IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 98

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

It is true that family-run businesses have never stopped gaining in popularity over the world. Although this model is applauded by many experts, it still exists some limitations.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

It's believed by some people that those, who work in the entertainment industry such as movie stars, music makers or sports players are highly paid. In fact, I totally agree with that. Moreover, there are other types of jobs that should be getting high salaries, including scientists, doctors and teachers.

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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this world dominated by technologies, working abroad is becoming everybody's dream. As part of migration to other countries for work, family of the primary worker also has to move along. While, some think that it makes life more difficult for the children. I personally think that children in these families benefit from this move. This essay will discuss this scenario, by considering the opinion of both sides by using the examples of Oxford university research and Time magazine survey to demonstrate the points and support the claims.

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Some people believe that children should be brought up in cities, others believe that the countryside offers a better environment for children.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Whether or not to raise our youngsters in the cities has become a controversial issue.While it is considered by many that they should be raised in the urban region, others are of the opinion that the countryside is a better place since it offers them a healthy atmosphere to live in.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth.I, however, believe that it should be the onus on parents to provide their children appropriate environment to survive and thrive as well.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges related not only to the environment, but pollution and education as well. What problems your country will face in next years.

In today's world, there are a number of challenges associated with the atmosphere, a teaching system and so on. Although many of them are significantly impacted due to rise of population, it can also be noted that modernization has influenced in order to rise these complications. This essay will explain about what are the threats of the current modern world as well as a futuristic approach of these menaces.

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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. Others however, believe it is unnecessary because TV and the Internet can give all the same information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As the world is becoming smaller than ever before, thanks to the rapid technology development and cheaper transportation cost. There are two contrasting views with regard to accessing other cultures. Firstly, people need to visit other countries to know other countries vividly whereas the others are accessing the information about other cultures through the medium of the Internet and TV. I will examine these two contrast views and add my comment on them.

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Successful sport players can earn a great deal more money than people in other professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The fact that celebrated sport players make far more money than people in other professional groups is often debated topic in many societies. I believe that professional athletes are overpaid compared to the value they have in society, whereas many other experts are earning slightly over average.

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Some people are making new friends by using socializing network websites and internet chat rooms.Some people say that this is a good thing.Others say that people should make new friends by face to face chat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The increasing trend of making friends with the help of social sites, such as Facebook, has become a controversial issue.While some analyst believe that this is definitely advantageous for the people, others think that it is more beneficial to widen the network by face-to-face interaction.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth.I, however, opine that real interactions are much safer.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that authorities should use the money for constructing railways and road. I would with the idea; however, I believe that both railways and roads are equally important and they bring a lot of benefit in our life.

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More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?

Fewer undergraduates today than ever before are opting to pursue careers in science. This is because business related subjects offer greater financial security and this will result in less overall talent in scientific fields.

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Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. ... Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Mass media have a powerful influence in shaping our lives. Some people believe that more positive news stories should be delivered by the media, and I do agree with this statement as it would bring happiness in people's lives, and build trust towards governments.

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In some cultures old age is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Generally people living in cities or towns close to museums or historical sites don't prefer visiting them regularly. In the following essay, I would like to discuss the reasons for that situation and things that can be done in order to change them.

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Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.

Health and fitness are a really important factor in someone's life. Many companies these days are providing gym and sports club's membership to encourage their workforce, this helps them to stay fit. Others think it is just a waste of money. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines between cities. Others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, government expenditure on the railways and public goods has become a contentious issue. While some believe that money should be spent on fresh railway lines for the sake of intercity shipping, others argue that this sum should be employed for current transport systems. Conspicuously, this issue requires our in-depth analysis. I completely agree with the latter stance.

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Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities world. What are your opinion on this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is an irrefutable that the electronic games play a vital role in the child’s lifestyle and there is no doubt game helps to develop our mind. Some people assert that violent games affect badly on teenagers, might encourage them to become aggressive in real life. In fact, many parents worry about this and the effect of these games are having on their children. In this essay, I intend to support my views before the conclusion can be drawn.

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Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that we space programmers should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that the space is still unexplored and unknown. While some argue that these explorations cost more than its advantages, I believe if we want to expand our knowledge beyond our planet. We should continue this effort. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. to what extend do you agree, give your own opinion.

Today’s world has been divided into developing and industrialised countries where the main difference of them is the amount of money spend on education, health and infrastructure. It is debatable whether developing fortunate countries become their authority or others. To my perspective, opulent nations should partake to solve poor nations problems’ because they have more resource to deal with the challenge

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Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons, such as traditional medicine. How can this issue be tackled?

Human life is dependent on the animals. But, human beings have put many animal species in danger of becoming extinct with the unchecked and extensive hunting for its selfish motives such as house decorations, pleasure etc. It is very important to protect the animals and some measures for this cause must be taken.

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Some people think that teenagers should follow what the old people say whereas some believe that it is good for teenage people to challenge what old people say. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that adolescence is a crucial period of an individual's life. While some people believe that teenagers should follow the advice of their elders, I would argue that it is normal for them to oppose the older people.

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Global environmental issues are the responsibility of rich nations not of poorer nations. Do you agree with this opinion.

Depletion of the environment has become a grave issue for the whole world. Many people think that only rich countries should take up the responsibility to work for conserving the habitat. However, I do not agree with this approach and find it as an absurd solution.

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