IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 94

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion

While some individuals believe that travelling to foreign nations in order to enhance knowledge is essential, others consider that it is not significant due to the vast availability of the media resources which provide ample information regarding their customs and traditions.This essay intends to delve into both sides of the argument in depth.I, however, think that it is appropriate to travel abroad despite the involvement of huge amount of money.

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Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive. To what extent do you agree/disagree.

In the sophisticated era, women play a cardinal role in the life of every person because they work equally like men in every profession. According to the some women are more calm and they possessed good personality. Also, they are more upbringing than men. I am personally inclined to agree with the statement that women are peaceful as compared to men. This essay will elaborate the possible reasons behind it in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education, from primary to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

Should all individuals irrespective of their social class have access to education? Some people think that all levels of schooling should be without a cost. In my opinion, I vehemently disagree with this perspective and this essay will discuss the rationale for my opinion.

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The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. Discuss both views with example.

The 20th century has come along with numerous developments such as the digitization, IT revolution and the internet, and these phenomena have upgraded the educational support system such as libraries. Traditionally, the libraries used to keep the books, but now due to lightening-fast internet services modern libraries have more multimedia resources namely, CDs, DVDs and computers. Some critics assert that books should be the primary source of knowledge in the libraries, whereas the others believe that they should be equipped with laptops and computer devices. The essay will discuss both these aspects followed by a conclusion.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

In the modernized world, the people are certainly suffering from many troubles. From that, the most important one is an increasing traffic and pollution, which generated by the vehicles. However, some people opine that this issue will be handled by the rising the price of the fuel. I strongly support this view. The essay will discuss argument to support the notion and other ways to solve these predicaments.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, entertainment ) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that younglings should be allowed to make their own choices in any field of the life, while, some part of the society thinks that this may lead to their development as self centred people only. However, I believe, freedom along with some parental guidance is mandatory at this age, so that a kid grows up as a responsible person. This essay will explore both the sides of the notion.

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Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Nowadays, living in the society as an eminent film star or sports personality has it's both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, their privileges always outweigh the problems. In this essay we will discuss about the relevant attributes.

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Some people say that it is more important to spend money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the health is always necessary to live our life happy. Some people might think that it is more significant to consume money to advertise a well-being lifestyle to avoid sickness than to support the surgery for the patients who are suffering the disease. Although caring sick people are required, I strongly agree with that idea. This essay will address the perspective of concerning people.

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We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choices as consumers, and what effect does it have on our lifestyles? Discuss the issue and give your opinion.

Over the years advertisements became more and more popular.We are exposed to them on the radio, on Tv, in the trailers of movies, buses, billboards, and they are promoted even by a lot of celebrities. Our choices as costumers are controlled by the advertisements due to the impossibility to avoid them. In my opinion they have a huge impact and in many cases, people end up buying things that they actually do not need.

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Many parents complain about violence promoted to their children through video games, TV programs and other media. Why is it happening? What can be the solution for it?

These days, many parents are concerned about their children’s violent behaviour because of the increase in the portrayal of violence in various entertainment programs. These programs have many harmful effects. However, It is very crucial to find out considerable reasons and to look for solutions to tackle the problem.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is true that developing transport instruction includes railways and roads is crucial for an economics. While I accept that railway system bring so much benefit, I believe that the decision to focus on building railways or roads of a country based on many factors and a government has to consider the benefit of each system for the whole economics in short and long-term.

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Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offence, while others say they should be free to make noise without limitation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that producing a high level of noise should be punished by law, while others argue that individuals should have liberty to make any amount of noise. In my opinion, the punishment should be given to the ones who make abnormal level noise.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that alternative means of transportation should be endorsed and global law should be imposed on car ownership and use. However, in my opinion, to heal the environment, and to reduce toxicity in the atmosphere, various ways of public transport should be adopted. In this essay, I will propose possible examples for the same.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to the globalization, many parts of the world have been revolutionized. This will lead to the people from various nations are using the same products in their routine life. As per my opinion, this will affect in an irrefutable manner which represents the unity between the people. The essay will discuss above notion with arguments in below paragraphs.

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Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry ...)can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some experts opine that only god gifted has ability to perform the art, while, others believe that anybody can do this. I believe if a person is determined and focus they can do these activities. This essay will discuss both the arguments in details.

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Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?

It is often believed that individuals who left their early academics from universities are more prosperous and popular whereas others ended up with skilled jobs and business by finishing their studies from educational institutions. This essay will discuss the reasons behind the victorious people with less qualifications followed by the required steps in order to gain a successful life.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subject like Science and Technology are more important that History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The education in schools has taken the important role in social. There are some arguments that history subject is the most important, whereas some people realize of the science and technology. In my view, every student should learn both of them because there are both valid points which I will explain in this essay.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Due to the globalized world, people were certainly using a various mode of transportation. Some people perceive that the authority should have to use money on the railways not in a construction of a road. I strongly support this view as this mode provides a way of communication in a cost-effective manner. The essay will discuss above notion with arguments in below paragraphs.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through other media platforms. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern technological earth, some people think that media platforms are the best sources for reading news and articles. In the mean time a few others believe that conventional newspapers are the eminent sources, when it comes to news reading. In my opinion, using technological sources is the best way to get to know the information happening around us.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary world, many people have certainly given a more attention to their appearance. However, some people perceive that to recognise an individual’s tradition and identity would be by their dressing style. I strongly against this view as in the today’s world, most of the people attracted towards a western clothe; as they want to follow the latest trend. The essay will discuss above notion with arguments in the below paragraphs.

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