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What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice

there are several discoveries in the last century in my country which helps to improve the living standards of people's lives and make them more easier. Discoveries such as the telephone and the advancement in the medical field that have proven to be the most important for shaping and changing the life of the community. However, I believe that the most benefical discovery is the easy access to the internet facility for the common man.
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There should be laws to control the amount and the type of violence shown on television programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people argue that the amount and type of violence displayed on television programs should be ruled by the law, but I believe that people have a right to watch what they want.
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and measures are required.

There are 4 pie charts, that represents demographic changes that may happen in Italy and Yemen within 50 years.
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and measures are required.

The four pie charts illustrate the proportions of 3 groups of ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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In many countries, people throw away a lot of food from restaurants and shops. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

Nowadays, there is a big issue with wasting food. The food older than its expiry date is not allowed to be sold anymore, which leads to a lot of food that is thrown away. It is agreed that this is a waste of food. Analysing the quality of the food and the l
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some people believe that the extinction of animals is a natural process and human should not intervene. Do you agree or disagree?

This graphic shows changes in the consumption of 3 food types between 1975 and 2000. Products are fruits, sugar and ice cream.
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Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities, which are becoming overcrowded. What are the reasons for this movement to cities and what are the effects?

the bar chart illustrates the outcome the survey on the limited age of people in different of European countries and shows which is the effective solution that has an impact on climate change .
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Countries such as China, India, and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact, many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some suggestions to address this problem

The problem of increasing number of population and limited natural resources in some countries was always debatable and now has become more controversial. Some specialist believe that available mineral deposit are less according to the populance and this will be the major issue for the survival of the human beings. In m opinion there are various causes behind the notion and in upcoming paragraphs i will discuss the possible reasons and their solution and thus leading to a logical conclusion.
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Nowadays, governments are trying to encourage people to use buses or subways for their daily travel. What are the advantages of forms of public transport like these?

nowadays, society is growing day by day, that development brings a lot of gain but also leaves many pain. For example, places where there is good economic development, often there are many people living there. That's definitely a good thing, because the more people living there, the more human resources there will be, but with it comes traffic congestion. because the large the number of people, the greater the number of vehicles. that's why goverments are trying to encounrage people to use buses or subways for their daily travel, because this help reduce traffic congestion and save more time. Cost to use buses and subways also much cheapter compare to cars or motocrycles. Not only cheap and save time but also bring safety for persons. Therefore, busses and subways is the right choice that the goverments have set
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The pie chart illustrates the important causes that lead the agricultural land to become less productive, and the table gives information about three areas that got affected by these causes in the 1990s period.
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Some people believes that children`s time outside of school should be fill with schedule activities such as art and music classes and sports others feels that childern needs free time to play and relax discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

childrens should need free time to play and relax before engaging in applyart,music and
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Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, English, French, Japanese, Chinese, etc have been really popular. They are commonly used at everywhere in the world, especially English. That makes children have to know a foreign language if they want to become a global citizen. According to this, I don’t agree that school should not force children to learn a foreign language.
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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open space in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A widely discussed problem in our country is building houses or planting trees on vacant place. The following paragraphs discussed whether agree or disagree and reach a reasonable conclusion.
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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children, Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couple who decide to do this.

Married couple deciding not to have children's trend is increasing. although world is already over populated couples decision is accepatable for sometimes, couples feeling lonely to here old age to made this decision. in my opinion merits of this notion outnumbered its demerits.
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Human activity has had a negative impact on planet and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others think actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

One of the serious violation in academic fields is plagiariasm. Stealing a person's idea is a crime which violates the copyright laws.  In addition, It is a kind of cheating,on the other hand,it is not morrally right. Furthermore, Plagiariasm will hurt the relations between the professors and  the students. Consequently, there are many platforms used by professors to check plagiariasm.So, it is essential for students to write using their own words, opinions, etc. Hence,making an hounest attemps is confirmed in every level of education. Although plagiariasm is forbidden by law, there are some reasons  such as poor-time management skill, lack of sources and importance of high grades for students to plagiarized.
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Some people feel that manufacturers and have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

it is commonly suggested that industries and shopping stores are liable to decrease the quantity of packaging of products, while others believe that clients should restrict consumption goods with overusing packages. in my opinion, I believe that although customers can avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging, overall the manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce this huge use.
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Crimes and other kinds of information on the television and newspaper have bad consequences. This kind of information to be restricted to be shown in media. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

I am more inclined to think that not everything must been shown on TV or given by newspaper , because our life is very crowded and stressed without it.It is good that people needs and has rights to be informed about news,about what is happening in the world,but producers must make it as profesionally,to not affect in people's emotions and physology.I think so mass media has important effect to people,and must realised to have health and adecvaute social.Crime and informatiin like this keeps everybody scared and it will give bad result.
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Some parents but their children whatever they ask for , and allow their children to do whatever they want . Is this a good way to raise children ? What consequences could this type of parenting have for children as they grow older ?

The line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide production per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 40 years. In general, the most CO2 emissions during this period are caused by the UK residents, although people who lived in Portugal caused the least air pollutant by a growing trend.
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Many People say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. Use specific reason and example to support your answer. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

globalization is the term of modern life for these decades and the variety of industries has a worldwide effect . some people believe that they are having downdraws of the environment . I disagree with that and in this essay , I will give a reason and support my opinion .
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In many places, the crime rate is increasing. the causes of increasing crime? What is the best way to deal with this problem?

Now days the world develop rapidly, and at the same time the rate of crime number also growing fast. Some people might get confused and wondering why this happened. To my personal opinion, the main reason will be as the electronic technology more convenience in the day life, more young teenagers start to touch and learn something they shouldn't see at the age. The current age stage of most teenagers are starting build their world view and being impulsion. So they might got the wrong messages from some rough stuff videos or websites online, which could stimulate their mind and made them to copy the same react to response things. So the juvenile crime increas rapdily.
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