IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 98

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that it is better to spend more money to eliminate the cause of crime, while others think that the government should spend more on punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the recent times, the society is suffering from the soaring rate of crime all around the world. Some intellectuals opine to devote more fiscal resources to prevent the root of the offences, whereas others consider that the penalty for the crime must get stringent. This essay will discuss both the views of the above notion along with my opinion.

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Should government make decisions about people's life style, or should people make their own decisions.

The lifestyle of a common person and nature of reign has changed a lot in the past century, owing to the technological and educational advances. Some people think that the government has the full right to make decisions regarding the way of living of an individual, whereas some are with the view that it should be a personal choice.

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Some people believe that it is better to spend more money to eliminate the cause of crime, while others think that the government should spend more on punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The regime must work for the reduction of the criminal cases by imposing the straighten law, which provides the civilization security. Some people perceive that the authority should spend the large amount of fund on the reasons that helps to reduce the misconduct in the nation; while others think that they use such capital to punish the criminals. This essay will discuss about my stance with supporting arguments in further paragraph.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this a positive or negative development?

It is certain that people can purchase the same goods at any place around the world, and it leads the nations now are becoming gradually similar. In my opinion, this argument will have several benefits and drawbacks.

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Some people say that spending time to develop a successful career is the most important thing. Others say that spending time with friends and family is more important. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Education would be considered as a rudimentary requirement of an individual. Some people perceive that acquiring skills that helps in the future, jobs such as studying academic subjects or interpersonal communication is a crucial thing, provides opportunity to earn high; while others give more priority to their near and dear one, which provides moral support and happiness. This essay will discuss my stance with supporting arguments in further paragraphs.

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With the recent development in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that those form of media will never disappear. Discuss both views and give your opinion!

For the time being, it is conceded that advance technology starts to explore every aspects globally ranging from lifestyles to daily needs. Hi-tech devices have changed the way of receiving information in peoples live. Some mortals claim that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines would be left, while others argue that such media will continue to exist. Both of views would be elaborated before my opinion is given.

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Educationalist think that international exchange visits are important for teenage school students. Do you agree?

The awareness regarding an education has uncertainly gained momentum. However, this has been achieved by applying a various methodology in the academic institute. This had created the debatable topic for the researcher, who thinks cosmopolitan visits, plays a crucial role in the development of the pupil during their school time. The essay will discuss my opinion followed by supporting arguments in the below paragraph.

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Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

It is true that family-run businesses have never stopped gaining in popularity over the world. Although this model is applauded by many experts, it still exists some limitations.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

It's believed by some people that those, who work in the entertainment industry such as movie stars, music makers or sports players are highly paid. In fact, I totally agree with that. Moreover, there are other types of jobs that should be getting high salaries, including scientists, doctors and teachers.

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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this world dominated by technologies, working abroad is becoming everybody's dream. As part of migration to other countries for work, family of the primary worker also has to move along. While, some think that it makes life more difficult for the children. I personally think that children in these families benefit from this move. This essay will discuss this scenario, by considering the opinion of both sides by using the examples of Oxford university research and Time magazine survey to demonstrate the points and support the claims.

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Some people believe that children should be brought up in cities, others believe that the countryside offers a better environment for children.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Whether or not to raise our youngsters in the cities has become a controversial issue.While it is considered by many that they should be raised in the urban region, others are of the opinion that the countryside is a better place since it offers them a healthy atmosphere to live in.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth.I, however, believe that it should be the onus on parents to provide their children appropriate environment to survive and thrive as well.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges related not only to the environment, but pollution and education as well. What problems your country will face in next years.

In today's world, there are a number of challenges associated with the atmosphere, a teaching system and so on. Although many of them are significantly impacted due to rise of population, it can also be noted that modernization has influenced in order to rise these complications. This essay will explain about what are the threats of the current modern world as well as a futuristic approach of these menaces.

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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. Others however, believe it is unnecessary because TV and the Internet can give all the same information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As the world is becoming smaller than ever before, thanks to the rapid technology development and cheaper transportation cost. There are two contrasting views with regard to accessing other cultures. Firstly, people need to visit other countries to know other countries vividly whereas the others are accessing the information about other cultures through the medium of the Internet and TV. I will examine these two contrast views and add my comment on them.

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Successful sport players can earn a great deal more money than people in other professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The fact that celebrated sport players make far more money than people in other professional groups is often debated topic in many societies. I believe that professional athletes are overpaid compared to the value they have in society, whereas many other experts are earning slightly over average.

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Some people are making new friends by using socializing network websites and internet chat rooms.Some people say that this is a good thing.Others say that people should make new friends by face to face chat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The increasing trend of making friends with the help of social sites, such as Facebook, has become a controversial issue.While some analyst believe that this is definitely advantageous for the people, others think that it is more beneficial to widen the network by face-to-face interaction.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth.I, however, opine that real interactions are much safer.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that authorities should use the money for constructing railways and road. I would with the idea; however, I believe that both railways and roads are equally important and they bring a lot of benefit in our life.

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More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?

Fewer undergraduates today than ever before are opting to pursue careers in science. This is because business related subjects offer greater financial security and this will result in less overall talent in scientific fields.

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Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. ... Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Mass media have a powerful influence in shaping our lives. Some people believe that more positive news stories should be delivered by the media, and I do agree with this statement as it would bring happiness in people's lives, and build trust towards governments.

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In some cultures old age is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Generally people living in cities or towns close to museums or historical sites don't prefer visiting them regularly. In the following essay, I would like to discuss the reasons for that situation and things that can be done in order to change them.

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Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.

Health and fitness are a really important factor in someone's life. Many companies these days are providing gym and sports club's membership to encourage their workforce, this helps them to stay fit. Others think it is just a waste of money. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.

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