You are a member of organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory, and you were very disappointed with the quality of the food and the behaviour of the staff· Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. Explain what was wrong with the meal and the service, and suggest what he/she should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir /Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam
This
is to express dissatisfaction with our
last
outing in your
restaurant
dated 23 December 2022.The quality of food served is not at all good and staff behaviour is
also
very rude and unfriendly.In spite of the fact that we are regular customers at the
restaurant
.
Furthermore
, I would like to give suggestions for your service. To maintain the quality of food you should prepare meals once the order is received . Don't serve the day before preparations are stored in the fridge. ,
Also
ask your staff to behave in a courteous manner. They should be aware of the importance of loyal customers.
Therefore
, I am requesting you to please take above mentioned suggestions seriously and Implement them .Once you implement these changes you will definitely see changes in your footfall . people will
also
come to your
restaurant
on a regular basis. So that we can visit the
restaurant
next time. looking forward to a quick response from you. Yours Faithfully Mike Hussy
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Disappointing
  • Unsatisfactory
  • Dissatisfied
  • Quality
  • Presentation
  • Hygiene
  • Attentive
  • Rude
  • Improve
  • Training
  • Compensation
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