degrading environment is at the peak. Some people believe it is possible for an individual to make a difference, while others feel it cannot be solved without authorities intervening in the matter. In my opinion, the government has an indispensable role in such matters.

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In many large cities, people waste hours of their time every day because of traffic congestion on the roads. What are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In urban centres around the world, a great deal of time is wasted daily due to traffic jams. This is a serious issue because it affects people's livelihoods and mental health. This essay will consider the main causes of traffic congestion, before proposing two possible solutions.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is indeed that the advancement in the technology has changed our life predominantly. Many people perceive that people have a number of alternatives available in all the walks of life, as compared to the past. I strongly agree that momentarily, the people have both a better the standard of living and the amount the choices.

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Foreigners have a tendency to live in the rural area. Give the pros and cons of this and relevant exapmles to support.

In this day and age, foreigners have a tendency to live in the rural area. This composition will focus on the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of of wearing uniform?

It has become a debatable issue that business corporations and associations are demanding their staffs to attire in uniforms while coming to work. While wearing a homogeneous dress has many positives, its negatives should not be underestimated. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of a constant attire.

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In recent years many governments has brought in laws to ban smoking in public places, such as bars, restaurants and offices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with banning smoking in public places?

It is undeniable that smoking is injuries to health and many countries has passed laws against smoking in public areas due to its ill effects. I totally agree with this move by the government because of public safety, bad impression of youth and health effect on non-smokers.

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Some people say that the best way to discourage smoking is to make smoking illegal in public places. Other people say that this is not enough and other measures are needed. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Smoking is dangerous for health and it evolves lung cancer and subsequent death. In recent years people are using tobacco as a fashion. Some people say that making illegal in the public is the only solution. While others insist on other ways to deal. In my opinion, the adequate way to prevent is the enforcement of a handsome amount of penalty and banned for teenagers.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Tourism, studies and work opportunities have attracted a huge portion of foreigners coming to a country. As a result, being capable of speaking more than just your mother tongue is more important than ever. The purpose of being multilingual is diverse, too. Some would argue that it is only for international journeying and oversea working, while others believe that there are more than two reasons mentioned above. In this essay, I would examine the objectives of studying languages.

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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These years have witnessed the significant changes in the communication between countries. Tourism, studies and work opportunities have attracted a huge portion of foreigners coming to a country. As a result, being capable of speaking more than just your mother tongue is more important than ever. The purpose of being multilingual is diverse, too. Some would argue that it is only for international journeying and oversea working, while others believe that there are more than two reasons mentioned above. In this essay, I would examine the objectives of studying languages.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the recent times, the environmental issues have been elevated exorbitant and it became a mooted issue globally. Many intellectuals opine that the issue is only related to the aboriginal plants and wildlife, while others perceive that there are several predominant problems related to the nature. This essay will discuss both views of the above notion along with my opinion further.

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