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One of your neighbour's children has accidentally broken the front window of your car.

I am your upstairs neighbor.My name is Suhrob.I am writing you about happened accident by your children.Cause of my letter to you that you went a long business trip.I would chat with you about it by face to face but you are not at home.I was at home yesterday evening after work.Suddenly, I heard my car's alarm after that I looked at the bottom of the flat there were some children were punching near my car then I immediately went down.Let's look at with my eyes, my car's window was broken.There was nobody after broken window.I did not want to call the police for this condititionand I tried to find children who had broken my car's front window.Investigations have shown that the children are your children.I want you fix it within three days.I hope you immadiately eliminate it.
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For centuries, importan parts of education have remained such reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to added to the list. to what extent do you agree?

For ages,in terms of education curriculum subjects such as math,writing and reading plays crucial roles in the sociaty.It is undeniable that computers have become an essential part of our life.Nevertheless,some people believe that computer skills should also become mandatory subject in the advancement.Personally,I am in favor of the notion that computer skills should be added to the list.
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Many country encourage tourism. Does it bring advantages or disadvantages?

The diagram presents information about the process of the milk production by several steps. Overall, the process starts from cows grazing and finishes by appearing milk in the market.
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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way. While others prefer one-on-one instruction. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The graph presents information of the number of passengers during all day in the Paris metro station. Overall, there are two picks and one deep drop of passenger numbers during the day. First is in the morning, second is in the afternoon.
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Some people believe that visitor to other countries should follow local customs and behavior, others disagree and think that the host country welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I can agree with this statement but only at half. I believe that air traveling for short distances in own country could be afforded by people below middle class. Traveling by plane or another air transport variant was always hard for me. I couldn’t forget stress that I used to have as a child than me and my family were flying to another country. I imagine that you can take advantages of all benefits only using business class. Air traveling industry is growing very fast and I think in the near future almost everyone could afford to travel using this way. It is faster and more convenient than all the others but it still has lots of disadvantages. I don’t really like going somewhere using plane but sometimes I just don’t have other options to move.
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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

History is magenifisent subject, we all learn from history that is the reson why history is an important journey we should all admire it becaues the mysteries it can hold is unbeliveable oh my days have forgotten why history is still a nessary matter everybody should look but you still have the nearve to ask me why ??
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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

In this day and age, a myriad number of employers demand their staff to keep in touch, notwithstanding the holidays. Personally, I consider the disadvantages of current uptrend movement completely outperforms the advantages. In the following paragraph this essay is going discuss its reasons supported with relevant examples.
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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

nowadays, the biggest problem in the world is pollution there are many cases to occur this pollution such as many cars in the street, factories and an increased number of humans also, a decrease in the growing of trees around cities and towns so, in my essay, I will view my points about the important to plant trees
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Topic: a great city should not be confounded with a populous one. Discuss the above statement and give your own opinion

Woman with really low voice tell us about, how synthetic biology can improve our health, food and materials. She means, that science has advanced far in this area, and we do not should be worried, and that is right! Nowadays hard to imagine without synthetics because nature elements not always effective, for example: insulin, which support life for millions people on Earth, is made with help modern technology, is made with help cows, from the waste of which medicines are made. Biology and chemical is true difficult sciences, but humanity is improving its skills and capabilities in this. Society is not doomed.
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male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.

This line chart depicts ratio of subscriptionssubscribtion between men and women from 1980-2010 in the gym .it is clear from the graph that there was a contradiction in the percentage between a gender.
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Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree?

This line chart depicts ratio of subscribtion between men and women from 1980-2010 in the gym .it is clear from the graph that there was a contradiction in the percentage between a gender.
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Some people think that a sence of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Gobalization led many parents concern about their children when they grow up. Some believe that it is importance to invite children join in competition, while some believe participating is vital ability. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be outlined in details before the conclusion is reached.
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The rising levels of congestion and air polution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on whether people should be encouraged to utilize more public transportation rather than using their private vehicles as private car ownership is considered the culprit of traffic jams and polluted air. In my viewpoint, I totally agree with this measure because of the following reasons.
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IELTS essay, topic: Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home, why and what are the advantages/disadvantages? Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

My favorite English film is “Dead poets society”. Author scenery and cameraman did beautiful work, you are immersed from the first minutes in icily atmosphere college of mans. Main personage, Neill Perry, suffers from parental abuse, they do not allow him to open up in art, to open up in theatre. Friends try to help him, crate poet society, where they meet to take their minds off their conservative studies, but father is word for Neill much more important. Dad, having put an end to the career of an actor, encouraged Neil to do something terrible: to commit suicide. The film ends with the dismissal of the college teacher, the main mentor of the Perry, but all those involved in the society of the dead poets will never forget their mental mentor.
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A growing number of people feel that natural areas should not be exploited by people, and that they should be left as they are, while others argue that humans must use this land to satisfy their various needs, including farming and building. discuss both the views and give your opinion?

Many people believe that untouched virgin lands should be commercialised while other feel those area should be untouched. Human demands are never ending and the exsisting resources are scarce which would require more and more exploitation of land to fulfil the needs,however I strongly believe that using entire land will leave future generation with nothing but over exploited resources.
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In some countries young people move in their own homes in early twenties, in other countries they live with parents longer. What do you think, do the advantages of living alone outweigh the disadvantages?

İn recent years, Many different cultures are getting altered day by day. This might affects directly youth generation. Some suggestions have shown that having both advantages and disadvantages.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I had lunch at roughly 1:30 pm after waking up around 1 pm. I ordered Katsura curry and gyoza at fukutontei ramen. I finished my tasks when I got home, which included sweeping the floor and doing washing. I worked to Pullman on the Park for my shift. I received this shift as my last from this place. I had worked for 9 shift continuously. I had to provide food and drinks for 300 people at the children charity network. Tony, a school friend of mine, and I had to work together. Tony and I headed to a bar after finishing our work. In Australia, I had never previously drank beer. I drank both furphy and IPA beers.
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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for a child having a larger number of toys?

Some people buy numerous number of toys for their boys and girls for playing. While some people, including me, think it is waste of money. I think the drawbacks of it would outweigh any advantages. In this article I will discuss the pros and crons of this issue.
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With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas?

With the industrial revolution is increasing，people have to boost their requirements of oil and gas.There are still many remote and untouched places to be offered.People have no choice but to face the problems about double-edged sword.I absolutely think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.It is not clever and they just look ahead too much.
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In many countries household waste e.g food packaging is increasing day by day.What are the reasons ? How can this problem be solved

The difficulty regarding imposing higher taxes on convenience food is that it will have a harmful effect on the homeless and impoverished families for whom, fast food chains might actually be the only place to eat warm although unhealthy fast food. With an increase in cost of living, malnutrition is still a common problem. Thus, if the prices of even the cheapest products from the menu rapidly increase, then the homeless will be able to afford less food than normally they purchase.
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