IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 96

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In many large cities, people waste hours of their time every day because of traffic congestion on the roads. What are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In urban centres around the world, a great deal of time is wasted daily due to traffic jams. This is a serious issue because it affects people's livelihoods and mental health. This essay will consider the main causes of traffic congestion, before proposing two possible solutions.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is indeed that the advancement in the technology has changed our life predominantly. Many people perceive that people have a number of alternatives available in all the walks of life, as compared to the past. I strongly agree that momentarily, the people have both a better the standard of living and the amount the choices.

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Foreigners have a tendency to live in the rural area. Give the pros and cons of this and relevant exapmles to support.

In this day and age, foreigners have a tendency to live in the rural area. This composition will focus on the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of of wearing uniform?

It has become a debatable issue that business corporations and associations are demanding their staffs to attire in uniforms while coming to work. While wearing a homogeneous dress has many positives, its negatives should not be underestimated. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of a constant attire.

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In recent years many governments has brought in laws to ban smoking in public places, such as bars, restaurants and offices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with banning smoking in public places?

It is undeniable that smoking is injuries to health and many countries has passed laws against smoking in public areas due to its ill effects. I totally agree with this move by the government because of public safety, bad impression of youth and health effect on non-smokers.

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Some people say that the best way to discourage smoking is to make smoking illegal in public places. Other people say that this is not enough and other measures are needed. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Smoking is dangerous for health and it evolves lung cancer and subsequent death. In recent years people are using tobacco as a fashion. Some people say that making illegal in the public is the only solution. While others insist on other ways to deal. In my opinion, the adequate way to prevent is the enforcement of a handsome amount of penalty and banned for teenagers.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Tourism, studies and work opportunities have attracted a huge portion of foreigners coming to a country. As a result, being capable of speaking more than just your mother tongue is more important than ever. The purpose of being multilingual is diverse, too. Some would argue that it is only for international journeying and oversea working, while others believe that there are more than two reasons mentioned above. In this essay, I would examine the objectives of studying languages.

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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These years have witnessed the significant changes in the communication between countries. Tourism, studies and work opportunities have attracted a huge portion of foreigners coming to a country. As a result, being capable of speaking more than just your mother tongue is more important than ever. The purpose of being multilingual is diverse, too. Some would argue that it is only for international journeying and oversea working, while others believe that there are more than two reasons mentioned above. In this essay, I would examine the objectives of studying languages.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the recent times, the environmental issues have been elevated exorbitant and it became a mooted issue globally. Many intellectuals opine that the issue is only related to the aboriginal plants and wildlife, while others perceive that there are several predominant problems related to the nature. This essay will discuss both views of the above notion along with my opinion further.

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some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages later in life. to what extent do you agree?

In recent decades, various countries have built single-sex schools and mixed-sex schools, so parents have a variety to choose to which they send their children. It is thought by some that children who study in gender-specific schools face difficulties in the future. I completely agree with the statement.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behavior? What is your opinion?

Television and computer games have been the most popular sources of entertainment among folks. While, some individuals believe that the content of these mediums has become violent these days, and it might impact negatively on our society, I would argue that these elements do not have any significant effect on people.

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In today’s very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, working people need to have a lot of skills beyond good qualifications other skills such as management skills, soft skills... I think qualification skills and social skills are indispensable in this current age. Because it determines whether you can do it or not. This essay will discuss both points of view before coming to a reasoned conclusion.

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As a result of tourism and increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problem?

Tourism sector affected an entire world in many aspects. However, many people have started to use flights for visiting different places. This would make surroundings polluted and create problems for the citizens to live in that place. This essay will discuss such problems and measures would be taken by the regime to handle such issues.

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In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In various nations people are worried regarding the percentage of the children, who are suffering due to the obesity. In my opinion, it is due to the unhealthy diet and the problem can be resolved by implementing physical education as a compulsory subject in the school.

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Question: Do you agree or disagree that in the near future the role of teachers will be taken by technology?

It is a contentious issue that the responsibility of the tutor will be replaced by robotics. In my opinion, I completely disagree because of lack of technological advancement and its inefficiency to create a bonding with the student.

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Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than the benefits? Do you agree or disagree?

It is indeed that the advancement in technology has a predominant impact on the society. Some intellectuals opine that, the advancements in technology have more detrimental effects which outweigh advantages. I strongly disagree with the above notion.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have to many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays we have to make a lot of decisions every day. While many argue that we have a plethora of choices these days. I completely agree with this statement.

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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The education system has evolved with time, and continuously trying to catch up with the latest technological advancements. The curriculum being offered by academic institutes is updated periodically, whereas the new developments in the industry are evolving every day. Some critics assert that the university education is the key to become a successful professional, while I completely disagree with this notion and the essay will outline why extra skill set needs to be inculcated in the graduates.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this issue?

Children are involved in a significant number of nations in different kinds of paid work. While it's believed by some people that this is extremely incorrect, others regard this as a precious professional experience that is crucial for being a responsible and thoughtful individual. Despite some benefits, child abuse by engaging them in physical forms of jobs could harm their character and negatively affect their mental health. In my opinion, young individuals should spend enough time learning and enjoying a normal childhood before getting involved in any kind of job.

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people eat more processed food than they did in the past.why is this?what are the effects of this?

People consume the bigger amount of processed meal now than they used to do in the past. This happens due to the busy lifestyle and high prices for fresh products. This essay will take a look at the main reasons, why it happens, and the effects, which processed feed has.

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