IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 93

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In society, It is a highly debatable topic on children’s freedom. Some group of people thinks that children should have the power to take their own decision while others are saying that privilege makes self-centric children. In my opinion, children should not be given complete freedom to decide as they cannot judge what is bad and good for them. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

In today's world, most of the people were interested in travelling than a decade ago. This is owing to certain reasons like the advent of new technology, the influence of social media and sedentary lifestyle etc. This essay will discuss the reasons and benefits of travelling, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

GLOBAL WARMING IS THE BIGGEST PROBLEM IN THIS WORLD. PEOPLE USES MANY PRODUCTS WITHOUT EVEN KNOWING THEIR IMPACT ON THE PLANET. SOME THINK THAT, THE CONSUMPTION OF FOSSIL FUELS SAFELY BY RESEARCHING AND INVENTING COULD BE THE BIGGEST ACHIEVEMENT IN TODAY’S LIFE. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW, THIS COULD HELP HUMAN AS WELL AS THE LIVES OF ANIMALS. IT COULD HELP TO DESTROY OUR EARTH.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A lot of people believe that the governments should spend more money on creating new railways for fast trains between cities, while others argue that the capital should go into developing the pre-existing public transport. I agree that the money should be spent on railway stations for advanced trains. Firstly, the essay will discuss the advantages of funding railways and secondly, it will talk about the superiorities of developing the already existing vehicles.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation of committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, committing crime is becoming increasingly usual. With certainty, criminals are considered to be assigned with fixed penalty under a law, while majority favours for the verdict to be taken on a particular incident. Since, each suspicious activity has distinct characteristics. In my opinion, each illicit step deserves same wrath.

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Today large shopping centers and supermarkets are more common than small local shops. Is this positive or negative development?

It is often argued that the number of facilities is necessary to live our life better. Some people might think that the facilities such as franchised malls are more usual than some tiny native retail shops nowadays. Although the local stores are needed as part of a society, co-operative centres have strongly positive trend. This essay will address the perspective of the shops.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation of committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, committing crime is becoming increasingly usual. With certainty, criminals are considered to be assigned with fixed penalty, while majority favours for the verdict to be taken on a particular incident. Since, each suspicious activity has distinct characteristics. In my opinion, each illicit step deserves same wrath.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no shadow of doubt that purchasing through the internet has aroused a lot of debates and discussions around it. A group of people claims that, this action may have a negative impact on the local stores, whilst others have a totally contrasting point of view which is, online shopping is more beneficiary than physical shopping. In my opinion, I totally support the last one for the previous reason mentioned before. This essay will deal with two of the advantages of the getting products online.

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Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product. Discuss if you agree or disagree and give your opinion

Despite the fact, it's believed by some people that having an idea that stands out in the market is the way to succeed in the marketplace. Although in my opinion, there are various factors that contribute in making a business profitable. The thing indicated essay will discuss how factors like teamwork, planning and government policies play a vital role in the growth of companies.

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modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children .many children suffer because they donnot get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the vast majority of parents neglect their children due to the complementary way of life.Some are of the view that care givers spend less amount of time with their kids than they did before which causes an emotional pain to their children, while others refuse to subscribe to this notion. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement.

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Money should be spent on creating new buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Each city has different type of buildings therein some is dilapidated and the government has spent more and more money to renovate them. However, if money spend on building of new establishments and destroying old one, it will be more profitable. Overall, I can partly agree with the topic statement because some old museums and town halls have historic value and replacing on modern buildings destroy integrity picture of history such constructions.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

One of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is television marketing. Some people believe that commercials enable people to buy goods that are not necessary and waste money. On the other hand, others argue that ads introduce latest products to consumers. In my view, I strongly believe that advertisements help people to choose between products and aid in decision making.

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Cricket has become more popular than national sports in the subcontinent countries. what do you think are the reasons behind this?

Nowadays, an extraordinary number of audience has given immense fame to the cricket. In the subcontinent, this is preferred more than the national sports. Since, there is rarely any country that does not include it. In my opinion, the procedure of the field and earning the money makes it popular.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Some people assert that giving youngsters the freedom to choose what to eat, what to wear, and how to spend their time would generate a society of selfish individuals. While others see that this is vital to build the children's personality. In the following essay, I will discuss both views supporting the latter.

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Some people think parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss

With the recent development in the technologies and the changes in our lifestyles, it has been noticed that children have more freedom that directly touch their behaviours. While some people argue that parents need to monitor their kid’s activities on a daily basis, others claim that children should have some space to develop their personality. This essay will discuss both sides of the arguments and provide a conclusion.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Technologies have rapidly been changing since earlier the twenty-one century that allow implementing it everywhere and one of this area became the education process. However, this implementation has brought not only positive such as receiving information from one resource and easier adaptation to modern demands, but also negative in part of the health of pupils and other distractions.

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It is more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that a person always attaches to the roots of the history to which he belongs, while some people say, it is imperative to know any historical significance in the locality a human live rather than exploring it on the worldwide level, however, I think one should have adequate knowledge of local, the national and the international ancient times as well.

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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in cities and towns closing. Do you agree or disagree

There is a hypothesis stating that the development of shopping via the online platforms may cause suspension to the local markets in the local community. In spite of the fact that online shopping has become widely used, I do believe that customers will still prefer buying their goods offline due to more than one reason. In the following essay I will support this point of view.

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Men and women employed in full-time jobs should share the responsibilities of household chores. Do you agree or disagree? Share relevant personal experiences.

Nowadays, number of households, where both the partners are working is increasing steadily. Women have shown that they can perform tasks in a similar way to men, in the professional front. Many people believe that they should share household work as the couples are working full-time. I completely agree with this viewpoint as it saves the day and improves coordination between family members.

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Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some people think that, to achieve great things in sports we need natural talent. However, a few people think that it takes hard work and training to become successful. In my opinion, it is all about the efforts, that really matters in accomplishing our goals.

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