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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. a) apologize for damaging the product b) explain what happened c) say how are you going to fix the issue

How are you? I hope this letter finds you in your good health and spirit. I'm writing this letter to express my apologize for the laptop that I had lend it from you last week had been broken.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize for accidentally breaking your speaker. I felt extremely disappointed with myself when I saw it broken into pieces.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. - apologize for damaging the product / stuff - explain what happened - say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter to say I am sorry for accidentally breaking your favourite earrings, which I had taken from you for my brother's marriage.
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I You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

Hello! How are you . Hope you're in radiant of health. I'm writing this letter to apologize for the borrowed laptop of yours, which has been damaged since last week.
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Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologise for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how you are going to fix the issue

Hope you're okay. I'm writing to let you know that the DIY book you lent me last month got damaged accidentally.
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Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologise for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how you are going to fix the issue

Sorry, it's taken me so long to write to you but at last, I put pen to paper to explain why I haven't returned the book I brorrowed from you.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope this letter finds you in good health and prosperity .I am writing to apologize for damaging the iPad that I took from you .
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to offer my apology for damaging your wrist watch, which I borrowed from you last week.
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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. -Apologize for damaging the product. -Explain what happened. -Say how are you going to fix the issue.

I hope you are good. I am writing to you to tell you about static calaculator that I lended from you last week.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you about a bad news that the laptop which you lent to me has some problems.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you about a piece of bad news about the power bank which you lent to me has some problems.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you're doing well. I need to apologize because I damaged the Airpods you lent me. I'm really sorry about this.
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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. a) apologize for damaging the product b) explain what happened c) say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you are doing well, I'm writing this letter to you to apologize.
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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. a) apologize for damaging the product b) explain what happened c) say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter with regard to express my sincere apology because, I broke the glass of your laptop,which I borrowed from you last week.
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apologize for damaging the product explain what happened say how are you going to fix the issue

I am writing this letter to let you know that the book i have borrowed from you is lost now. I am really sorry that it happened to you  because I had to go on a trip without a short notice  due to my family matter.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you are in good condition. I am writing to apologize for the damaged device. It was kind of you not to mind borrowing your laptop for my dissertation a couple of days ago. I appreciate your generosity. Unfortunat
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Write a letter to a friend.You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Apologize for damaging the product Explain what happened Say how are you going to fix the issue

Hope you are doing well. I am writing an apology letter regarding the damaged laptop which I have borrowed from you.
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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you’re doing great. I’d like to thank you for borrowing me your camera and it did help me a lot during my trip to Japan. But I’ve got to tell you that I accidentally broke the lens. I feel terribly sorry for that
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1.Apologize for damaging the product 2.Explain what hallened 3.Say how are you going to fix the issue

I am so sorry that I damaged your laptop and I hope you are not shocked at me. I was so excited to have been damage to your laptop. I sincerely apologise for the damage to your laptop and humbly ask for your inconvenienc
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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue

I do apologize for being irresponsible. You know recently, I have borrowed money from you for something. However, I have told you " I promise, if I have money in my pocket, I will refund you." But, now I do not have any
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