IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 97

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In various nations people are worried regarding the percentage of the children, who are suffering due to the obesity. In my opinion, it is due to the unhealthy diet and the problem can be resolved by implementing physical education as a compulsory subject in the school.

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Question: Do you agree or disagree that in the near future the role of teachers will be taken by technology?

It is a contentious issue that the responsibility of the tutor will be replaced by robotics. In my opinion, I completely disagree because of lack of technological advancement and its inefficiency to create a bonding with the student.

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Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than the benefits? Do you agree or disagree?

It is indeed that the advancement in technology has a predominant impact on the society. Some intellectuals opine that, the advancements in technology have more detrimental effects which outweigh advantages. I strongly disagree with the above notion.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have to many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays we have to make a lot of decisions every day. While many argue that we have a plethora of choices these days. I completely agree with this statement.

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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The education system has evolved with time, and continuously trying to catch up with the latest technological advancements. The curriculum being offered by academic institutes is updated periodically, whereas the new developments in the industry are evolving every day. Some critics assert that the university education is the key to become a successful professional, while I completely disagree with this notion and the essay will outline why extra skill set needs to be inculcated in the graduates.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this issue?

Children are involved in a significant number of nations in different kinds of paid work. While it's believed by some people that this is extremely incorrect, others regard this as a precious professional experience that is crucial for being a responsible and thoughtful individual. Despite some benefits, child abuse by engaging them in physical forms of jobs could harm their character and negatively affect their mental health. In my opinion, young individuals should spend enough time learning and enjoying a normal childhood before getting involved in any kind of job.

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people eat more processed food than they did in the past.why is this?what are the effects of this?

People consume the bigger amount of processed meal now than they used to do in the past. This happens due to the busy lifestyle and high prices for fresh products. This essay will take a look at the main reasons, why it happens, and the effects, which processed feed has.

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The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that parents should be made to undertake the parenting courses in order to guarantee that their children develop well. Personally, I disagree with this notion and will outline the reasons below.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The world has witnessed many inventions which have changed human lives completely. One such incredible breakthrough was invention of computer. I agree with the notion that this invention is one of the landmarks in the history of mankind.

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Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit making companies. Do you think the disadvantage of private health care outweigh the advantages.

Although, it is thought by a bound individual's health service shouldn't be controlled by privately operated medical companies and, I would argue that there came more advantages for people utilize private strength services and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that it is better to spend more money to eliminate the cause of crime, while others think that the government should spend more on punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the recent times, the society is suffering from the soaring rate of crime all around the world. Some intellectuals opine to devote more fiscal resources to prevent the root of the offences, whereas others consider that the penalty for the crime must get stringent. This essay will discuss both the views of the above notion along with my opinion.

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Should government make decisions about people's life style, or should people make their own decisions.

The lifestyle of a common person and nature of reign has changed a lot in the past century, owing to the technological and educational advances. Some people think that the government has the full right to make decisions regarding the way of living of an individual, whereas some are with the view that it should be a personal choice.

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Some people believe that it is better to spend more money to eliminate the cause of crime, while others think that the government should spend more on punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The regime must work for the reduction of the criminal cases by imposing the straighten law, which provides the civilization security. Some people perceive that the authority should spend the large amount of fund on the reasons that helps to reduce the misconduct in the nation; while others think that they use such capital to punish the criminals. This essay will discuss about my stance with supporting arguments in further paragraph.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this a positive or negative development?

It is certain that people can purchase the same goods at any place around the world, and it leads the nations now are becoming gradually similar. In my opinion, this argument will have several benefits and drawbacks.

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Some people say that spending time to develop a successful career is the most important thing. Others say that spending time with friends and family is more important. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Education would be considered as a rudimentary requirement of an individual. Some people perceive that acquiring skills that helps in the future, jobs such as studying academic subjects or interpersonal communication is a crucial thing, provides opportunity to earn high; while others give more priority to their near and dear one, which provides moral support and happiness. This essay will discuss my stance with supporting arguments in further paragraphs.

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With the recent development in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that those form of media will never disappear. Discuss both views and give your opinion!

For the time being, it is conceded that advance technology starts to explore every aspects globally ranging from lifestyles to daily needs. Hi-tech devices have changed the way of receiving information in peoples live. Some mortals claim that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines would be left, while others argue that such media will continue to exist. Both of views would be elaborated before my opinion is given.

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Educationalist think that international exchange visits are important for teenage school students. Do you agree?

The awareness regarding an education has uncertainly gained momentum. However, this has been achieved by applying a various methodology in the academic institute. This had created the debatable topic for the researcher, who thinks cosmopolitan visits, plays a crucial role in the development of the pupil during their school time. The essay will discuss my opinion followed by supporting arguments in the below paragraph.

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Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

It is true that family-run businesses have never stopped gaining in popularity over the world. Although this model is applauded by many experts, it still exists some limitations.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

It's believed by some people that those, who work in the entertainment industry such as movie stars, music makers or sports players are highly paid. In fact, I totally agree with that. Moreover, there are other types of jobs that should be getting high salaries, including scientists, doctors and teachers.

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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this world dominated by technologies, working abroad is becoming everybody's dream. As part of migration to other countries for work, family of the primary worker also has to move along. While, some think that it makes life more difficult for the children. I personally think that children in these families benefit from this move. This essay will discuss this scenario, by considering the opinion of both sides by using the examples of Oxford university research and Time magazine survey to demonstrate the points and support the claims.

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